Suvan FF: A Thousand Years - Completed - Page 23

A very beautiful chapter Alina!❤️

The way you wrote about Sagar and Suman's initial problems was great. He atlast accepted his mother. Shravan is back🥳I love the bond shared by Shravan and Sagar

Can't wait to read the further chapters😳

Beautiful chapter Alina. Loved that Sagar accepted hi mother. He sensed her motherly love. Hope Suman comes out from her insecurities regarding her looks with Shravan's love & care. Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Yaar.....nyc update yaar Alina......tq u for quick update .......

Yeah....a quick update .....well done yaar..it's amazing .....wn the nxt update is gng to b updated..btw u can call me minny😘😘😘💓

Amazing update! Love how you portrayed the other side of the story.

I can literally feel the words 'Mil jaate hai jo bane ek duje ke vaaste' through this chapter.

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

Alina .... This is fabulous!

Such a beautiful and emotional update😭

Aww...Sagar and Shravan's interaction is so good.

He is back in Bhopal

Waiting for best update already

Thanks Mishti! Tbh I love writing Shravan and Sagar scenes. It's just so pure. Sagar is the son that Shravan wished he had. Lol in my head their theme song in Tu Jo Mila. I know we won't see this in the show since Mohika are only 25 in real life so they wouldn't play a role of parents. But, I like seeing scenes of ML bonding with a kids and if the kid isn't even his, then it is very pure

Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

A very beautiful chapter Alina!

The way you wrote about Sagar and Suman's initial problems was great. He atlast accepted his mother. Shravan is backI love the bond shared by Shravan and Sagar

Can't wait to read the further chapters

Thank you, Lavy! Even though Suman is very nice and patient, she also intially had difficulty accepting Sagar as her son. But, ultimately they bonded more because they had a common factor that was important to both of them - Shravan.

Originally posted by: Veenapain

Beautiful chapter Alina. Loved that Sagar accepted hi mother. He sensed her motherly love. Hope Suman comes out from her insecurities regarding her looks with Shravan's love & care. Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Thank you, Veena! I hope you liked the little blurb I had at the end where Suman is in a dilemma between listening to her heart and her mind. She has insecurities and even misunderstanding as she thinks Shravan ended up getting married to Naina. She is unaware that the wedding got called off. So, yes these factors will allow us to see another side of their relationship.

Originally posted by: Rajitha_rajji95

Yaar.....nyc update yaar Alina......tq u for quick update .......

Yeah....a quick update .....well done yaar..it's amazing .....wn the nxt update is gng to b updated..btw u can call me minny😘😘😘💓

Thank you, Minny! I knew you would happy to see me post that quickly 😆 I don't think I've ever written a chapter that fast lol but I think it's because these chapters are shorter. Honestly, I like this length of chapters better because I don't get that tired and it's easier to edit. Will start working on the next chapter soon because Suvan finally meet again!

Originally posted by: Bucky

Amazing update! Love how you portrayed the other side of the story.

I can literally feel the words 'Mil jaate hai jo bane ek duje ke vaaste' through this chapter.

Aww Thank you, Bucky! @Bold - tbh that's why I included the photo album scene - it looks back into their past on how they constantly meet and are separated and finally they are meant to meet again. The melodramatic person in me made the lives of Shravan, Suman, and Sagar really tragic and all are separated from one another but ultimately their destinies collide and they are all finally together again.

Alina ...yaar nxt update pls

Originally posted by: Rajitha_rajji95

Alina ...yaar nxt update pls

Hey Rajitha I hope you don't mind me answering this!

It usually takes hours to write a single update even if the plot is ready in your mind. Moreover Alina also has other works to do in her real life. She gave us the last update 2 days ago. Let's patiently wait for her to update this!

Sorry if I sounded rude, I don't wish to😳

Originally posted by: Rajitha_rajji95

I'm sry.............

Rajitha you don't have to be sorry!

I understand your curiosity as I too am excited to read the next chapter

But we have to wait patiently😳 and let Alina create her magic!

Sorry if I hurt you unintentionally!

Originally posted by: Rajitha_rajji95

Alina ...yaar nxt update pls

Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

Hey Rajitha I hope you don't mind me answering this!

It usually takes hours to write a single update even if the plot is ready in your mind. Moreover Alina also has other works to do in her real life. She gave us the last update 2 days ago. Let's patiently wait for her to update this!

Sorry if I sounded rude, I don't wish to

Originally posted by: Rajitha_rajji95

I'm sry.............

Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

Rajitha you don't have to be sorry!

I understand your curiosity as I too am excited to read the next chapter

But we have to wait patiently and let Alina create her magic!

Sorry if I hurt you unintentionally!

Hi Minny! I'm about 1/3 done with the chapter but something came up that needed my attention. Please don't apologize...it honestly warms my heart to see how excited you are about my story because it makes it worth writing! It really motivates me! Lavy already knows what's been going on so that's why she was updating you. I am starting med school in a couple of months so I have a lot of paperwork and tests to get done. But, my goal is to finish this story by the end of the month because I am shifting in June so I will be busy packing 😆 then when I go home, I want to spend some time with family before starting school again. But, don't worry! I might have the chapter ready by tomorrow. ❤️ I really want to finish what I started.