ShraMan/NiMik AT#30 - Ek Phool Anek Kaante - Page 99

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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful Loq 👏
He seems at peace at last ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Loq-

Also I want a scene where they are just hugging each other and talking..
Just hugging and talking kay
Something like this for monday's opening scene.Just wrote it right now so forgive the erors.



I held her in my arms and we forgetting our past just stood there, living that moment. There was something about this. Yes, our pasts were ruined but then I don't know why holding her right now was the most important thing for me. I breathed her hair, she smelled of some shampoo lke vanilla and strawberry maybe. But that was not the concern; she was crying and that pierced me more than anything .We had come far from what we were ten years back. We were foes now but again seeing her shattered like that it hurt me so bad.
She sighed deeply, weeping all the while. My t-shirt was getting wet but I did not care. I stayed rooted to the position with my hands on her head comforting her while she had hers near my heart. I did chuckle for a while thinking about my height but then again it was not important.
I registered the last time I saw her that vulnerable .I wanted to comfort her then as well but I just could not. It was strange that I stopped myself but today I wanted to. I followed my impulse reaction and I was glad to be there for her. I felt good knowing that I could be the one to see her cry. I was possessive like that. Maybe I loved her still but then maybe it has faded in the gap that followed. I did not know and honestly I did not care anymore .I quite liked the equation we had now after all it was not awkward and that just made things so much easier for both of us. My thoughts were interrupted when she called out to me.
"Shravan"
I chose to be silent and just hummed.
"I am scared."
I did not know if it was her heart speaking or my conscience with her. I was scared too. Her trust on me, the state of their family; everything depended on me. Although it made me proud for the faith she had in me but scared too because I know expectations hurt. I caressed her hair and replied slowly.
"I promise to make it fine, I promise."I told her as well as myself.
"I trust you."And damn those words she said it again. She trusted me.
In this silent moment of solace between us, I did not know the outcome but one thing I was sure of.
"This is the last time you have tears in your eyes because of this house."I vowed to her silently as we stood there in that posture. Not just her I gave that word to myself too.
Bam!
The realization then hit me. This was all I wanted. This silence to heal my confused state of mind. My muddled state about the case was now crystal clear. I could not afford to lose because I just knew within deep in my heart, I can't see her cry.
Not today. Not any day.


LOQ
This is beautiful 👏👏
When you are free please write some Os's for the forum 😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanika.

Beautiful Loq 👏

He seems at peace at last ❤️



Dude get me this scene and pakka LU with voice notes 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautifully written Loq! Something I want to see for real.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Loq-



Dude get me this scene and pakka LU with voice notes 😆

Yeh kya sammy ka bride tha? 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Fero🤗
In all my IF life,I have seen Bhatakti aatmas, jawani Bhatakti hue kya karegi😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
I guess this week rank will be 3or 4🤔
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: FangirlForever


LOQ
This is beautiful 👏👏
When you are free please write some Os's for the forum 😳😆



Maybe this is the state of mind after Shravan goes to his house back and then to his father.With what it seems he just wants to win the case for her.
I worte it right now.So forgive me😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanika.

Yeh kya sammy ka bride tha? 🤣



Oh wait I dont think I can watch the episode on Monday🤣🤣🤣

Sammy ka bride😲
She will marry a bridegroom .😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --fero--

I guess this week rank will be 3or 4🤔


KYON ??

We were so online this week 😃

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