Twisted fates- sequel to ek chhoti si love story

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

So finally they are united

It was lovely

I loved sumo's forgiving nature

And proposal in a hospital is quiet unique

Do write more

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Eeshaal

@Eeshaal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Priyam , superb I wish kuch aisa writers Bhi likhe 🤗 , was waiting for an update from you , luv it .
Thankyou

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Eeshaal
Priyam , superb I wish kuch aisa writers Bhi likhe 🤗 , was waiting for an update from you , luv it .
Thankyou

Awww that so sweet of u... i'm flattered 🤗
Thanks a lot dear

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

@manyata- thank u
U liked proposal in hospital?? ... .thanks 😳

@pinkky.padda- tysm yar

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indranigupta

@indranigupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Priyam lovely

You know this Natasha thing can happen definitely

But, i wouldnt want an accident to Sumo... that is too easy way to resolve the problem. He has to face the conse

Though your rendition was brilliant

Super duper👏

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: indranigupta
Priyam lovely
You know this Natasha thing can happen definitely
But, i wouldnt want an accident to Sumo... that is too easy way to resolve the problem. He has to face the conse
Though your rendition was brilliant

Super duper👏

Thank u sooo much indrani , ur appreciation means a lot to me 😊
It was just a story so i made it a little dramatic, even i dont want an accident to sumo which will force him confess his feelings.. that will be too easy and cliched.

P.s.- Return of Mr.Berry as per ur wish 😉

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

What a brilliant work👏

I loved it to the core.

Loved how you described a broken Shravan and Suman.

Could actually feel the pain and The hospital confession was classic.

Mr Berry ki toh 😡

I so want a Sumo accident in th show.

Do write more and thank you for the PM.

-Mitali❤️

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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Priyam firstly thank you so much for the pm...absolutely brilliant 😃 loved reading it ...why does your stories end up in hospital 😆😆 Doc sahiba just kidding ... loved the way you described their emotions and next time plz make a ss na 😃 always enjoyed your fiction ...keep writing more, waiting for the next story ...Till then take care.

Edited by pearl100 - 9 years ago

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Lovely update
They both love to hurt each other
Shravan finally knows truth
Such a dramatic confession in hospital
Awesome

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Apeksha

@ApekshaM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

oh god priyam! itna sab ek hi part mein!😲 if this os gets to cvs' hand then they would surely drag this to atleast 6-7 episodes😆

awesome OS👏 shravan is a lawyer so he believes more on solid proofs. kamini done a very great job for the 1st time with respect to shraman😆 well done baby!🤪

chalo der aaye durust aaye.. finally comfession ho hi gaya.. that too in unique way! overall loved it👍🏼 and keep writing more..😃

lots of love
Apeksha❤️

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