ShraMan SS ~ The Story Of Us~ Chap. 2 is up

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Hey everyone!😊
I am Malaika, i have been on this forum for quite too long and have fallen in love with all the writers out there. I love ya all.❤️ So i just decided to try something myself but i am not so sure of how it came out😆. the storyline is completely different from the show. I basically started to write it on another couple but stopped in the mid. So i just continued the same writing. It would be of 3-4 parts i guess. I am not so sure so i just decided to label it as an SS.
I have made some changes to the basic story and relations b/w the characters.

1. There is no Ramnath and Nirmala wala chakkar. Its free of that and so Shravan's character will come out a bit differently.

2. Suman's Parents are dead and she was bought up by her Nanu ie. Raguwar Tiwari, who died when Sumo was 17.

3. Preeti is not associated with Sumo as a cousin or sister. She is just an amazing friend to her.

4. Shravan here has pursued his dream as an architect, but his loyalty to law remains.

5. Sumo here is an artist and not a chef.

That was all i think as for now. i do hope you'll like it. Here you go:

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The Story Of US

Suman's POV

Here I am once again, standing by the window looking out at the city and wondering about HIM. Well more than him, wondering about US, about who we used to be and about who we wanted us to be. US' is a huge word. It's funny that though it have only two alphabets, it sounds so strong, so promising. It doesn't matter now, does it? Sighing, I shook my head. I really need to get him out of my head.

And what about your heart, Sumo? My conscience retorted.

Suman!' I muttered and ignored the rest. With time, this is the thing I have mastered. And what I need to master next is control, I still wonder if I'll ever be able to do that. We can control our actions, our reactions, hell we can even control our mind, but what we can't control is our heart. And this is what frustrated me. He seems to be a part of me now. Well, he was from forever. Sigh.

Suman, you do remember what he did right? My conscience spoke again. How can I ever forget what he did, what I did and what WE did.

The ring of my cell brought me out of my own land. I sighed and picked the phone. I smiled wide at the caller ID as millions of memories came crashing down.

Hello?'

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Shravan's POV

We need forty paintings within the next sixty days'; I walked frantically over the same path, waiting for someone to come up with a satisfactory solution. No Artist in town would agree to do this. And I do not want ANY ARTIST, I need someone who is perfect at this. Oh how much I wished my Sumo was here. She would have come up with a perfect solution surely. But only if she was here. And of course she wouldn't have been here as she wouldn't have left at the first place if she loved me the way I love her. Yeah, LOVE her and not LOVED. Love isn't a phase that we reach and leave. It is a feeling that purifies us if we get together with the one we love. And if we don't, then it leaves you haunted. And I am haunted.

"Bhaiya, you do know that no one would agree to accept such huge responsibility, right?" Pushkar peeped in. I know he is right but I can't help it. The situation demands it.

Yeah chote, but we do need to find someone; we don't have much of a choice." I replied back tiredly. I saw him lowering his head and sitting back. He pinched the bridge of his nose. I was about to speak, when Preeti decided to join our conversation.

Actually Shravan, I do know someone, in fact we all know her who'll be happy to do this. Okay not exactly happy, but would definitely do this if we insist'

Confused I furrowed my brows. Before I could speak, I saw Pushkar grabbing Preeti's hand and shaking his head. Preeti spoke something inaudible to him to which he sighed.

"Pushkar, Preeti? Who's she?"

"Suman Tiwari Bhaiya! Our Sumo" Pushkar whispered.

Sumo' I gasped

Before I could comprehend more, Pushkar continued Yeah Sumo and I am gonna call her NOW, okay?"

I just nodded. That was all. My head spinned at the thought of seeing here again but more at the chances of her rejection. She isn't bound to help us, is she?

I still hope she would agree. Yeah I do. I still wish to see her again even after what she did.

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Suman's POV

Please Sumo, Please?" Pushkar nearly begged. I am sure he knew I would give in. I can't say no to him after all that he's done for me in the past.

Suman' I corrected him mildly and agreed on this proposal. So yeah I was going back to India. The place I left years ago because of HIM. The place I lost my Nanu, my only family and my Love to. The place where I buried my dreams of a happy forever with him into. Thought of his betrayal flooded my mind but before they could proceed, I halted them right there, right then.

Sighing for the umpteenth time, I turned around and headed for the bed. It's going to be a long week. I am going to see him again after 8 years. It's a long time which seems longer if it's full of longing. Ha! Time made you a philosopher Sumo. Suman'! I chuckled to myself before turning and flipping of the lights. With the darkness came the dread. Dread to see him again. Even though I haven't seen him in this entire time, I still do know him well. Along with his attachment to the law, he decided to pursue his dream as an architect. I smiled at the faint memory of a 16-year old Shravan, running around to show me the sketch of his dream house. I knew him enough to know that even if it was his dream house, he dreamed it for us. For the both of us. A tear rolled down my cheek.

You can't be weak Suman. You do know very well what he did. He did wrong and does not deservers to be forgiven. He is not even Sorry Sumo, I reminded myself. Beside he isn't Shravan now. He is Shravan Malhotra.

If it wasn't for Pushkar, I would have never agreed to go back. But Pushkar being Pushkar was hell bent on having me to design paintings for whatever house Shravan was building. According to Pushkar, the house, ahan, Home was really special to him. Yeah Home right? so he decided to get a home with someone? i dont care. i told, more reassured myself.

Hell! I'll just do my job and be out of here even before the either of us realize. With my mind clear, I drifted off into a deep slumber.

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That was all. Do leave back your comments and reviews as they'll help me decide whether to continue or not.

Thank You guys for reading it.😊


Love, Malaika


Index:

Chapter 1: Pg# 1

Chapter 2: Pg#1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its amazing yar 👏
I wonder what happened in their past 😲
I really liked the start...plzzz continue this
Its damn gud 😳
Update soon
Can u plzzz pm me when u update?
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sounds amazing
you have to continue
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This was really interesting:)
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Hello everyone. 😊
thank you to all those who read what i started.😳 And a bigger thanks to those who commented. i am really sorry for posting it this late but there was a reason.
i completed the story but the something went wrong with my laptop and i lost all of it. So it took me so long to write it again.😭
i do hope you'll like it.
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Chapter 2
Sumo's POV

Two Days later, I have boarded my flight that would take me not only to India but to my past as well. After I lost my everything to the country, I moved to Paris with all the fortune my Nanu left me with. I pursued my interest in arts and enhanced my skills in painting. Time gave me fame and so I settled there only. If not for Shravan's betrayal, I would have never moved here even after losing my Nanu. With that my mind drifted off to the night we all anticipated back then . And for the first time I allowed it to.

*8 years back*

Are you coming or shall I leave alone?' a desperate Preeti shouted for the umpteenth time. Coming' was the only word that escaped my mouth each time. I swear I heard the stomping her feet irritated.

What? I know what you must be thinking. I am a spoilt brat because of whom here friends have to wait. No but yes. I wasn't taking long; it was the occasion that forced me to. Yes, it was my very own Prom Night. After Nanu's death last year, it is the first thing that had got me this excited.

Looking for the last time at my reflection in mirror, I ran downstairs as fast as these heels allowed me to. I stopped right behind Preeti, her back to me. She turned around, frown visible at her face. Before she could say a word, I enacted, Preeti, Ive been standing here from ages.'

However it was useless, like always she knew I was lying. She always seem to know when I do. We made our way to the car and I took the charge to drive. Did I told you I am very famous for my skillful driving skills. In less than an hour we reached our destination. The dull walls of our college were now shimmering with sparkling lights. The lush green gardens were also given a splash of these lights. And the fountain where I often sat with HIM stood in the middle of the lawn, tall and steady. It was all so beautiful.

I shifted my eyes, roaming it through the huge crowd. I was looking for them, my friends, my squad, and my life. It consists of me, Pushkar, Preeti and... Shravan. Okay. I cant lie to myself. I was looking for Shravan. His height made him so obvious among everyone else. He turned as if sensing me. He always seem to be able to do that. It took him a while only to locate me. But once he did, he looked as if in a trance. But not for a second even did his gaze waver from upon me. It was all it took to have me burning under his intense gaze. But this time, I stared back at him. His silhouette made its way to me. The corners of his mouth twitched, giving him the sexy look, I could die for. Forcing my own self, I shifted my gaze downwards, shamelessly checking him out. He looked so gorgeous in his black Armani suit and the white undershirt. Red tie on his neck and a matching red cloth neatly folded in his pocket. Satisfied, I looked back at him and found him unfinished with his turn of checking me out. I felt exposed and conscious of what I was wearing. After a lot of persuasion from Preeti, I agreed to wear this blood red off-shoulder gown with a deep sweetheart neckline. It did gave a view of my cleavage but it wasn't s**tty. And that is what I loved about it. There was a little sequin work on the hem of the dress as well as the upper part. It was sexy, yet classy. I wore the perfect black heels underneath. Atlast I could match his height to some extent.

In a few strides he was right next to me, close to me. He dipped his head closer, not moving his eyes, unless he was close enough. His eyes then shifted to my lips and he leaned further. I could feel my heart beating inside of me. He kissed the corner of my mouth. His lips lingered longer than it was meant to be. His lips then made their sweet journey from my lips to my ears. you look gorgeous' was all he whispered.

I felt myself going crimson. you look good too' I whispered back.

only good?', he asked, with a playful frown.

yes! Is there something else you wanted to hear Mr. Malhotra?'

yes.' He leaned further until his lips were right next to my ears. your moans and groans as you scream my name, Sumo'

I whacked him hard. I knew he said it only for fun but only if he knew what it did to me.

you'll never change. Hain na?' I managed to say , getting hold on my self.

Nah!" he grinned.

I stepped forward only to be pulled back. I was about to scold him until I saw the seriousness on his face.

Do you want me to?' he asked.

It left me a little bewildered. What?'

do you want me to change?'

I searched his face for a sign of humor but found none. No.' I whispered with all my honesty.

He was about to speak but our moment was broken by coughs. I moved away only to hit something. Pushkar ofcourse. He was grinning like a bear. And same was the case with Preeti. Now I am going to get teased for this whole life. I looked away suddenly more interested in the pretty decorations.

Hey Sumo, don't hide those pretty eyes from me' Pushkar said teasingly.

I am not!' I exclaimed almost reflexively. Woh... haaan, actually I just dropped my earring and I was just looking for it. You know how much I love them naa'

Really?' Preeti chose this very moment to peep in. she moved forward and touched my ears, I think both of them are at the right place.'

My cheeks turned the deepest shade of red and I looked at Shravan for help. But he stood their grinning. I glared at him and his grin only widened. I was about to say something but was cut short by an announcement. They were calling everyone to the main site where they were to announce todays KING AND QUEEN. Shravan looked excited. Ofcourse he would. He was so sure of him winning the tittle. But I wasn't excited a single bit. who would be happy to see her love as someone else's king?

Did I just accept that?

I am sure my face was a sight to see with the dread I felt because Shravan chuckled. Before he could comment further, we were interrupted by a certain Urvashi.

Never before I have been this thankful to her interruption. I was so glad. I turned towards her with a huge grin on my face. Her eyes showed a hint of surprise, at my welcoming smile. She masked it off with a snort and said to me, rather taunted me.

Suman are you out of your mind? Why the hell are you smiling like an idiot?' before I could reply to her harshness, she continued. Anyway I came here to tell you that you could leave after all I'll be soon be titled as the queen and then nobody can stop me from dancing with Shravan' she grinned evily. not even his ownself' she smirked walking off.

I turned around to see Shravan on fire. His eyes said it all. If it was in his hands he would have happily strangled her long ago instead of dancing with her. I chuckled and pulled him inside. I loved this version of Shravan.

Soon enough we were distracted or rather attracted by the announcement being made.

We turned around to see our DJ for the night trying to get attention. Girls and Boys, grab your hearts and focus please. It is the moment you all had probably been desperate for. Right here in my hands are the names of people selected as todays king and queen. But before that let me tell you one thing, the names are choosen not only on how you dressed but also on the way you both look together. So now I am going to announce the names.'

I crossed my fingers. I know I am going to be the one' Urvashi muttered from somewhere close. Every time I hear her voice something sparks inside of me and I just want to throw her out of the window. I might have done that but I felt Shravan's hand crawling on my back, across my waist and settling there. I felt him giving me a squeeze. I turned to look at him but he seemed absolutely heedless of hat he was doing to me. I am sure if it wasn't for the music Shravan would have heard my heartbeat. Ignoring him I concentrated on the DJ now.

okay so the person to be entitled as tonight's king is... oooh... Ladies and gentlemen please applaud for Shravan Malhotra.'

Everyone around us continued with their own sessions of ooh's and aaah's. I gave him a quick hug and whispered congrats in his ears. My lips toughing his earlobe. I felt him shiver and I just smiled at the effect I had on him. He was soon the center of spotlight. He wasn't the type of guy to want this title. But he had his reputation to maintain. Yes that's what he said when I asked him about it. I smiled at the thought. I have no words to explain how much I wanted to be his Queen. Yes HIS QUEEN.

so the queen tittle goes to...' He trailed off only to grin wider, OMG! Its none other than his love, his best friend Suman Tiwari...' He continued about how perfect we looked together and other stuff. But world stopped for me long ago. I was his queen. This was all so much for me to absorb so I stood rooted to my place. i was suddenly lifted off the ground and spun around. I could bet this was Shravan. His scent was enough for me to realize. He and his masculine scent. I wounded my arms around his neck, a huge smile plastered on my face. Placing me down he kissed the extreme corner of my mouth, making me want more. He placed his arm around my shoulders and lead me to the dance floor. In the way I was met by an excited Preeti who told me she has business to deal with Urvashi. I chuckled at her. Suddenly I was hyper aware of Shravans hand of my upper back. Ahan, Bare back!

We stopped at the center of the dance floor with a feet or two between us. We kept staring at eachother. I couldn't even remember the song that was playing in the background. I was so lost in the moment, so lost in him. it was then i realized that a few minutes back, I was called as his LOVE. Were we that obvious?

Breaking my chain of thoughts, he bowed down asking for my hand, his eyes still fixed on mine. I gracefully placed my hand in his and smiled at how it fit perfectly ad if it was meant to be. I could feel heat rushing up my cheeks. Seeing this Shravan frowned a little but I am sure he soon understood what I was thinking because he smiled at me. Not the usual one but the I-know-what-you-are-thinking kind of smile.

With a sudden tug I was in his arms, I gasped at the sudden contact. My chest was pressed hard against his. He placed his other hand on my waist pulling me closer. I let him have his way. He took the lead and I was more than happy to follow. By now the dance floor was fully crowded. We moved with the rhythm. With another twirl, he brought me closer if that was even possible. I looked at his face to see him leaning in. I turned my face to the right because If I wouldn't have then by now his lips would have been on mine. Not that I mind but still I wanted him to voice out his feelings first. I smiled teasingly as I felt his disappointment as he sighed on my neck. I chuckled. But it was soon interrupted as he found his way. I could feel him smile against my skin as my breath hitched. He started to nuzzle my cheeks and my neck. His lips trailed their way from my eyes to my cheeks, down my jaw and then finally to the crook of my neck. There he placed a wet kiss at my tendon before biting it hard. To control the moan that was building up in me I clutched his shoulder harder. He then soothed the area by running his tongue around it and then sucking it off. I knew this was going to leave a mark.

I was soon spun around but this time my back was to his chest. I could feel heat radiating out from his body as I rested my head on his broad shoulders. His left hand crawled up my stomach and found its place immediately below my breast while his other hand trailed the length of my arm. I felt his nose right next to my neck where he inhaled deeply. I gasped at his sudden action. It wasn't the first time , he did that often but something about today made it different. It wasn't the usual innocent inhale, it felt deep and sensual too. His right hand soon found my hand which he brought to his mouth and gently kissed my knuckles before spinning me around and finally diping me down. He placed a light kiss at my collarbone. We were still in each others arms as the crowd clapped. Our trance was broken down.

DJ soon changed the music to a rocking one and Pushkar and Preeti joined us too. The four of us danced together changing partners too. I and Preeti made Shravan and Pushkar to do a couple dance for us. And trust me it was hilarious. I don't remember the last time I was so happy. Today I felt complete and contented. I looked at Shravan to see him dancing freely. I closed my eyes. Today I was happy as well as relieved.

The last time I smiled this truly was decades back when papa bought me a wooden horse on my birthday. It was the last time I laughed so freely. Its very unfair that the good times end so soon while the bad ones last a lifetime. The very next day my parents died in a car crash leaving me in the care of my beloved Nanu. Since then I was afraid to look for happiness. Because with smiles comes the tears. Even today I feared that this wont last long. My bubble of happiness would burst apart and I'll drown down into the sea of misery. And I knew for sure this time I wont be able to swim back to the surface safe and sound. I opened my eyes to look at Shravan only to find his staring back at me. Taking hold of my hand he pulled me aside to a secluded corner.

All well?' he asked with eyes full of concern.

Tears welled in my eyes and I could no longer control myself so I just hugged him close. Afraid he might see my tears I pulled him closer. I didn't wanted him to think I was weak. He rubbed my back soothingly telling me he knew how strong I was. And that was all I needed. After a minute or two I pulled back, wiping my tears with the back of my hands a little roughly.

That's not the way,' he quickly pointed out. I frowned at this and so wasting no more time he leaned in placing his mouth at the corner of my eyes. One by one he kissed off those tears, sucking them.

As he moved back, I glanced in his eyes and found them full of care, concern and... Love?

This didn't came as a revelation to me. Its just that he had always masked his emotions too well.

Lets go.' He whispered taking hold of my hand and moving. Quickly I pulled him back. I needed to do this.

No Shravan, please take a moment and promise me this?' I said.

He gazed deep in my eyes before whispering Anything Sumo' his voice came as a husky whisper.

First say you wont interrupt me and let me finish what I am going to start.' To this he only nodded. Getting the cue I continued.

Promise me this Shravan, that no matter what you wont leave me, that you'll stand by me forever', To this he nodded and so I continued,'... but if God forbid fate should step in and it forces us into goodbye, then you'll leave without hurting me. You wont hurt me Shravan.', he opened his moth to say something but I shook my head and continued and if we wont be together in future, then you wont forget me. You'll show your children my pictures and when they'll point to it you'll tell them my name. you'll tell them how the crowds went wild and that I hope they'll shine like stars. You will right?' I asked with hope in my eyes

He just looked into my eyes intensely. Slowly he raised his hands to cup my face and then he leaned in. I knew what was about to come but this time the confession didn't mattered. He stopped as our noses touched. He kept on gazing in my eyes as if looking for permission. In return I closed my eyes. Anticipation filled me. Taking it as a yes, he leaned further. He sighed as his lips made contact with mine. He caressed my mouth with his. I kissed him back. My hands found their way to his neck as I deepened the kiss. He took my lower lip between his and gave it a little tug. I moaned at this. His hands left my face and trailed their way down my back. He placed his one hand on my bare waist and with the other he explored my body. From the side of my waist they crawled upwards and lingered at the side of my breast. Then they made their way back down to my hips, pulling me flesh against him. the kiss that started out to be a slow one was soon full of passion. Through the kiss I felt his hunger and knew he held back for as long as he can.

I was brought out of my trance as the hostess shook me telling me the flight is about to land. Pulling down my glasses I waited for the plane to land. This was indeed going to be eventful.


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Love,

Malaika😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Can't wait for the next chapter ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What the Hell? I haven't seen this post before
Girl First Chapter was Amazing.
The second one is absolutely treat to read
I am loving it the way you are going with both the POVs👏
So both love eachother,but something has gone wrong which made them one had betrayed the other, Interesting 👍🏼
Shall we gonna get Shravan's POV as well for prom??
Girl what happened than??
Suspense is killing me dude.
Update next chapter ASAP😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Malaika,
Smoochers for you. Where were you hiding your talents for so long. Girl this is too good. Cant wait for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Malaika finally an update *sighs*
U know everytime u commented on my story i wanted to ask when r u going to update this??
It was soo sooo beautiful. ❤️
The prom night , shravu king and sumo his queen
Everything was so dreamy
And the kiss ...haye ❤️
Hugs for this chappy 🤗
Loved it !!!
Plzzz next one soon ...ha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its mind blowing
Brilliant work
Both chapters are amazing they parted away I am waiting to know update soon and if possible pls PM me 😊

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