The love challenge: A ShraMan OS

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Shivangi

@Vishakha2092

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho
I loved it to the core😳
The straight forward and daring Sumo and on the other side humara brainless oxford graduate was a treat to read.
I loved the last lines said by Shravan specially.

Awesome write up and beautifully penned.

-Mitali❤️

Thank you so much Mitali!!...🤗

I so want Sumo to knock some sense into him...

As of now shravan is being so dumb...

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Shivangi

@Vishakha2092

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: andy1245
vry nice plz pm me whn u cont

Thank you dear...will definitely pm you if I continue it!

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Amazing update
Shravan's daydreaming is really awesome and hilarious
They really love to challenge each other
Want to see what will Shravan do now to stop Suman's marriage and get back in his life????
Update soon

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Amazing..
Shra day dreaming and sumo scolthim..
Superb..
Challenge...interesting..
Love it..

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Namrata91

@Namrata91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

loved it... sumo at fire... bichara shravan schie idiot he
nc one Dr
ty for p.m me

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Its soo cute...sumo in her full on "THE SUMO" way challenging shravan...loved it

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

always the dhamaka sumo

this is great

totally loved it

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Jannat

@Sana_Jannat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

what A dream! but unfortunately real 😆 Sumo back 👏 ..nice 👏

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Wow Man!! Can these two get anymore cute!! 😳
Her highness Sumo is back in full fiesty tigress form.

I adored that Shravan lost in dreams.
Sumo ne finally sab keh diya. Everything I ever wanted her to say. Her vulnerability was so beautifully penned.
And that 'Ab bhi nahi bologe' was epic.

And Lawyer babu ke dimaag ki batti jali. Why was he moping around instead of getting back his girls!
Better late than never. This is the case of his life now.

Please try to continue if possible. Would love to see Mr.Smartypants trying to break her marriage.

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evaviego

@evaviego

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

AMAZING OS yaar...

beautifully written... The dreaming shravan and the whole convo was was ❤️

and this is my fav dialogue...

Originally posted by: Vishakha2092

But his reply gave her all the assurance that she needed "Don't worry my lord! The opposition does not even stand a chance. This case and your love both are mine and no one can stop me from winning your heart again"

thank you.. do write more 😊

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