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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hey, wonderful beginning dear! 👍🏼

It's heartbreaking really what happened to the couple.

Cont soon...

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Vidhi

@vidhu1

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

hey kirti..
Wonderful beginning dear!!
This is soo nice..i mean gr8 concept afterall!!

Do continue soon...plzz be fast m waiting!!
I srsly m a reader who cant wAIT for updates.. specialy for the ones i lIke to read!!
Umm..i hope you to get nice response this time...i can really understand your griveance on not getting nice response!!
But dont worry...you will get nice response!!
ANd yaaa plzzz do continue it!!

One more thing can i get a PM?
😛 😃

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Aayushi15

@Aayushi15

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Very nice. The first chapter is quite interesting.
Please update soon

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Preeran345

@Preeran345

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

interesting. Want to know the flashback.

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Kriti

@KRITII

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rituka7
Lovely story

thankk youu rituka 😃

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Kriti

@KRITII

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Ashi345678
interesting. Want to know the flashback.

thanks ashi
you'll come to know what all happened in past but in bits and pieces
maybe every memory of each other may have a flashback.
-kriti :)

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Kriti

@KRITII

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nicky13
Aww thanks for the update dear ... Aww they r in pain... But why they r in that situation... Want to know more about their this condition... But for that I have to wait for your next update... Thanks once again for this awesome story...

thanks nicky
slowly slowly you'll get to know how and what all happened.
I wrote the part2 but need to make some changes in it so max by tomorrow morning it should be up. :)
Thanks for your comments, it really means a lot; )
- kriti :)

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Kriti

@KRITII

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: orion23
Really interesting. Continue soon😛

thanks a lot:)
Will update tomorrow morning:)
-Kriti :)

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Kriti

@KRITII

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: dvmishra
Gr8 story line... its sad to hear abt miscarriage.. hopefully ths losswil gt thm togerhr.. looking forward to nxt update...

thankk youu soo muchh 😳
They have to be together as they are meant for each other
Next update tomorrow morning :)
- Kriti :)