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sweetmishthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ladoo khaye char ,
Sun sumo yad dila rahu bar bar,
Sev ki sabzi, tere hath ki puriyan
Set kar le 10 bajhe par apni ghadiyan

Pret bhoj PE preeti ka achar,
Pushku bechara pyar ka bemar,
Bhae ,Vandy bhabhi bhi kare tarefein beshumar
Chat PE Ana time PE yar.

Sumo

Chuso aam, Zara sabar toh karo.
Teri fees aj hi hoon layi ,
par sabki neyat yaha khenle PE Ayi.
Chachi Teri phir ghurai ,tu chal mein Ayi...

Lol tell me which line u liked the most it will really make my day.

😊

Edited by sweetmishthi - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetmishthi
Ladoo khaye char ,
Sun sumo yad dila rahi bar bar,
Sev ki sabzi, tere hath ki puriyan
Set kar le 10 bajhe par apni ghadiyan

Pret bhoj PE preeti ka achar,
Pushku bechara pyar ka bemar,
Bhae ,Vandy bhabhi bhi kare tarefein beshumar
Chat PE Ana time PE yar.

Sumo

Chuso aam thoda sabar to karo,sabki neyat khene PE Ayi.
Chachi Teri phir ghurai ,tu chal mein Ayi...

Lol tell me which line u liked the most it will really make my day.

😊

WAH WAH TERA KYA KEHNA👏

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sweetmishthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu100

WAH WAH TERA KYA KEHNA👏

Hiii mannu thank u soo much glad u liked itit 😳

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sweetmishthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayasingh
loved the whole thing...

U did ? thank you... 😳 Actually I was thinking about making it a thread have written such poems before par phir sirf 3 ya char comments hi the 😆 So yeah a little confused.

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sweetmishthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayasingh
loved the whole thing...

Thank u... Amulya ...such commts are really encouraging 😊

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Chaits_04

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow... Kya kehene..👏👏

Even I loved the whole thing.

Still if you want me tell which I liked he most, then there are 2 lines not one...

"Set kar le 10 bajhe par apni ghadiyan.."

And

"Chuso aam, Zara sabar toh karo.

Teri fees aj hi hoon layi ,... "

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is too good!

Likey👍🏼

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sweetmishthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chaits_04
Wow... Kya kehene..👏👏

Even I loved the whole thing.
Still if you want me tell which I liked he most, then there are 2 lines not one...

"Set kar le 10 bajhe par apni ghadiyan.."

And

"Chuso aam, Zara sabar toh karo.
Teri fees aj hi hoon layi ,... "

Thank u ...really tns 4 commenting glad u liked itit 😳

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