~*DEAR DIARY*~ A SHRAMAN OS SERIES- 1) The road not taken - Pg1 - Page 2

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mineforever

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Posted: 9 years ago

Great OS..
do write the next OS soon.. 😊

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ansah

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Posted: 9 years ago

This really was a fab one

enjoyed reading it

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Suzaina

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Posted: 9 years ago

Your last lines!!

I am in love with them

So shravan is waiting for 1 step

I hope she'll take it soon

Keep writing

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potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

Well, you spoke out Shravan's heart very aptly. The whole piece is beautiful. And this thread is bookmarked. I am very glad that we are going to get to read such pieces.
Thank you!.
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Ginny

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Pinkal

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Posted: 9 years ago

Mind blowing... Loved the way u have pin down shravan's feeling... Plz continue soon

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Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing. What goes on in Shravan's mind is beautifully captured. Please do one on Suman too 😳

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

THE LAST LINES ❤️
nikki another masterpiece from u 👏
i just LOVED shravan pov

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hm2630
this was beautiful!

Thank you! 😃😃

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Shravan's unrequited feelings were beautifully penned
Continue soon

Thank you. 😳 Will surely cont soon.

Originally posted by: sapphire3
Simply mind blowing!!! Such a beautiful piece of work. Loved it to bits 👏

Thank u so much! I'm truly glad u enjoyed reading it! 😃

Originally posted by: --fero--
Awww
This is beautiful
Especially that last lines
*999* steps
Superb

Thank u so much! N those last lines, I dunno whenever I see Shravu looking at Sumo with those soulful eyes, I always feel he is just asking her to take that first step... N Namik surely has gorgeously expressive eyes! ❤️

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PALAK19
fabulous...i luv it...plzzz write more on sharman

Thank u! N yeah, will surely write more dear!😳

Originally posted by: shalz_123
Aaaw. Its so dreamy..beautifully written

Thank u! 😃😃

Originally posted by: orion23
This was really good!
Loved it👏

Thank u! 😃😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome..👍🏼

Thank u!!😃

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