EKDV 2- Written Update 25th Aug- E64

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*Mods, please don't close this topic. I'll post the WU by 6.


*unres- I've added a few dialogues as inki translation karna was a bit difficult for me.


EKDV Written Update 25th Aug- E64

Episode begins with Shravan & his mom inside Shravan’s room- Shravan goes towards his bed and sits there, tensed & disturbed- Shravan mom also sits at the bed next to him with the plate of food and asks – “Tuney socha- tu khana nahi khaayega toh teri mummy bhi khaana nahi khaayegi.” Shravan looks up relieved, Kavita asks him what was he muttering to himself standing near the window; Shravan just brushes it off and pacifies her that he was cramming up an essay for class; Kavita says that even to present yourself in class, you need to have strength and you must eat & encourages Shravan to eat; Bunty enters the room with some food & Shravan lies to his mom saying he getting acidity
(A/N-Bhaisaab!! Suna toh tha ki pyaar main Insaan ki bhhookh-pyaas sab mit jaatihain! Lagey haath witness bhi kar liya! Abbey Shravan Miyan, khaaogey nahi tohacidity toh hogi na! – okay now, back to the show);
Shravan mom goes intohyper-desi-mom-mode and worries about his health and Bunty miyaan full-onaag-main-ghee-daalkar says “Poora hi gadbad hain filhaal toh!”; ShrUnty share a look (non-romantic guys); Kavita gives Shravan Dahi to eat while Bunty takes Shravan’s plate from Kavita & she taunts him by saying “Bhukkad!”; Bunty goes to Shravan’s desk and tell him to be sad later and first eat; Shravan says that he doesn’t feel like eating; Bunty advises him to eat by saying –“khud kotadpaane ka joh yeh zimma uthhaye ho na, usskey liye bahut taaqat lagti hain.”
(A/N-Haaye, Bunty... nazar na lagey tujhe kisi ki!);
Shravan is really disturbed and in pain, but tries to hide it by laying on the bed and telling Bunty that he has to get up early for class; Bunty tells Shravan to forget the class & Suman as he had originally started to attend the class because of Sumo and asks him what is the use of forcibly getting up early in the morning & going to class during this heartbreak; Shravan gets up and tells Bunty that Suman is still really important to him, neither he can hurt her, nor back down- he is the one who is in love with her, so what’s her fault if she doesn’t love him back; despite being in pain, he still insists on going to class daily..
(A/N-yaaaarrr… koi please Shravan ko tight-si jaadu ki jhappi de do! Iss ladkey neytoh mera dil tod diya hain by his sincerity towards Sumo 💔💔😭😭);
Bunty sits next to Shravan & tells him he is not thinking about himself – this love is turning into a wound for Shravan as meeting Suman everyday, talking to her &spending time with her- all this will act as a catalyst of scratching the wound and making it go deeper instead of healing it- he asks him “forget about friendship, do you want to go crazy in love?”; Shravan says that a thing liket his will never happen as he has promised Sumo that he will be her BFF for life and if a thing like this occurs, the same promise will remind him to take a step back; Bunty goes full emotional-blackmail mode on Shravan and reminds him of Bunty & Kavita who have been pleading to Shravan to eat food, but Shravan just cares about Suman & not his family & friends; Shravan gets all emotional & asks for forgiveness from Bunty & hugs him; he promises to be a better friend to Bunty and tells him they will roam around Bhopal the entire day; Bunty is really excited and exclaims they will roam around on Shravan’s bike as the bike was Shravan’s 1st love; Shravan is really heart-broken & on the verge of tears.

(A/N- ShrUnty > Jai-Veeru. PERIOD. ❤️)

Later in the night,

Shravan is really restless, sitting by his window, he gets up and goes to the balcony connected to his room & looks at Sumo’s balcony; he is really restless & looks again to find Suman come out of her room to the balcony to take the clothes; Suman notices Shravan; Shravan is visibly happy to see her face, Sumo asks him what happened *through gestures*, he replies in the negative; Suman calls him up & asks him what is he doing so late in the balcony; he replies that he was walking; sumo asks him if he is ok and he replies that he is fine, but eventually gives her the acidity wala jhooth; Suman lectures him about eating on time & he accepts what she says; suman says he says yes to everything she says very quickly; Shravan says “toh kya karu? Ab agar tum gussey main aa gayi, tum iss Punjabi Mundey ka khana chuddwaa dogi. Issey acha toh khaane ka time change kar du.”; Suman laughs at his joke and Shravan looks endearingly at her... she says that she really likes to talk to him; Shravan says me too; Suman thanks him for being her best friend; Shravan thanks Sumo too; Suman says that today before talking to Shravan (in the morning,regarding the BFF thing), she was felling scared; Shravan asks for the reason; Suman says because she didn’t want her words to hurt him, she wanted them to stay friends forever, she didn’t want to loose Shravan, nor hurt him; Shravan replies that even he will never hurt Sumo neither does he want to loose her; Sumo thanks him & tells him that she wants to do something for the country & wants to contribute to the family legacy, she wants to be the pride of her father & Daadu, she says that all this can be possible only when she joins the Army, for which she wants to work hard, she doesn’t want any kind of distractions in her life to fulfill her dream (indirectly hinting at Love); she asks if he is able to understand her; Shravan nods a ‘yes’ & says that even before knowing her, he understood her dreams & life goals; Sumo thanks him; Shravan thinks to himself that even after so many failed attempts, he simply can’t place her as his friend, he knows his feelings for her are kind of a betrayal to their friendship & his promise to her, but he feels extremely helpless as her loves her a lot & hopes she can forgive him; It starts to thunder and they both break out from their moment; Suman bids him goodbye as it is about to rain & tells him he will have good nights’ sleep tonight.

Shravan just looks at Suman with tears in his eyes as the bg song- Jaan Ban Gaye from Khuda Haafiz plays & goes inside his room, yet heart-broken;

The next morning-Tiwari house-

Anjali bumps into Ramesh & asks about Beena; he says he can’t find her atall; Suman-Kancha greet Anjali-Ramesh; Ramesh gets a message from Beena, Kancha asks what happened, Anjali asks Ramesh to read the message- Beena informs that she’s at her maykaa & will come back after a few days; Ramesh is angry at Beena’s way of expressing her anger about the Indore incident. Anjali tries to pacify Ramesh & stops him from going to get Beena; Kancha also gets angry at Beena for this & she also scolds Ramesh for not behaving nicely with Beena, she gets angry and leaves the place, Sumo follows her;

Malhotra house-

Bunty is sleeping & Kavita gets breakfast for Shravan; Shravan is not in his room, Bunty wakes up & tells Shravan mom that Shravu is in class; Kavita goes into hyper-desi-mom-mode again and wonders how can he attend the class on an empty stomach. She sees the two food-laden plates & asks Bunty about it; Bunty says he didn’t feel like eating, so even he left it; Kavita scolds Bunty & asks him to tell her the truth; he lies by saying – “Shravan ka mood kharab tha, issliye ussne nahi khaya, issliye humey aapse plate lekar yeh socha ki usko khila denge aur khud bhi khaa lenge, par Shravan kay saath-saath humara bhi mood off ho gaya”; Kavita gets tensed about Shravan’s mood; Devraj is in the living hall & talks to some senior; he wonders out aloud as to why is the Colonel not signing; Kavita comes down from the stairs & sees Devraj not eating & asks him for the reason; he says he’s not hungry; Kavita loses her cool and states that she is not the maid of the house that both father-son just quit eating and she keeps on making food for them; Devraj is surprised to know that Shravan also did not eat breakfast; she taunts him by saying that if they both want to go on a hunger-strike, at least they should inform her; Devraj tries to calm her down & asks about the matter; Kavita says she herself doesn’t know why is Shravan’s mood off, exasperated by their antics, she just storms off;

At the class-

Anish tries to sit next to Suman, but she requests him to sit at his usual place; Anish remarks by saying that the seats are first come, first serve basis; Sumo retorts by saying since she came early, she’s reserved the seat for her best friend; Anish retorts by saying SuVan are going too fast, implicating that they are a couple behind this façade of friendship and taunts Suman about Aditya; Shravan intervenes & tells Anish that Suman is HIS Best Friend, &advises Anish to keep his cheap mentality with himself.

(A/N- Waah Shravan! Well done my buoy!! 👏👏)

Anish comes back to his seat & remarks that SuVan friendship will break off quickly, Devika tells him to brush it off as she feels SuVan friendship is just a show; Suman advises Shravan to ignore Anish as he just keeps on blabbering senseless stuff; Colonel Tiwari greets the Cadets and starts the class; Ramesh gets a dish for the students and Kanchan remarks by saying whats the use, Ramesh should have been sweet to Beena; Suman tries to pacify Kanchan, Shravan asks whats wrong; Suman tells him that she’ll say after the class; on being offered the dish, Shravan politely rejects and Suman asks whats wrong; Shravan says his stomach is not well; Sumo takes an extra plate from Dumru and gives it to Shravan, he still rejects it; Suman tells Shravan that the sweet is her favourite dish; she pretends to be upset & gives back the plates to Dumru & says it’s her 1st sacrifice for her best friend- not eating the sweet; Shravan stops Dumru and takes the plates back- gives one to Sumo & takes one for himself & says, he’ll eat it; Suman gets happy; Suman almost takes a bite & looks at Shravan, he eats a piece & looks at Suman; Bunty watches from afar & thinks if Shravan is this unhappy, then everyone will ultimately be sad because of him, even Suman will get to know that Shravan loves her;
Colonel Tiwari starts the class by asking a question- what’s the most important thing to a Fauji? What’s the most important thing a Fauji respects?; Suman gets up and says it the Country; Colonel asks after Country, Anish gets up & says Family; Sharvan thinks & Colonel asks what is Shravan thinking; Shravan gets up & says – “Sir mujhe lagta hain ki ek Fauji kay liye Desh kay baad, who Fauji dost aatey hongey, joh ki Jung main unkay saath apne Desh kay liye ladte hain, Dushmano ko haraane kay baad, unhi doston ki zindagi, unka saath dena aur unkay liye kuch bhi karjaana, yeh matter karta hoga Sir.”;

(A/N- as a Fauji kid, I COULDN'T AGREE MORE with Shravan 😊)

Suman looks at him very proudly & Colonelalso looks impressed & praises Shravan for his mature answer; Shravan sits down and Kancha is impressed by Shravan’s answer; Suman is also really happy with Shravan’s answer; Colonel Tiwari says that for a Fauji, after the country,his fellow-Fauji is important- like for the country a Fauji can sacrifice everything, same ways, a Fauji will sacrifice anything for his friend and in the class the topic is Friendship; he gives them the assignment of leaving a hobby/habit which they like, but only the friend will decide for how long they have to leave that habit; Colonel Tiwari asks Suman what does she like; Shravan replies that Sumo loves sketching & the feelings which she can’t say aloud, she can portray them through her sketches; Colonel Tiwari is impressed with Shravan & remarks he knows a lot about his friend Suman; Suman says – “Done! Jab tak Shravan nahi kahega, mein sketching nahi karungi”; Shravan gets surprised; Colonel is impressed by Suman’s sacrifice & asks about Shravan; Anish says it’s the bike, as he likes to show-off in it; Suman says that the bike is a daily-use vehicle & to sacrifice that, it’ll be of no use; Colonel agrees & asks Shravan again; Shravan thinks & says that Anish is right & if he chooses the 2nd best thing, it’ll not be a sacrifice; Colonel seems extremely happy & impressed with Shravan’s answer & says he’s proud of him; Bunty says that Shravan made so many attempts & fought with everyone in the school to keep the bike & today the poor bike is sacrificed for Sumo! They had also made plans to roam around the city on the bike; Suman says that he didn’t have to do this; Shravan replies anything for Friendship. SuVan share a look & the EKDV theme tune plays in the bg; Shravan thinks to himself- “for Friendship, I have sacrificed my love for you Sumo, the bike will come back tome one day”; Bunty feels that for Shravan to return to friendship from love is impossible.

Precap-

Devraj urges Shravan to speak out his heart if he has anything to share; Kavita asks Devraj if Shravan said anything; Devraj says our boy is growing up, he’s fallen in love; Kavita tells Suman that Shravan has fallen in love.


Phew! done... 1st time WU and it took so long... also, sorry for my faltu kay inputs 😵

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Such a long update girl....speaks of the hard work you put in!


Gotta sleep now will read it properly tom for sure!

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Beautifully written girl!

Doesn't feel like your first WU👏

The A/N in between made it more interesting!😉

Thanks a lot for writing it!🤗

Kudos to you for writing in all details👍🏼

Edited by Pranushka_723 - 5 years ago
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Thanks for update Tanya! 🤗 It's really well written!👍🏼

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tfs dear...appreciate your efforts for the WU

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Really so long update and well written! Thank you so much for your effort!

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Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

Such a long update girl....speaks of the hard work you put in!


Gotta sleep now will read it properly tom for sure!

RES!

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Beautifully written girl!

Doesn't feel like your first WU👏

The A/N in between made it more interesting!😉

Thanks a lot for writing it!🤗

Kudos to you for writing in all details👍🏼

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