ShraMan VM thread By Riya(Hum To Haare update)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: chicksoup
Watched the hasi VM.
Loved the way you ended with the Rubik's Cube.👏
U made it a complete story in itself. She waited for so long...and finally he came. The Cube is something she hangs on to, as a part of Shravan, and now he is hers.
Also hadn't noticed in the show in that one scene with the yellow dress- when he accidentally brushes against her so slightly, but she feels it...becomes conscious...beautifully woven into the VM. 👏

Yea i tried to do it like story actually i wanted the dialogues too in the last part. Where she says she ll keep old shravan. She can forget him not his memories. Wanted to keep it to give it current scenario thing but the song overshadowed so had to cut that. Anyway loved that u loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: --fero--
Nice one...

Hasi...superb song...vm

Thanku so much 😃

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

check out the 5th vm guys. link on 1st page

shraman vm on judaai 😊

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chicksoup

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

👏👏👏

Girl, U have some talent in selecting just the right song...this song is one of my favourites...I have another favourite couple engraved on this song...

...And you have created magic with this couple too.

Right from the starting conversation...which is the crux of this show currently...

To the doors (of their hearts?) they open to each other... I could write a scene by scene analysis on how perfectly you have made this VM...

😉But I'll just restrict myself to:

Kholoon jo baahein bas gham yeh simat rehe hai- Indeed she delivered him the gift of pain in his open palms...

And finally- Jigra vichh agan lagaa ke rabba lakira vichh likh di judai...the scene selection from Sumo's side..👏

Interesting that both of them have the same Q- Jaane kaise koi sehta judaiyan...if only they knew the other was suffering as much. ❤️

Perfect song for this weekend in the Shraman story.😳

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: chicksoup
👏👏👏
Girl, U have some talent in selecting just the right song...this song is one of my favourites...I have another favourite couple engraved on this song...

...And you have created magic with this couple too.

Right from the starting conversation...which is the crux of this show currently...

To the doors (of their hearts?) they open to each other... I could write a scene by scene analysis on how perfectly you have made this VM...

😉But I'll just restrict myself to:

Kholoon jo baahein bas gham yeh simat rehe hai- Indeed she delivered him the gift of pain in his open palms...
And finally- Jigra vichh agan lagaa ke rabba lakira vichh likh di judai...the scene selection from Sumo's side..👏

Interesting that both of them have the same Q- Jaane kaise koi sehta judaiyan...if only they knew the other was suffering as much. ❤️

Perfect song for this weekend in the Shraman story.😳

Thanks alot chick. And this is one of fav song thats why i wanted to make this one special. But somewhere i feel i couldn't do justice. But ur words really touched my heart.

Tried as much i could do with the story telling in this vm. Someplaces it didnot go with the lyrics. But yea i would love to read ur analysis. Perfectly described kholoon jo bahain.

🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Ri,

It doesn't have to go with the lyrics all the time na. But I can understand if U felt U couldn't do full justice to it...because you know something is missing as the creator. From the viewer's point, it felt prefect to me. I watched it 4 times..and each point struck me with each viewing...(Excuse me, I am a tube light😉)...

It felt so much like a journey.

On how Sumo copes up after the party...telling her tale from the first meeting to the last one where she gave up her most prized memories...

If I have to mention the points I didn't elaborate in the prev reply-

There was continuity...each of the times they met came as an fb while she cried her heart out...and she tried to exorcise him with the holi scene- but nothing could erase the memory. The sentiment got across very beautifully...and it struck me only with the third viewing that you were telling Shravan's story too...hence both are asking the same question, burning in the pain of separation.

Like I said, a delicious treat on a weekend like this. 👏

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: chicksoup
Ri,
It doesn't have to go with the lyrics all the time na. But I can understand if U felt U couldn't do full justice to it...because you know something is missing as the creator. From the viewer's point, it felt prefect to me. I watched it 4 times..and each point struck me with each viewing...(Excuse me, I am a tube light😉)...

It felt so much like a journey.
On how Sumo copes up after the party...telling her tale from the first meeting to the last one where she gave up her most prized memories...
If I have to mention the points I didn't elaborate in the prev reply-
There was continuity...each of the times they met came as an fb while she cried her heart out...and she tried to exorcise him with the holi scene- but nothing could erase the memory. The sentiment got across very beautifully...and it struck me only with the third viewing that you were telling Shravan's story too...hence both are asking the same question, burning in the pain of separation.

Like I said, a delicious treat on a weekend like this. 👏

thats really so sweet of u. and yea tried to show both of their pain. but suman's part dominated mostly so in the end gave the holi scenes. that part shravan just killed it with eyes and i cant just miss adding it in the vm. the lone tear whch falls and he wipes it out.

after such a long time m really crazy about a pair. the characters. that i just cant control. like i have to try to make vm on them