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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

Amazing👏👏! Shravan's angst got tears to my eyes. And I love the ending where he says its only a start. Please write more



Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Grenade

Inne saare comments?😲
Such kind words!!
*hyperventilates*
*faints*


That's less my dear!
You deserve more😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: EasternViolet.

Damn! This is really good!

Another separation of them but they understood how much they need each other.

You should definitely write more. Good luck for your exams :)



Thank you SO much!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Loved it.

I loved how you used references like in McD you used HAPPY MEAL and in the ending UNBLOCKED.
Best of Luck.

-Mitali❤️



Were they? Thank you! 😃I was kinda skeptical about using them 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Vishakha2092

It's sooo beautiful!!!...

Wonderfully written...👏
His angst...his guilt...that pain... beautifully brought out...
Do write more...
Thanks for a beautiful OS



Thank you SO much, Vishakha!
I would definitely write more.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sapphire3

A beautiful piece!!!!!
Loved it to core
Shravan failed attempts to apologise...and in the last she UNBLOCKED me!!!
Each and everything is beautifully penned.
Do write more
Good luck for ur exams!!

Take care
Priyam


OMG!
Thank you so much for your kind words!😳
Will surely write more! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Beautifully written
You have depicted Shravan's thoughts and what's in his heart very amazingly



Really?
Thank you so much!😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: --fero--

Damn this is really good yaar



Aww Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Zenab78

It's was beautiful
He mer her at McD after long time and couldn't control
last part she unblocked that was good
Loved it


Hey Zenab!
Thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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How did I miss this?
It's fabulous!
Loved it 👏
Do write more often!
🤗

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