FF - Downfall of His Princess - Part 3 Page 5

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The Downfall of His Princess

Suman had always been possessive, she was possessive about her family, her friends and precisely about the man she loved. Her possessiveness came across really bad in others' view. She would be jealous due to small actions and things and it was all because she was daddy's little girl, never been hurt and never heard no. She had always been loved and valued by people around her and especially by her family and friends because they knew she meant no harm to others or that she was heartless, it was just her possessive nature that made her act like that. Born with a silver spoon in her mouth, Suman had never known what it felt like to sweat for a meal and survival. Due to unfortunate events Suman's life took a turn and she had to leave everything behind, her desires, her habits, her friends and ... her love. All she had now was the strength without skills, the strength which she would have to use to become the Breadwinner of her family. How does she deal with her emotions when the one and only man she had been in love with comes back in her life?


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The crisp white paper of my diary stared back at me as millions of thoughts swam across my mind. The small stack of money sat there on top of green army box which I used as my piggy bank. I sighed as I took the blue ink pen and stained the crisp paper with heavy heart. Finally when my dry hand came to halt, I stared at the list and my stress level shot up, there were few more bullet points than last time. I heaved a sigh and rested back in my chair. I was hoping that I would buy you a better gift this year, but I guess not. I folded the paper and put it in my wallet neatly along with the money. There was only a dollar left on the table. A small smile appeared on my lips and disappeared as fast as it came. I dumped that dollar in my army piggy bank.



"You sweat everyday to save money, but by the end of the day only a dollar is left and you put that in your piggy bank to save it for his birthday, but you never give him the gift you buy. For his past four birthdays you bought him a gift and they all are in your closet." My brother's voice brought me out of the trance.



I turned around and he was lying in his twin size bed with a book in his hand. He looked up from the book and stared at the closet.



"This is going to be the fifth one going into that closet. Why don't you just give it to him?" Neil averted his eyes towards me.



"You do know that how much all those things cost right?" I got up and sat on his bed as he scooted over a bit. "Nothing, they are worth nothing compare to what he has. It's like a trash in front of all the things he owns." I whispered as tears welled up in my eyes, but I closed my eyes before they could leave my eyes.



"You are afraid to meet him because of what my girlfriend did to me right?" He sat up and stared right at me.



"I don't know..." I trailed off "Partly because of that and partly because I am just too down-market for them now."



"Don't you wish that we grew up under different circumstances?" Neil said as he stared out the window. I turned my head to see what he was watching and both of us followed the sports car that was going on the road. "We would be living a different life."



"I wish I could rewrite our past." I laid back and put my head on his legs. "We wouldn't be in so much pain."



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Part 3

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You guys can call me Meerab! (That's my pen name). I'd like to write a FF. I am a huge fan of Shravan and Sumuuu! In love with them! Please let me know how you like my work! thanks <3

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Part 1

She looked at the watch and stood against the sink to catch a breath. Yet again the clock went past midnight. Almost everyone else wrapped up for the dead tiring day, just a few more victims of bad fate like her were there to fish for few more dollars. She wiped the beads of sweat from her forehead with the back of her hand as she heaved another sigh and she went back to washing dishes. She increased her pace and rinsed the plates. Her arms ached, warning her about how tired she was, but she still kept on washing the dishes. She needed to work as many hours she could. She closed her eyes as her body released more pain. Her arms were so tired that they couldn't even hold another dish and she dropped it. She watched the dish shatter into pieces just like her dreams. The tiny fragments reminded her of the day when her every dream splintered with just one incident. Since that day, she has forgotten how to dream. How could she dream? Her dreams have become a pricking thorn from her past. She was a dreamer and those dreams gave her nothing but piercing pain. Just the far thought of dreaming once again brought her on the edge nightmares.


"Suman."


The sound of someone calling her brought her out from the heartbreaking trance. She turned around and the head chef of the Mehra Hotels and Restaurants chain was standing there. She smiled and greeted him. The head chef was none other than Neerav, the owner's son. Neerav was a highly recognized chef and he opened the branch in their small town while his father managed the branches across India. Neerav was the only one who gave Suman a job four years ago because the hotel opened newly and they needed staff. Suman couldn't get the job anywhere else due to her inexperience. Just like the Mehra branch, she also groomed with passing years and became a pretty close friend of Neerav. From cleaning the tables she became manager through her dedication, but for extra money she needed, she continued to be a waitress as well.

"Are you all right?" He worriedly asked as his eyes fell on the broken white pieces.

"Yes, I am okay. It was just an accident." She sighed. Accidents through her hands were becoming more often. She knew she needed to take a day or two off to rest, but unfortunately her brother's college fee and the medicine bill of her grandpa was taking a toll on her. "I am fine, Neerav. Just a little more work and I am off then." He came forward and put his hands on her shoulder.

"Go Home!" He stared into her eyes. "Go home, Suman. If you stay here for another hour, I'll have to take you to the emergency then. You know that too. So, go home."

She nodded and took off her apron. "Thank you... for everything."



She left the restaurant with aching back and arms. The night wasn't nice enough to her either. The cold air was making her arms paralyze. She sighed and stared at the sky. How could her life go this wrong? She couldn't understand why was her fate this cruel to her. When her father was alive, she would crib about every little thing. Maybe this was karma, for being so spoiled and insensitive. But she had never intentionally hurt some... well... except one person. That one person who was very dear to her heart. That one person who was her best friend. That one person whom she was in love with. She had hurt him very badly... left him on that roof without any answer.

He was so successful now. She knew it because she followed every little news about him. She was still in love with him, but he moved on. He had a fiancee, a woman who suited him and his status. She walked aimlessly on the dim lit streets. Woh kya sochey ga mujhe dekh key ab? She didn't know what he would say if he saw her now. She didn't look prim and proper like she used. She didn't have anything designer on her now. She couldn't even afford to eat in the restaurant she worked in. Oh, how cruel the fate have been to her. She shook her head and reached her home.

She stared at it and shook her head. The servant quarters at her old home had been bigger than this. This one was a small flat of two rooms... one for her grandma and the other one she shared with her brother. Obviously, she wanted a bigger house, but she could only hope for it. Her past seemed like a dream now. The mansion, those cars, the servants and her parents now seem like a forgotten promise. Her life had been so simple at that time. The only worries that she ever cared for were what to wear, what to eat and... about him.

How simple it was to just fall in love with someone at that time. She thought she needed nothing but love at that time. But life had to teach her lesson and so it taught her by throwing the harsh reality in her face. Love was least of the need when people struggled for basic needs. Nobody saw how much you loved someone if you couldn't afford to live. Especially in her circle, if you couldn't afford to run around in the elite circle it meant you didn't deserve to be there. So she believed, she didn't belong with him. She believed... he didn't deserve her. She believed... he deserved better... so here she was suffering while she watched him get what he deserved... the best of the best.


Part 2


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Beautifully written. Waiting for the next part
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Great start
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Beautifully written...waiting for next update 😳
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This is a beautiful start to a beautiful fanfiction. Fabulous writing! Please continue. Awaiting update. Could it be possible to send a PM when you update?
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very very nice krithi...
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Part 2

"Suman!" She heard her grandfather's voice. "You are back?"

She locked the door and turned on the lights.

"Yeah... Neerav sent me back early today." She went to her grandfather's room and yet again he was on his typewriter.

"Do you think two in the morning is early?" Her grandfather scolded her.

"Well, do you think two in the morning is the time for using that ancient typewriter." She tied her hair up and went to the kitchen.

"It is not ancient... it's precious." Her grandfather yelled from the room and she smiled. "And I was just about to go to sleep."

"Who are you lying to?" She said back from the kitchen as she prepared herself a quick dinner. "I know you don't sleep until I get back home safely."

"Well... what am I supposed to do if you don't care for yourself? I have to be your mom." Her grandfather said sadly. "I have to be your mom and be on your case always, or else you would probably live at that restaurant. Anyways, I am going to sleep. Eat and then straight go to sleep."

"Yeah..." She whispered.

Mom. It was such a bitter word for her. She didn't believe it anymore. She didn't even think about her mother anymore. Her mother had left her scratched and cold. Her mother broke Suman's already broken world again and again.

She shook her head and ate her dinner. She didn't want to disturb her brother so she changed and got herself a blanket and laid down on the couch. The couch felt so comfortable that she felt asleep right when her head hit the pillow.



Exactly at six-thirty her eyes opened and she got up and did her morning rituals. By the time it was Seven-thirty she had already cooked breakfast and got ready for work. She took a long breath and went to wake up her brother. When she opened the door, she smiled. Neil was lying on top of his books, sleeping... well snoring.

"Neil..." She picked up books from around him. "Neil... it's morning now. The sun is up." She lightly hit him with a book on his back. "Breakfast is ready." She ruffled his hair and left him to wakeup fully when she saw his sleepy eyes open

Both of them had grown up way before they were supposed to. They took responsibility earlier than the normal young adults. Kids at their age would party and get tensed about exams and test, on the other hand, they worried about their financial status and how to provide for each other. They took responsibility of their grandfather when everyone left them alone in their cruel chaotic world. But she learned valuable lessons from her experiences.

She realized that the meaning of her happiness was in little things that she shared with her family and co-workers. Nothing could make her happier than when she was with her grandfather and her brother. It was when they argued about chess, TV shows, and their favorite celebrities. Once in a while they went out either on a picnic or to watch a movie. Her world was not that rich and sparkly anymore, but she was happy in her simple little world. Still, she missed him, and she missed him like a hell. Somedays when things got out of her hands, she wanted to pick up the phone and tell him. She wanted to open her wounds to him, and ask him to heal her, but she was afraid of rejection. She was rejected so many times and by her own people that she was scared he was going to say no to her too.


"How many times have I told you to let me make the breakfast. You come so late and tired. I can at least do that much for you." Neil got mad at her yet again.

"You just Ace your exams and I'll be happy." She pulled her cheeks and laughed. "I am leaving. Give breakfast to Grandpa and refill the medicine, please. I left the money on the fridge."

She hugged him and bid him good bye. When she got out of her flat, it didn't feel as cold as last night. For some reason, the sun was high up and shinning like it's gonna be no tomorrow. The weather was really nice. It was kind of a day for a family day out, but unfortunately, this month's costs were getting out of their normal budget so she had to work extra hours. She at least enjoyed the sun as she walked to her work.


When she reached the restaurant, she was surprised to see Neerav in the kitchen this early in the morning.

"I am surprised to see you here and at this time." As soon as she got there, she started working on cutting the vegetable.

"SUMUUU!!" Neerav shouted her name and hugged her.

"What happened to you?" She stared at him suspiciously.

"I finally get to be a full-time chef." He happily tipped his chef hat.

"Yesss... I am so happy for you!!!" She pulled Neerav's cheeks.

"Stop doing that to me." He pushed her away and she chuckled.

"So who is going to take over the administrative duties."

"My cousin Sh-" Neerav bit his tongue. "Oh, crap I forgot to tell you. I have organized a dinner for them today. My whole family is coming over. Can you please look at the management for the dinner. It's really a big tension for me. I'll have Riya look over the restaurant today. Please, it's really important for me. I beg you." He smirked and she knew there was something coming up that she wouldn't be able to resist. "And you get to go home early if you do what I say."

"Fine... Fine, I'll do it." She smiled at him. "I am really happy that you are back in the kitchen, but unfortunately, I'll be the victim of your new recipes' experiment."

"Yes, you'll be the one tasting everything I'll be trying in the kitchen. That's why I love you sooo much, Sumu." He smirked yet again.

She groaned at that thought. "Love you too."



The day flew by and she didn't even realize it. The dinner was a big deal for Neerav so she wanted everything on point. She was overlooking one final time when one of the workers told her that Neerav's family has arrived. She was going to the kitchen to get the drinks ready when she heard her name.


"Sumu!" She heard an excited voice. She turned around and got confused for a second to see him there.

"Pushkar?" She asked him confusingly. "What are you doing here?"

"Sumuuu!!!" He came and hugged her. "It's good to see you, and I am here for the family dinner."

"What?" She got more confused. "You are related to Neerav?"

"Yeah. His mom is related to us."

Us. Oh my god, please no. No... Not him. "What do you mean by us?" She held her breath as she waited for him to answer.

"Shravan and I." he excitedly answered. "Oh, that reminds me that he is gonna be here too today. So you'll get to see him. it's been too long-"

She tuned Pushkar out as soon as she heard that. She didn't want to see him. Yes... she was a coward. She didn't want to see him. She didn't have the courage and enough strength to open her past wounds.

"I have to go." She didn't even wait for his reply.

She knew she needed to get away. He couldn't know that she was here. She held on to the nearby table as her legs started shaking. God, she couldn't breathe. Why was he here? Of every place in the world, why was he in this such a small town? She closed her eyes and tried to breathe. It hurt to breathe... her heart hurt. Her eyes burned and she wanted to just run away from here. She took a breath and headed to the kitchen. Neerav wasn't there so she asked the assistant and they told her that he was in his office.

She headed down to his office and knocked on the door. He was getting ready when she went in.

"Thank god you are here. I need your help so bad." He held up two ties and asked her. "Which one?"

"The dark red one." She tried to smile. "What happened? Why did you get ready here?"

"I got so busy in the kitchen that I didn't even realize where did time go. So, I didn't have the time to drive all the way home and then come back. I just wore one of the back up suits I have here. So, here I am now helpless with the tie. Someone helps me at home, so please help me tie this."

She chuckled and shook her head. He looked like a helpless kid. She took the tie and tied it around his neck. She fixed his tie and stepped back.

"You look handsome." She patted his shoulder.

"Thanks, you are a sweetheart." Neerav kissed her cheek and she smiled.

The moment she turned around she froze where she was. Her breath got stuck in her throat. She was thrown back five years as those accusing eyes stared at her.

Part 3



Edited by flower-power - 9 years ago
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Thank you!!!! each and everyone for your amazing response! I really appreciate it. Keep letting me know how you guys like it. Thanks you once again😳

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