ShraMan FF Bitter Sweet Symphony #Thread 1

lovely222

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Posted: 9 years ago

#551

Loved the chapter but a request give some reasons to Suman to be happy

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Ishita Nagpal

@Sugarbabe14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#552

Awsum

Really loved

Totally diffo from the concept

I guess those clicking effect maybe khurana aur somebody else is clicking their picture

Sumo in pain

Can't wait for their wedding

Kash tab tak they develop feelings again for each other...

Waiting for next part

Update soon

Love Ishita

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Greeshma

@pulu1995

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Posted: 9 years ago

#553

Sure am addicted till the end now..

Liking your experiments :P Haha.. That was the best thing about this update for me, you describing your style.

Shravan's surprise, can't wait for that!

Clicking I guess someone took pics and may be more trouble.

And Shravan should sometime sit and think calmly, ask people if, oh for sure yes, he has questions AND listen to them without his prejudices. That u'll make us wait for😆

Update soon

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#554

Great part!!

Cont soon

Thanks for the pm

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ansah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#555

Update and I am late again Jeez... I need to rob a bank so that I can be on this forum 24/7

Click wait was that a camera sound ... they got clicked and now it will be used against them ... yes to that..

What I love about this one is the concern he shows for her and then he goes on taunting her... she brings the best and worst out of him.

Daboo and Sumo awdorables ... love emm

Jeez she is not in a good place that jerk of a man ... shravan will have to work on her ..poor baby

What will that leech do I am curious about it

wait wait again .. weeks time

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trolldemortx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#556

Brilliant writing ! :)

I read all of it in one go, an i intend on doing so again :) I shall comment after !! :)

xx

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nagma

@ashupanda123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#557

I've fallen in love with this ff! plzz continue soon :)

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Sashnihaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#558

Amazing Lara! Really liked how you described in detail what Suman was going through! I was able to feel what she was going through. And omg Shravan!! Kind of pissed of at him and not excuse he can tell he cares about Suman but he didn't have to be so rude to her either!

Overall loved this chapter & thanks for the pm :)

Thank you & please let me know when you've got the chapter done! :D

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Shivangee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#559

Amazing Chapter
Really need to Know What Shravan's POV.
But really enjoying Your writing Style.
Yeah I notice every damn thing;that Clicking & what Text He received??
*Really Want you to update it ASAP*

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