TS : Moh Moh Ke Dhaage... Part 2 on page 5 :) [COMPLETED]

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.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome..👏

Thanks yaar!! 😊

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.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: dancedanceRR
lovely story! would love to see more of your writings on ShraMan!

Thanks... 😊
Yep... Will write more ASAP!! Can't stop even if I want to... 😛

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.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: orion23
Ah! Lovley👏
Do write more on these two lovelies please😳

Thank you dear... 😊
Definitely 😉

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.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: billo77
Lovely TS Amreen!! It was awsome!! The first part was really good but the second part was just amazing ☺️Please do write more ,your great at reflecting Shraman emotions ...Im going to read it again😳

Thanks billo [is that ur name] 🤣
Oh... I too enjoyed writing part 2 🤪
Of course I will.. Thanks for the lovely response!!

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.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: --fero--
Amreen

Good one

Thankooo 😛

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Akhu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Amazing...superb loved it...nicely written yaar..all the emotions were perfect

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Jamina Mohammed

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Nice Well written I'm so love with Sharman
Do write more

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ANSHEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

well so luv my nanu playing cupid in ur story .any ways dese two definitely need a cupid given dere egoistic temperament😡 hmmm s sumo while thinkin about shravan made all his fav dishes hwww sweeet and see naughty and sly nanu he pointed out so tactfully well the whole scene of shravan tryin to make prasad😉 for hisPETPUJA hahaha sooo funny😆😆luvd d obvious concen of sumo at seeing him getting burnt and yeah dat ice pack scene fantastic ahem... ahem😳😳☺️well the way dey both realized dere luv but yet were feeling guilty bcoz they thought otherwise for other ant the final blurting out of feelins awsummm👏