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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Hey, wonderful beginning dear!👍🏼

It's heartbreaking really what happened to the couple.
Cont soon...


thankk youu 😃
you'll get to know it soon.
nxt part tomorrow morning 😛
- kriti :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: vidhu1

hey kirti..
Wonderful beginning dear!!
This is soo nice..i mean gr8 concept afterall!!

Do continue soon...plzz be fast m waiting!!
I srsly m a reader who cant wAIT for updates.. specialy for the ones i lIke to read!!
Umm..i hope you to get nice response this time...i can really understand your griveance on not getting nice response!!
But dont worry...you will get nice response!!
ANd yaaa plzzz do continue it!!

One more thing can i get a PM?
😛 😃


hey vidhu,
Thanks for the compliment. 😳
I wrote part2 but need to make some changes in it so by tomorrow morning it will be up. 😃
actually I did feel bad bcoz we all are taking efforts to write and there was hardly any response, yep I hope more ppl do like it
Don't worry I'll continue pakka
PM...ummm...okayy 😆 😉
- kriti :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Aayushi15

Very nice. The first chapter is quite interesting.
Please update soon


thanks aayushi 😃
tomorrow morning pakka 😆
- kriti :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Something new. Its nice Continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Ri21

Something new. Its nice Continue soon😊


Thankie 😛
I'll post tomorrow morning 😃
- kriti :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Lovely..
Continue soon...


Thankie 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
It's good..Shall wait for next part

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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Shravan came out his trance
The judge asked if they are sure about this decision, suman nodded and shravan took a pause and said yes.
Okay you'll get divorce but not now , after 6 months.
Su: but why do we need to wait for 6 months. Both of us are ready for it then what's the issue.
J:Shravan as you are a lawyer, I hope you understand that we can't give divorce easily if there are chances that you both can be back together.
Sh: I agree that your point is correct but I don't think that we'll ever be back together.
J: You may be. Suman just had a miscarriage, and before that on the basis of a single argument you guys want divorce. What all happened at that time? What was the issue? Tell me I may understand.
Su: I don't know all that but I can't be with this man anymore who is so self centered.
J: you have to ma'am. You have no other choice. Both have to stay in the same house. And suman your family(mayka) is in America and doctor has advised you complete rest so maybe you need your this family (sasural).
Suman thought for a while. Judge was right, she needed someone to take care of her.
Su: okay but I won't share a bedroom with him.
J: you don't even need to.
Shravan was quite, he felt rejected just like 10yrs ago but that time he wasn't responsible for it but today this situation was created by him only. Why did he even give her pain thinking that he'll be happy but he himself is suffering a lot. Mrshravan never realised that he was actually in love with his sumo again. No that will never happen he reminded himself.
J: are you okay about it shravan?
(No response) SHRAVAN?
sh:yaa m okay wid it.
J: okay so I'll meet you after 6 months and then we'll see what has to be done. (The judge was a family friend and knew both shravan and suman, and was sure that they'll be back together. He remember an incident
//FLASHBACK :
Suman was in the kitchen making dinner for her favourite uncle Rakesh aka our judge as he was coming for dinner.
On the dining table, both shravan and Rakesh came. But shravan was still busy wid some work on his cell.
Su: dekhiye na kaka, abhi bhi kaam kar raha hai shravan. Humme quality timw spend karna hai yahan aur yeh toh interested hi nai hai.
Sh: imp client hai n humare future ke liye hi toh kama raha hoon paise.
Su: nai chahiye mujhe koi paise , mujhe tum chahiye. Kaka aap se na mai naraj hoo.
R: kyu abb maine kya kia :o
Su: kitna kaam karate hai aap shravan se isliye uske pass na mere liye tym hi nai hai.(making a puppy face )
R: shravan yeh galat hai , chalo chodo yeh sab . Khane pe concentrate karo.
Suman was so happy and her smile showed her victory, shravan had no other option but to agree what these two said.
After dinner...
Su: maina yeh rakhke aati hoo
Suman was in the kitchen busy with some work when she did not realise that shravan came and hugged her from behind. Suman knew that it was shravan .
Su: waah Achanak se kitna pyaar aa raha hai mujhpe.
Sh: vo tumne hi kaha naa ki quality time spend karna toh voi toh kar raha hoo.
Su : aahaa...itni jaldi maan gaye...par abhi m busy baadme baat karte hai.
Sh : nai nai nai...abhi abhi abhi... (shravan said like a kid )
Su : tum nai manoge?
Sh : NAHII
Su :okay and she started tickling him...both of them looked so cute with each other...and their laughter...the way they tease each other was adorable. All of this was noticed by ramesh and he smiled seeing them.
FLASHBACK ENDS / /
I agree that there are problems in every marriage but I have a strong feeling that you both can be back together again and are meant for each other only. No one else can handle each other except they themselves.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Note:
Thankk youu sooo much guys for the response you'll are giving me, I'm overwhelmed.
I promise that you won't be disappointed and the coming parts are even more bttr.
keep giving me your lovepvia likes and comments.
IF YOU GUYS NEED PM, BUDDY ME! Bcoz sending personally to everyone gets difficult.
Love kriti :)
Edited by AMAYASTARSS - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Niharika17

It's good..Shall wait for next part

thanks
nxt part uploaded😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
thanks 😛

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