Shraman TS : tune jo na kaha Updated pg.2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's on the basis of the recent promo. This is what I want to happen nd may be a lot of u all...


So, here it goes...

As all we know the case is over nd now sumo nd shrawan both becomes frnds. So now wat??? As all know he only stops for the case only so when it's over then all r thinking that he's soon going back to London nd tht's also wat sumo is thinking ri8 now sitting in her room.
"Wo aise kaise chla jayega pr wo rukega bhi kyu pichli baar to case tha isiliye... To wo sach m chla jayega ...Haan to Thik bhi h na jaye mujhe kya ... Pr ... Wo ... Aise... Oh ho is lambu ki wjh se m pgl hi jaungi" said sumi to herself frustrated at the end as this is only way going on in her mind since mami said that now shrawan is going to leave for London soon.
"But wo jayega kyu ab to SB Thik h na mean uske mere beech so Jana kyu h"
"Pr rukega kyu akhir uska kaam h whn wo bhi to dekhna higa use KB tk rukega yhn "
"Pr kam to yhn bhi kr skta h na yhn konsa kam ki kami h aur phir yhn to logo ko jyada jrurt h uske jaise ache lawyer ki"
"Yhn k logo ko ya tumhe"
"Kon bola ????? " she look around to see whose voice was that
"M wahi jiski baat tum maan hi Nhi rhi "
She again look around but she saw no one then she look at her side nd shriek as she saw herself only means her reflection in the mirror who was smiling at her.
" kon ho tum nd yhn kya kr rhi ho????" She asked little scared
"Well hello to u too nd m tum Hun tumahri conscious in normal language tumahra man jiski baat tum sun hi Nhi rahi ho" the image said to her sweetly in starting but get little upset nd angry in the end
"M..Mtlb"
"Mtlb wahi Jo tum smjh k bhi Nhi smjh rhi "
"Huh..."
"Kisi bewkuf ho aur Waise sumo bhari ghumti ho m shrawan aur tumhare baare m baat kr rhi Hun "
"Mere sure shrwan k baare m kyu???"
"Kyuki tun uske baare m Abhi soch rhi thi"
"Haan kyuki wo jaa rha h" sumo said sadly
"Aur tum Jane dogi" her conscious said wid narrowing her eyes
"M kaise roku??? Aur wo kyu rukega"
"Rok ke to dekho"
"Roka to tha 10 saal pehle pr chla gya na" said again sadly
"TB glti kiski thi aur wo upset tha tumse pr ab aisa Nhi h rok lo use"
"Pr wo meri BT kyu manega kbhi Nhi manta"
"Ek baar Bol ke to dekho aur sach m kbhi tumahri baat Nhi Mani aur rhi BT tumhari baat kyu sunega to uska jwb tum bhi janti hi aur m bhi"
"Ah... Woh... Um.. " she can't say anything nd turturn around from the mirror or say her conscious
" muh modne se sach Nhi bdlta sumo ho to behave bhi Waise hi kro bta do use... Sach PURA SACH"
"Pr sune mna kr dia to aur Woh mujhe reject kr dega janti Hun" she said getting tears in her eyes

"Kon tumhe reject kr dega sumo?????" Come a voice from the door
A voice she know by her heart she know who is at the door she hurriedly clean the tears tht r ready to fall so he don't notice
But he already did as he was looking so keenly at her
He comes here to talk to her about something important London he have to go but now that just doesn't sounds r8 so here he is to get the solution but when he comes he saw her saying who mujhe reject kr dega wid tears in her eyes nd he just wants to knw kon nd kyu
He feels a very strange anger nd fierce towards the person who dare to hu her nd mostly b'coz he don't like the idea that she may be well "just may be" like some one nd he don't want to knw about that but her and very tear just make him want to tear through person apart
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely. I rilly liked it n also its title is on one of my fav songs
Plz cntinue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---awe10some---

Lovely. I rilly liked it n also its title is on one of my fav songs
Plz cntinue soon

thank u
Nd sure will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi
Sry first of all nd yup I'm back.
Actually I was a little bsy in work so... Well forget that here is the continution of the TS nd yup this is a 3 shot so there is still a shot left. ;-) ;-) ;-)



Part 2

It's been some days from that room incident when shravan heard her saying about the rejecting thing nd he was doing his best to get the complete matter.

Shravan asked sumo about wat she was saying that day but she always ignore or avoid to ans. Nd now he was fed up nd irritated wid this.
So, he thought she might have someone in her lyf aftr he left nd now he must be not accepting her nd that only thought hurt him deeply as he was madly in love wid her actually he NVR accepted this but he still love her nd always do that after all he loves her to no extent.

Days goes like his some times good nd sometimes bad but thn one day Shravan heard her Chachi saying to Pushkar tht he is going to loose everything b'coz of Shravan so he have to talk to Ramnath. shravan can't believe that his chachi think like this about him so he decided to go back so everyone will be happy. But he have to tell this to suman first his sumo aftrall this is something really big
He reached Tuwari house nd directly goes to sumo's room whr he see mami nd mausi doing some wrk wid Suman so he asked her to talk in private thn hearing that mami nd mausi leaves so they can talk nd b'coz of the Suman get upset.
"Ye kya kuya tumne????" Suman asked
"Kya kiya Mene??" Shravan in and. Asked her
"Shravan tumhe aisa Nhi krna chahiye tha Abhi to wo photos wala kand hua h aur tum ab ye... We hv to be careful mami Abhi bhi Puri trh bhuli Nhi h us baat ko"
"Sumo tumse important BT krni thi"
"Baat to Bd m bhi ho skti thi na aisa konsa paha..." She can't complete bcoz he cut her in b/w
"M London ja raha hu"
"KYA?????" She shouts as she can't believe wat she heard.
"M wps jaa rha hun"
"P...pr k...kyu... ACH...achank ... Me...mera Mtlb ekdum se kyu" she said stuttering in starting but she control herself nd said properly still in shock
"Woh actually..." Nd he told her wat he heard back
She was shocked that would be understatement as she nvr thought Kamini Chachi would say something like this so she knw wat he would be feeling.
She asked him if this is the only way nd whn he said Yes she saw the determination in his eyes so she knw watevr she say or anyone he is not going to listen to anyone as he hv decided so she said OK nd promised him to help him in packing as he wanted tht.
When she reach his home she got to knw tht everyone has gone to a relative's marriage so she nd shravan r alone at home as the servents too r at leave.
She nd shravan have a lot of fun (just like in the show) aftr a lot of msti they start the game of asking que.s nd she was doing the packing wid shravan (he was not injured here) .They already had asked 2-2 que. To each other now was time for shravan to ask Suman his next que. He asked her about the rejected one thing he heard her saying now was the time she she don't know wat to say.
"Bolo sumo kya baat thi wo aur kon rjct kr dega???"
"Wo Kuch Nhi chodo nd kya leke baith gye"
"Are sumo Delhi tumhe na btana hi pad..." He can't complete wat he was saying as his phn strt ringing nd he left the room as his phn was in the living room whr before they were watching movie.
So she take a breathe if relief that for now she don't HV to and. The so-called que. but she wish that to he forget about this as she don't want to ans the que. not now not ever as she knew that she is going to hurt only nd may be she also looses a friend NO not only a friend but her best friend so she just wishes that. As she were thinking Shravan strt shouting her name from downstairs only so she zip the bag as it was all packed nd strt leaving when she suddenly stumble in a shirt which were lying on the floor she cursed him for being careless nd pick the shirt she goes to put the shirt in his cupboard which was now almost empty as his almost things were packed in his bags. She put the shirt as she strt to close the door she saw a drawer was not properly closed so she strt doing it but it was not closing so she open it nd saw that the drawer was also a mess so she strt mendling the things as best as she scan without taking the things in it as she was doing it she was a book was looking very old nd torn from sides so she pull it to look at it. She recognized the book as she hv studied it in school's library so she start thinking wat is this old book is doing here in the drawer then she open the book to see wat is so interesting thing in in tht Shravan still hv this in his cupboard as she strt looking she don't find any thing important or interesting so she just started looking throughly nd saw a folded paper in it . that also looks lyk very old when she open tht paper she knows whose writing is this but then she thinks who had he written a letter nd still don't have been it. So she start reading it nd in seconds she hv tears rolling down her eyes nd as she continue reading she was just ready to burst but somehow she read whole letter nd in just a second she stumbled in her footstep only nd was on her knees before she blink her eyes nd crying really badly but u can't even hear a small sound she was just crying so silently tht u will think that u r seeing a emotional breakdown in TV with mute but then her thoughts nd cloud burst as shravan again strt shouting her name so she finally collect herself nd take the book put that in the drawer nd take the letter nd put in her bag. She go to washroom nd wash her face so he don't git to knw anything.

When she reached in living room she saw everyone was there his family nd her both were sitting there as she was going to ask wats going on here pushkar comes nd take her with him saying that he hv a very important thing to shat with.


To be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting..
Continue soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was really nice
Suman now knows everything
Cant wait to read further

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