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Posted: 9 years ago
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After looking into her eyes for few seconds, failing to read her, he closes his eyes and takes a deep breath. In the calmest tone possible, he starts, "Sumo, mujhe pct ke baare mein kuch nahi pata tha. Maano ya na maano, yeh hi sach hai."
"TUM mujhe sach aur Jhoot ki pehchan ke baare mein na hi explain karo, toh better hoga"
"Papa ki baat ko lekar naaraz ho na? Sumo meri baat please, samjho. Uss aurat ki koi safarish kare yeh mujhe bilkul bardasht nahi hai. Aur Papa ke khilaf koi kuch kahe, yeh toh hargiz bardasth nahi hai. Tumne papa se Priya aunty ke naam ke tiffin centre..."
"APNI GANDI ZUBAN SE MERI MAA KA NAAM MAT LO!"
Edited by potterginny - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12


Sumo started walking...shravan holds her hand to stop her and said " meri baat sune bina main tumhe nhi jaane dunga"
Sumo : aur mujhe tumhari koi baat sunni nhi hai,

She again tries to move but shravan came and took a stand just before her...face to face...shravan said "lagta hai tumne meri baat suni nhi, maine kaha main tumhe meri baat sune bina jaane nhi dunga "
Sumo replied instantly " maine bhi kaha mujhe tumhari koi baat nhi sunni .,aur kya farak padta hai main tumhari baat sunu na sunu., tum toh wahi karoge jo tumhe karna hai " and again sumo tried to go past him(shravan's right hand side)...anger took place at shravan's face... immediately he moves his right hand towards her and get a hold of her waist and pulled her towards himself colliding her body to himself...her hands on his shoulder and his hands on her waist holding her smoothly trying to not hurt her with his grip..he said " mujhe farak padta hai" 😳 his voice calm and low
Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Shravan in a low tone, "Mujhe farq padta hai, kyun ki baat tumhare hai iss liye farq padta hai, baat kisi aur ki hoti toh koi farq nai padta"

Sumo was astounded by the depth and tone of his voice, she couldn't tear her eyes away from his, she couldn't understand what she saw in his eyes, anger? Hurt? Resentment? And a foreign emotion she couldn't quite decipher. With that she phased out, trying to comprehend what was going on.

Shravan continued, "Sumo mai tumse baat kar raha hoon, please jab mai baat karoon meri taraf dekho, tumhare aankhe mujhe sab bol deti hai, aasani ho jaata hai samjhna jo tum soch rahi ho, aasan ho jaata hai mere liye mera dil khol ke tumhare saamne rakh dena"

Sumo looks in his deep orbs, she started to decipher this foreign emotion, love! Was it love!? Did he still love her despite of everything!

Shravan noticed sumo was now shivering due to the rain and cold winds, he took off his jacket and made an umbrella of sorts by holding his jacket above both of them, he felt like this was their little world, his sumo, him, their heart beats and their love. He felt her shudder still, he came closer and held her tight smug to himself, he could feel her heartbeats against his chest. And he had to admit, he had never felt so peaceful.

Sumo on the contrary felt her feet would give up on her, having him so close, looking at her the way he was, saying things he was, in that tone, made her loose her senses, she was still mad at him, but she just couldn't get herself to be angry at him, this, him, her, here, him holding her like his life depended on it made her feel things she never felt before.

The end!


Precap:
Shravan asking suman, "Do you trust me"
Suman wanting to push him away, but his voice full of agony and pleading in his eyes, "yes I do"
They both move closer towards each other, slowly but surely, even if this is wrong, it feels too right to let go.

Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Episode end ...will be on orion last post Above...its 10:25
@orion..you hv to end the epi
Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Episode end ...will be on orion last post...its 10:25

I I ritu! I'll do the end and the precap, you guys can add to the precap if you wish😃
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Episode ended ...i missed the fun 😭 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
@priyam
time ended but episode is still going on to maintain the continuity 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Zoya,ritu 🤗
Superb
Hatts off
You guys are better than cvs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --fero--

Zoya,ritu 🤗
Superb
Hatts off
You guys are better than cvs

Aww! Thanks Fero🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Oh no! Missed this
Brilliant plot Fero⭐️
Touching writing Zoya, Yagneshri and Ritu di!😳
Awesome work guys!😃

Totally missed it
But loved the idea and the way you put it😳

Zoya : Am a fan of your writing now!
Yagneshri: Good connects and portrayal dear!
Ritu di: Loved your chotusaa part

If it happens aage, I wanna take part for sure!😆

Fero, that edit is too good yaar!⭐️
Matlab for a second I was Like yeh scene kab hua
Then realised it's the rainy BG😆
Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago

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