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Payal

@Grenade

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
3 words😛
Just 3 words to say : I Loved It!⭐️

Brilliant piece
Awesome portrayal
A wondeful treat to read!😃

Loved the depth you gave to emotions and also the rising intensity from sleeplessness to Acid Poured Heart across those 3 years 15 days😳

Hoping to read more from you

Love,
Mahi❤️

MAHI!
Thank you so much!
I've read your comment at least 20 times. You have no idea how hard I'm blushing right now!😆
I'm so glad you liked it! 😳

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Payal

@Grenade

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: poppinss
Wow grenade. That truly was amazing! Love your writing.

Thank you So much! I'm glad you liked it! 😳

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Payal

@Grenade

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Beautiful os

Thank you dear! 😳

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Payal

@Grenade

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Shree06
beautiful update...👏
loved it ...😊😆

Thank you! 😳

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Payal

@Grenade

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik
Beautiful👏

Thank you! 😳

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

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+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

So beautifully expressed! The pain, the angst, the sadness - wonderful! Really enjoyed reading this piece. :)

Good luck for your exams.

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Anupriya

@shinegirl100

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

heyy... u described the pain the guilt.. in shravan very welll... it was tooo gud... 3 years is long wait and they waited for each other... the os was beautifully written... hats off to u.. it was a n ice feeling when i was reading it.. pagal h... shravan.. pehle bol deta... itna wait nhi krna padta... and yeah i loved it when she said... but i still hate u... it was tooo, cute

with loadss of love

anupriya❤️