Suvan Drabble-- Becoming Shravan

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The air was crisp, the feeling was warm as I rode pillion with Shravan. I closed my eyes as the light wind blew against my skin and I inched closer to Shravan wrapping my arms around his chest and I think I sensed a slight sway of the bike as if Shravan was caught surprised. I smiled and threw my head back a little reminiscing my thoughts. It was not so long ago that I had said he was coward and that notion was broken when he came by and told my entire family that he had not organized Damru’s birthday. I had called him fraud, but he broken that too by trying to redeem himself by serving at the canteen. I had called him insensitive, but he proved me wrong by jumping in to ride me late in the night to the cantonment. I called him show off, but he proved me wrong by bending down to clean my shoes at the party. He made me break discipline, but I never regretted as he upheld my happiness always. I know he loves me but this time I hope he will prove me right. I opened my eyes to look into the rear mirror to see his dreamy eyes just for me.

Its payback time and today I have lied to my family by saying I am again going to meet Dad at the cantonment but truth to be told I wanted to spend some time with Shravan. I do not regret it because I think I owe this to Shravan and us. I have finally told him that Papa has already left so no point going to the cantonment but from his lopsided smile I guess he has understood my intentions. I will now let him take me on this ride to overwhelm my heart and my being. He has not failed me as we stand close to each other looking at the moon and its embers reflecting in the lake. Finally, he whispers huskily near my ears setting my nerves on fire “So you wanted this as much as I. I must say with me you have started being a little carefree, a little naughty, a little romantic and a little Shravanish”. I smiled and interlaced my fingers with his recollecting what he said “Am I becoming a little more Shravan, but anyways I don’t mind”.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was my favorite drabble of the lot!! You did an amazing job....I unknowingly voted for both of your drabbles 😆 although I thought that maybe Bucky wrote this one

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Posted: 5 years ago
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i agree with alina, it is quite an interesting drabble..first time, suman (i suppose thats the character😆) doesnt regret her decision to lie to her family in order to spend time with shravan...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: alina.b

This was my favorite drabble of the lot!! You did an amazing job....I unknowingly voted for both of your drabbles 😆 although I thought that maybe Bucky wrote this one

Thanks Alina!! I loved writing this too. I absolutely adore Bucky's style of writing and I always strive for the same so its an honour. I thought Mayfly was written by you so I guess its the same for us all 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's one of my favourites too! I loved the title! So apt for the duo!

Loved how you portrayed each one adopting a little off each other so subtly!

Take a bow Sam!👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Last line, she is indeed becoming like Shravan & he is like her! Nice one.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful one Sam....❤️

As I already told you it was among my top 3 of the lot!

The way you write is really beautiful!👏

Suman turning a bit like Shravan is what we all want!

Amazing drabble!👍🏼

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