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Posted: 9 years ago
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Holla🤗
I am here with an update. Long wait huh? Weakness makes you do stuff you don't wanna.So since I am almost okay with my hand also working better than befor I thought of writing the first chapter.I wrote it in the morning itself but then dozed of for long 4-5 hours(SleepyPsycho after all).Thank you for all the amazing responses I got just through the teaser.
No proof read.
Here it goes:
Chapter 1
Ramnath and Tiwari Ji share the relationship of a teacher and a student where Ramnath knows Tiwari Ji's family and vice versa but Shravan and Suman do not know each other as they study in different states.

"Toh Tiwari Ji yeh case toh complete ho gaya but ek baat hai joh mujhe aap see karni thi" Ramnath said
"Haan bolo Ramnath?"Tiwari Ji asked
"Voh kya hai na Shravan aaj finally Mumbai see vapas aa raha hai aur apki naatin Suman Bangalore see" Ramnath said twisting his hand
"Haan"Tiwari Ji said confusion clearly evident in his voice
"Toh aap aur mein ek doosre ko kayi saalon see jante hain yaani huamre parivaar bhi toh mein soch raha tha ke Shravan ke liye Suman see zyada koi aur acchi ladki nahi milege. Toh kya kehte hain aap?"Ramnath asked curious
"Arey wah Ramnath yeh toh tum sahi keh rahe ho mein aaj hee yeh baath ghar vaalon aur Suman ko bata deta hoon"Tiwari Ji said happily
"Toh Tiwari Ji rishta pakka?"Ramnath asked with a smile on his face
"Haan" Tiwari Ji said


Malhotra Mansion

"Shravan mera beta kitna patla ho gaya hai,khayal nahi raktha apna?"Nirmal asked feeling Shravan's stomach and creasing his face
"Maa aisa kuch nahi hai,bas aapke haatoh ka khaana nahi mila naa isleye" Shravan announced giving a side hug to his mother
"Ab chalo agar maa-bete ka hogaya toh mein Shravan see baat karoon?" Ramnath asked giving a short laugh
"Papaaa" Shravan said bending down to touch his father's feet
"Aree idhar nahi idhar aa" Ramnath said spreading his arms to hug his son
Shravan and Ramanah shared a hug.Nirmala left announcing that she was going to the kitchen to cook his favorite 'sev ke sabji'.


"Haan papa kahiye aapko kya zaroori baat karni thi?"Shravan said getting curious
"Voh beta aise baat hai ke tum Tiwari Ji ko jaante ho naa?"Ramanath asked
"Haan papa aapke guru na?"Shravan said
"Haan"Ramnath said
"Toh?"Shravan was now confused
"Shravan beta you will have to marry Suman,granddaughter of Tiwari Ji" Ramnath declared
"But Papa..." Shravan tried to protest
"But Vut kuch nahi. I have promised Tiwari Ji and my decision is final"Ramnath announced and left the room

'Pata nahi ab kya hoga?Papa ke baat mein taal nahi sakta na mein yeh shaadi karna chahata hoon! Pata nahi voh Tiwari Ji ke granddaughter kaise hogi?Kya voh mujhe samajh payege? What a problem! Shravan thought to himself cursing his fate

Tiwari Killa

"Suman mere bete kitni kamzoor ho gayi hai,meine jo papad achar pack kiye the voh nahi khaye?" Mami asked creasing Suman's hair
"Mami aisa kuch nahi hai infact dekho toh aapke papad aachar ke vajha see kitni moti hoo gayi hoon!" Suman said with a pout
"Suman beta kaisi hai too?"Tiwari Ji asked voice full of concern and face full of glow
"Nanu mein toh theek hoon aap abhi tak soye nahi?"Suman asked knowing that this time in the afternoon was booked for her Nanu's sleep
"Beta mujhe kuch zaroori baat karni thee."Tiwari Ji said now in a serious tone
"Khaiye na Nanu" Suman said
"Idhar nahi mere kamre mein aa" Nanu said and left for his room followed by Suman

"Jee kahin Nanu aap kya kehna chate the?"Suman asked confused and scared
"Beta tum Ramnath Malhotra ko jaanti ho na?"Tiwari Ji asked
"Haaan Nanu Ramnath uncle vohi successful lawyer hain na jo aapke sabse ache student the?"Suman said
"Haan"Tiwari Ji said
"Toh?"Suman was now confused
"Suman beta you will have to marry Shravan,son of Ramnath Malhotra" Tiwari Ji declared
"But Nanau..." Suman tried to protest
"Par var kuch nahi,Shravan see zyada accha ladka tumhe kahin nahi milega aur meine Ramnath ko bhi vadaha kiya hai"Tiwari Ji announced and left the room

"Pata nahi ab kya hoga?Nanu ke baat mein taal nahi sakta na mein yeh shaadi karna chahati hoon! Pata nahi voh Ramnath Uncle ke beta kaisa hoga?Kya voh mujhe samajh payega? What a problem! Suman thought to herself cursing her fate.

Hope you liked it.Do leave your precious likes and feedbacks also what you think will happen now.
I will try updating faster and also my Reaction GIFs are coming up slowly slowly.
Thank You.

-Mitali❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Interesting concept
Loved this chapter
Do update soon
I am eager to know how you will plan their Frist meeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
wah abhi se mentality milti hai agay to aram se settle hojain gaay heheehh
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Mittu 🤗
Hmm so nanu n ramnath- 'Baat hamari pakki hai'
Loved the concept 😛
Nice chapter 👍🏼
Excited to know how the story unfolds
Happy to know you are recovering fast
Take care 😊
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
both are accepting proposal for their family..it's interesting
do continue soon liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Loved it
So excited for the first meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Interesting!! The chapter was really nice

Waiting to see how this current situation unfolds into love in future. Excited to read their journey of love n togetherness

Fanx 4 pm dr

Love
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
amazing start
absolutely brilliant
cannot wait to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
loved d start👏
waiting for shraman meet😳
continue soonish😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
mittu!!🤗🤗

finally an update!! and its definately holding my interest on upcoming parts😳 dono bacche pareshaan hogaye shaadi ki baat sunke😆 well loving it ❤️
Ab next update jaldi dena(jaldi matlab jaldi!!)😛

Lots of love
Apeksha❤️

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