Friendzoning - a take for today - OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shravan: You are the one who is late. Not just late by a few minutes but late by half an hour. And then you shout at me. Not fair Sumo

Sumo: Haan I was late. But how could I come ? Both the families are downstairs and keeping an eye on my movements. You gave an impossible task to me. Be happy I could come - der hi sahi...

Shravan: Yeah right. Excuses excuses. Now coming to my fees. Are you sure you will give me what I want ? Or will you wriggle out of it saying it is impossible to give it ?

Sumo: (went absolutely still for a few seconds. Took a deep breath. And then ..): Ask away. I will give the fees.

Shravan (with a smirk) : Haath Aage Badhaao

Sumo was expecting him to step in front and give her a pappi. All day long the pappi has been doing rounds in her head. Preeta is the one to be blamed. And the kitchen scene did nothing to help. And now the guy asks me to extend my hand ? Does he want to kiss my hand ? Fattu Kahin Ka..

Sumo: Why ?

Shravan: See already having second thoughts. Are we ?

Sumo: No way. (Extends her hand)

Shravan extends his hand and holds it just below hers with palm up.

Sumo is now totally frustrated. Will this guy shake my hand now ? Pakka Fattu Hi Hai

Shravan: Promise me. Promise me that you will never leave my side. Come what may. In happy and unhappy times. In anger and in joy. Promise me that we will always stand together. On one side.

Sumo is wondering whether Fattu is actually proposing. She was expecting one Pappi. And this guys wants Pappies daily for lifetime ?? Huh ??

Shravan: Sumo, listen... don't back out now. I was lonely for ten years. Without you as my friend. And I came to know now that you were lonely too. Let us promise to each other today that we will always remain best friends. Till death. Whether you become a food chain owner or I own a global lawyer firm. Whether we get married or not. Whether you are in India or I am in London. Let us promise we will always keep in touch and be best friends forever.

Sumo fainted and Shravan held her hand and pulled her against him. The deal was done. Just need a kiss to seal the deal.

THE END. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is sweet, J! 😳
Suman fainted! 😆

I am expecting something on similar lines...That he'd get her to promise they'd be there for each other always.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg this is so cute
best part suman faints 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

This is sweet, J! 😳

Suman fainted! 😆

I am expecting something on similar lines...That he'd get her to promise they'd be there for each other always.




Thank you.
Faint Nahin Karegi Toh Aur Kya Karegi ?
Expected a kiss on lips. Settled for one in hand and then finally friendship ? Poor Suman 😉

PS: Just wanted to pen this down to see how much overlap is there with the CVs version. For all you know they may go a totally different route. Let us see. 1 more hour to go
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ri21

omg this is so cute

best part suman faints 🤣



Thank you Ri. Do you expect something like this or a totally different version ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@J
your take is the one I would want the most.
Funny, irreverent... What a deal😆
Absolutely Suman like
Write from Shravan's point of view as well
Please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: indranigupta

@J

your take is the one I would want the most.
Funny, irreverent... What a deal😆
Absolutely Suman like
Write from Shravan's point of view as well
Please



Funny eh ? I like it that way. 😆 I wrote this before the episode. In the actual episode Suman did not faint !!

Thank you for liking it. Shravan's POV ? Yeah let me think about it.😉

PS: If you want a proper episode analysis redwine1 has done it yesterday
Edited by JJKKL - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg this was awesome
Suman faints🤣🤣🤣
Seriously 🤣🤣
I loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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She fainted😆
Like literally! I can't even! 🤣

This was too good🤗👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --fero--

Omg this was awesome
Suman faints🤣🤣🤣
Seriously 🤣🤣
I loved it



Thanks Fero.
In the actual episode she looked so dreamy. And her smile while looking at the photo was classic.
Where are the caps ?


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