ShraMan OS: The Villain

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astonm

@astonm

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ---awe10some---
Hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣
Was laughing like crazy while reading
Villainous shadi shuda chua!! Buahahaha. 😆
Sumo is poori pagal [;-)]
N our shravu so cute 😳 😳
Loved it just like your other works
Fanx 4 pm dr
P.s: Cn we get an os with a pregnant sumo with crazy mood swings n cravings with shravu n malhotra family bearing her tantrums n a delivery scene. Wishing to read smefink similar after reading ur previous os. That family scene got me awwed 😊
Just a randow wish by a fan of urs

Aw, thanks, I am glad you liked it :) I have a list of ideas for ShraMan because sometimes I think of something and I am like "OMG THATS SO THEM I NEED TO WRITE THIS", and then I jot it down on my phone, so that one is definitely up there on the list, I'll let you know whenI get around to it! :)

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arshiasya

@arshiasya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

[ "Villain?" Shravan laughs. "Sumo, itna chota saa, cute saa toh hai."

"Haan, tumhe toh lagega naa, Qutub Minar kahin ke!"

"Uske aage tum bhi Qutub Minar hi ho." He retorted.

"Toh phir tum Burj Khalifa ho!"]

["Miss Darpok aur uska villainous shaadi-shuda chua."]

my fav lines 🤣

this was so funny and i could imagine them saying and doing what you wrote keep writing always

Edited by arshiasya - 9 years ago

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Omg! This was hilarious🤣

I'm thinking murderer and turns out to be a chuha!

Epic ..

'Tumhari imaginary chue ki patni kaa suhaag bacha raha hoon' this line cracked me up😆

I love your writing! Write more often

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Sanika

@Legilimens

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

This was such a light hearted, funny oneshot Anjali. I absolutely loved it ❤️
If I were in the place of sumo, I would have done exactly the same:p
I have done exactly the same, except for a chuha, it was a lizard. I can totally relate to sumo😆 and there was no shravan😛
You write scenes in such a way that I can play it like a picture in my head. You write in such a way that it is very effortless to read your stories(IDK how to explain this😆), which are always amazing ❤️

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

This was hilarious

I loved their chua chasing wala session

It was a treat to read

Keep writing

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950842

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Love the intensity of your titles and the wierd things it makes me guess before I even read your story 😆😆😆

Awesomeee!! 👏👏👏

Super Duper Mast how you retained their characters and gave them a new dimension ❤️

Fun to read such one shots! And I'm a fluff addict too 😳

Thanks for the pm 🤗

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

"Burj Khalifa" "Chue ki patni ka suhaag" "Miss Darpok aur uska villainous shaadi-shuda chua"

This was so funny but at the same time it was something I could see happening considering their equation. The dialogues were so something that they would say write more please!!!!!!

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Hahahahahah
I love this and evrything you write .
-God bless

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astonm

@astonm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: orion23
Omg! This was hilarious🤣
I'm thinking murderer and turns out to be a chuha!
Epic ..
'Tumhari imaginary chue ki patni kaa suhaag bacha raha hoon' this line cracked me up😆

I love your writing! Write more often

Haha, that's what I was getting at! I was totally dying while writing this, I was like "everyone is going to think I am writing some suspense thriller but nopeee".