ShraMan TS ~ Forget Me not ! Completed pg 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE:

A ray of light entered the kitchen window...as if acknowledging someone for the tough material she was made up of.

Suman Was like other girls of her age...
She had a family ,She loved and was heartbroken ,she had a cute Nanu with whom she could share all her pain...

but no She was Different !

She had a FAMILY... but craved for the love of her parents who were no more.

She had loved her best friend but broke his heart for the reasons that were best known to them!!!

She had a cute Nanu...who was her everything... Her support system her ,Her Only friend bcz Sumo (as he lovingly called her) Hated making friends.

All these things were handled somehow by suman but what Hurted her the most was the DEPT !!
Her parents had taken loan for her education from her Maternal Uncle... which they unfortunately cud not return.

Though Suman was brought up in their family there wasn't a single day she wudnot feel the humiliation imposed on her by them.

So her only task in life was to pay back the money as soon as she can and rescue herself from the pain and hurt.

Suman wasn't weak and She started her own tiffin business at an early age of 18.Its been years now and she's a perfect business woman.


They Say When you Break up in love you wake up in life!
Was it so with Suman ?????

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Shravan is coming !!"Pushkar announced and the whole family got Excited.

10 years it took them to convince their Boy Shravan to come to India.



"Finally I'm back to the place which gave me the pain I'll nvr forget"
Shravan spoke coming out of the airport.

Was it Pain or was it ego??or his love?.


PRECAP:

sumo's car collides with someone's... she's faint
A guy rushes out to Save her.


SO GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST SHRAMAN SS.

SORRY IF I BORED YOU BUT ANYWAYS DO LIKE N COMMENT FOR MY ATTEMPT.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's a nice start.
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
Do continue
Pm me if possible..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...this wasn't boring at all...it was damn interesting..plz update soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story line... plz update soon
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👍🏼
Great job..update soon.. 😊
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Awesome. Cont. Soon and pm for next update.
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Awesome update...
Do cont soon...

Will be waiting to read more..
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Woowww...loving this...can't wait for the update...please continue ASAP 😳
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Heyy
Your prolouge was awesome.. Plz do continue soon..

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