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Back with part 6 of this update!!! This should be a thrilling one!😈 Happy reading lovelies! <3

Part 6

The scream that had been on Pooja's lips was stifled before it could escape. She felt a pounding on her head, as if she had been hit forcefully with a metal object. A black cloth was wound tightly around her lips, preventing even her muffled cries of pain and both her wrists and ankles were bound tightly behind her back with a thick rope. Her mind raced with a thousand different possibilities of where she was, but with each thought, a newfound layer of fear gripped her heart. The room was pitch black. She could barely see two feet in front of her. God. Please. I don't want to die.

She pulled at the rope on her wrist, trying to free her hands from its tight hold. No use. The rope was tied too tightly. She pulled again - this time with more force. She clasped her eyes shut, groaning at the pain that followed. She could feel the blisters that the repeated scrapes of the rope's material were causing on her wrist, but she couldn't stop. With her shoulder, she wiped off the beads of cold sweat that were forming on her face. No. Whatever it took, she had to get out of here. And she didn't know how long she had before whoever had done this came back. With another groan of anguish, she pulled her wrists apart again, trying to pry off the rope. But it served no purpose other than increasing her fatigue.

With a frustrated sob, she slid as quietly as she could across the floor, feeling around for anything that could help free her. Her back was stuck to the wall, sticking only to the edges of the room. Her heart pounded in her chest and she had to remind herself to breathe. Every second in this room seemed like a hopeless and desolate eternity. Please God. If you exist...Please. I don't want to die. I don't want to die. She repeated the words in her mind like a mantra as she struggled from wall to wall. With both her hands and legs tied, the journey was slow and seemed never ending. Suddenly, she felt a searing pain ripple through her back.

"Arghh!" She cried, trying her best to suppress the scream that was waiting to be released. Something had cut her across her back. Slowly, she moved against the wall, realizing, with some relief that if it was something sharp, she could use it to cut off the rope that was currently holding her prisoner. She moved her hands across the object. A nail? A nail in the wall? Her heart lurched and she sent a silent prayer to the lord above. She immediately got to work, sitting back against the wall and grating the rope against the sharp, protruding nail. Please. She begged. She didn't know exactly what she was pleading for. But it seemed to be the only word in her mind. Please, please, please, please. And then she thought of Kabir. She wondered if he had realized she was missing yet. It had only been a few minutes she had been tied up, but to Pooja, it felt nothing less than a lifetime. Each second was a battle for life. Kabir... she thought, stifling a sob. Help me.

*********

Kabir's mind was a whirlwind. And there was only one word that resonated within every cell in his being: Pooja. Where was she? Where had he taken her? He had less than 8 minutes now to find her. He had scoured every room in the top floor and was examining every room in the first floor. But she was no where to be found. I was gone for two minutes! He thought frantically, his anxiety increasing with every empty room. Think, Kabir. Where could he have taken her? He wouldn't have had the time to drag her all the way down to the basement. No. I'm missing something. But what?! He had 4 minutes left.

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The rope was definitely loosening. It just wasn't happening quick enough. The threads were becoming weaker. A few more moments and she would have it entirely off. The problem is, she didn't have a few more minutes, because it was at exactly that moment that her assailant chose to enter the room. She froze, turning towards him and slowing down her attempts to free her wrist. He just stood. Staring at her. He had a black hood on his head, preventing Pooja from seeing his full form. She saw only his eyes and they were enough to cause a shiver to run up her spine. Cold. Merciless. If death had eyes, they would be his. There was a maniacal fury in them.

Then she heard the slow pounding of his footsteps against the floor. Closer. He was getting closer. Pooja felt the hairs on her arms raise. His hands were at her eye level now. He clenched them, as if trying to control his fury, and knelt down in front of her. Slowly, he pulled down the black cloth from her mouth. Pooja let out a pained cry. "What do you want?!" She screamed, unable to bear the silence any longer. "Let me GO you ba*tard!" He stayed silent and crouched near her. Pooja stiffened, feeling every part of her grow cold. He was so close that she could feel his hot breath on the base of her neck. The feeling of repulsion she suddenly felt was indescribable. Every part of her being wanted to push him away and run as far as possible. His posture, his bulky figure, his rapid, irregular breathing and his reddened, animalistic eyes warned Pooja only of the impending danger standing in front of her. He moved closer to her, lips now near her ear. "2 more minutes, princess." He finally murmured.

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Two more minutes. That's all the time Kabir had left. His mind screamed in fear and he silently prayed for time to stop. He had checked every room in the house. Except one. The attic. Very few people knew there was an attic in the house and it hadn't been used for years. Kabir didn't even think he had the key to open the attic's door. But he had exhausted every other possibility and he knew there was a revolving pull-down ladder in Pooja's room that led directly up to the attic. Please, god. If I've done even one good deed in my life, let Pooja be in the attic. And let her be safe. He begged. He bounded up the steps and into Pooja's room. With all the strength he could muster, he rotated the lever hidden behind a bookshelf in her room. Slowly but surely, the steps lowered down. 1 minute and 20 seconds. The steps were rickety and unstable from lack of use but Kabir didn't care. He bounded up the steps taking two at a time. The stairs complained under his weight but held strong. Thirty seconds later, he was in front of the attic door. 50 seconds to go. How was he going to pry this door open? He frantically shook the doorknob, willing it to open. But the door was locked from the inside. From the inside??! That had to mean that...Pooja...He stepped backward, and ran towards the door, trying to knock it down with his shoulder. But the hard wooden build of the door allowed it to stand strong. God, please. He pleaded. He ran backward, trying once more and hoping for better luck. This time, the door seemed to falter a little. It was coming loose! Kabir had only 10 seconds to go. With a final cry of frustration, he kicked at the door, hoping and praying that his efforts would be sufficient.

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The sound of a door crashing down startled Pooja, but was soon replaced by a flood of relief upon seeing the person responsible for it. "Kabir!" She sobbed. Kabir felt as if this was the first time in a whole of 10 minutes that he had taken a breath. Pooja. She was safe. As he rushed towards her to help her up, he was intercepted by Pooja's aggressor.

"Kabir," he said lazily. "Glad you could make it to our little party." He chuckled. He motioned towards the door that now lay flat on the floor. "I see your army training finally paid off," Pooja noticed Kabir's face transform from relief to immediate fury. "I won't hesitate to show you the other skills that an army officer possesses if you don't step out of my way in the next two seconds, as*hole." Kabir growled. The man raised his hands as if in surrender. "What's the rush, Kabir? We've got all night! Let's make this fun. What do you say?"

"I say, 'Piss off'" Kabir said, before moving around the man in black and heading towards Pooja. "Are you okay?" He whispered. "Are you hurt?" She shook her head. He reached for the rope around her ankles. "Come on, let's get out of here."

The man cleared his throat. "Unfortunately, I can't let you do that, Kabir." Kabir whirled around. "Our deal was that if I play your stupid game and find Pooja within 10 minutes, we would be done. And I've found her." The man sighed, pulling up a stool and sitting down. Get that damn mask off your face, Kabir thought. He pulled a cigarette out of his pocket and lit it. "Sometimes I wonder," the man said thoughtfully. "If you're really this dimwitted or you just pretend to be, Kabir." He shook his head. "I said, if you find Pooja within 10 minutes, you'd see her alive." He motioned towards the tied up girl in front of the two men. "I held up my end of the deal. But remind me, Kabir. I can't seem to remember ever mentioning that I'd let her go?" He rubbed a finger against his chin. Kabir felt his entire body trembling in anger.

"You absolute piece of shit," he murmured. "What is it you want from us?"

The stranger laughed. "Sorry," he said, trying to find his composure. "I just find it hilarious that you consider yourself important enough for me to want ANYTHING from you. I stopped respecting you the minute you became Pooja's pet dog at her company," he spewed, disgusted. He motioned towards the girl. "All I want, is to play a game. With her. And now, since you've so kindly invited yourself into the party, you can contribute!" He raised two fingers towards the door. Immediately, 5 bulky men entered. Two of them gripped Rani by the shoulders and the other three carried a gun and rope.

"RANI!" Pooja screamed. She couldn't breathe. It felt as if someone had punched her in the gut. Her baby sister...being held captive by two gigantic men. And now she was being tied up. She felt dizzy. Out of the corner of her eye, she noticed the other three men shoving Kabir back against a chair and tying him up. On one side there was Rani and on the other, there was Kabir.

Pooja turned to the man in black. "Who are you," she finally whispered. He sauntered close to her and with a light grin, pulled off his mask.

Pooja's face ran cold. The entire room grew quiet. No one knew what to say. "Dhruv," Pooja choked, barely able to utter his name. He smirked, shoving his hands into his pocket. "I see you still remember my name." Kabir struggled against the man, growling Dhruv's name. "Dhruv!" He yelled. "This isn't you. Stop this right now! Please, let us all go."

Dhruv's head whisked towards his brother. "Shut the f*ck up Kabir. I'm done taking advice from you. I'm done hearing everyone say that you're the perfect brother...the perfect son...the perfect man...the person who can do no wrong. Oh no. How can Kabir Mittal be WRONG? NO! It's always DHRUV that's wrong. Dhruv is the bad one. Kabir is the saint. Well Kabir, I'm about to make that a reality. I AM bad. REALLY bad. And right now, I could care LESS about you."

He turned to Pooja. "Now, where were we?" He asked, returning the smile onto his face. He's crazy. Pooja realized. He's absolutely insane. He snapped his fingers, remembering. "Ah, yes, that's right. Our game. Remind me again Pooja, why you deceived me? Why did you leave me? For revenge, I believe it was? Against my father. Because he killed your father." He grinned. "So you think you're some kind of saint, then Pooja?" He rolled his eyes. "Like brother, like wife," He shook his head. "Both of you believe you're the definition of perfection while the rest us here are just the leftover trash". He gave her a disgusted glare. "But that's about to change." He walked around, facing Rani. "Twenty years ago, my father made a choice." He picked up the gun on the table in front of Kabir and Rani. "For the well-being of his family, he killed his best friend. It was a decision he made due to which you decided to take revenge on my whole family." He moved towards Pooja, bending close to her and meeting her eyes. The smile plastered on his face was sinister. "And now I'm giving you the same choice. What will it be, Pooja? Will you save your sister...your only family...or will you choose your friend?"

End

So guysss hope that was somewhat thrilling!!! Tried my best! This is my first time writing a thriller :P Please leave comments! And also, what do you think Pooja will choose and how will they get saved?😈

Edited by -Sanjana- - 5 years ago
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Also, I may turn this into an FF instead of an SS <3 dunno yet LOLL

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Read part 3-6 in one go nd dear u doing fab job. . . . Especially last part was best of all. . .

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Nice write-up Sanjana.... The thrilling element glued me... I read the SS or may be future FF in a go.

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Superb,, waiting to know Wat pooja will do 😍😍

Update soon dear 😊

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Originally posted by: shruzzy

Read part 3-6 in one go nd dear u doing fab job. . . . Especially last part was best of all. . .

Thank you so much dear 🤗 So happy you're enjoying it!

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Originally posted by: subbuappu

Nice write-up Sanjana.... The thrilling element glued me... I read the SS or may be future FF in a go.

Aww thank you sooo much! This means a lot🤗 It's my first time writing a thriller so I'm glad it's coming out okay!

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Originally posted by: PRACHU13

Superb,, waiting to know Wat pooja will do 😍😍

Update soon dear 😊

Thank you darling🤗 Will try my best to update ASAP!

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Thank you 🤗 I really appreciate it!

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Alrighttt!! Here's the next part <3 WHOOO WILL POOJAAA CHOOOSEE😈

Part 7

"And now I'm giving you the same choice. What will it be, Pooja? Will you save your sister...your only family...or will you choose your friend?"

Silence prevailed the room. For a moment, Pooja thought she might have misheard Dhruv. He was asking her to choose between Kabir and her sister?! She swallowed the bile that was quickly rising in her throat. Part of her was appalled at seeing this new side to Dhruv. This dangerous, vengeful and murderous Dhruv. And the other part felt pained at the knowledge that somewhere, she had been responsible for creating this monster.

Her mind reeled back to the times they had spent together. Dhruv's romantic date...his care and concern for her when she had broken her arm...the adoring, puppy-dog gazes that he would always direct her way. She had always been irritated by it. But one thing had been certain. Dhruv loved her. And maybe that's why Jahnvi Mittal hadn't thought twice before treating him like a use-and-throw napkin. She knew she always had control over him. But now? This Dhruv? She no longer recognized him. His eyes were reddened with fury and his lips were contorted in a strange sort of sinister smirk. This wasn't Dhruv. Her eyes flickered to Kabir and she realized he must have been having the same sort of thoughts, for his face had grown to be a ghastly shade of white. She was broken out of her thoughts by the voice of the man in front of her.

"It's an easy game." He murmured. "Simply choose who you want to murder and I'll direct this gun into the hands of one of my dependable men." He said nodding towards the bulky guards in front of Pooja and Kabir. "Then I'll let you and your chosen survivor leave and you'll never see or hear from me again." He shrugged as if the murderous game of hot potato he was suggesting was as normal as talking about the weather with a stranger. Pooja swallowed, trying to find the words to speak.

"Dhruv," she began. "You know this isn't the same situation as your father was in 20 years ago. He made a choice without being at gun point. He wasn't forced to choose between his family and his friend. He killed my father due to his own selfishness." Dhruv's eyes flashed with anger. Pooja continued, bravely. "But what you're doing Dhruv, is criminal. You're forcing me to pick a side. Your father wasn't forced. That's the difference."

"IT DOESN'T MATTER!" Dhruv roared. "The end result is STILL the same. Someone lives. And someone dies. Because of a choice that YOU make Pooja Sharma." He knelt down so close to her that she could feel his hot breath on her cheek. She closed her eyes trying to stop the tremor in her limbs. "Dhruv..." she could hear the warning in Kabir's voice. He smirked, eyeing Pooja a last time before backing off. "So what's it going to be Pooja?"

She shook her head. "I won't choose, Dhruv. I refuse to choose." Dhruv laughed. "You b*tch," he growled. "You haven't changed a BIT since you left me, have you?" He grinned. "You still think YOU get to make all the rules. Guess what princess?" He said, slamming his fist against the table, causing Pooja to shirk backward. "Life. Isn't. Fair. And if you don't choose, they BOTH die." Still staring at Pooja, he waved at the two guards who lifted their respective guns and neared Kabir and Rani.

Pooja screamed. "STOP! NO DON'T HURT THEM!" She cried. She could hear Rani's flustered sobs. Her baby sister. If Jahnvi Mittal was placed in such a situation to choose between Kabir and Rani, the choice would have been clear. She wouldn't have wasted a moment contemplating and Kabir would have been dead quicker than she could utter his name. But Pooja was not Jahnvi. And Pooja was not a murderer. She was NOT PK Mittal.

Her eyes flickered to Kabir, frantic and questioning. How do we get out?! Her eyes seemed to scream. Don't make me choose, Kabir! She received a quick nod from Kabir. He looked surprisingly calm. Why are you not panicking?! Pooja wanted to cry. It was as if this conversation was having no impact whatsoever on Kabir. He simply sat there, listening. And then she realized. A plan. Kabir had a plan. He was going to do something. But what?! And then, in a quick motion, she saw Kabir's eyes turn to the clock in the corner of the room. A clock?! Why is he telling me to look at the clock?! Pooja wondered, trying to connect the dots. "I don't have all day, Pooja." Dhruv spat with impatience. Pooja looked at him, pretending that she was deciding between who to sacrifice. What does Kabir mean?! Why the clock?! Kabir's eyes flickered to the clock once more. A clock. A clock shows time. Time. He needs time?! He needs me to buy time! And suddenly it hit her. I need to distract Dhruv.

She turned to Dhruv. "Why are you doing this?" She asked. "Why do you want to kill your own brother?" He looked at her for a moment and then burst out laughing. "What I want? WHAT I WANT, POOJA?! Has it EVER been about what I want?!" She could feel the anger emanating off of him. "No. It hasn't! It's always been about YOU Pooja. YOUR father. YOUR family. YOUR revenge. Where does Dhruv Mittal fall into your list of responsibilities Pooja?!" She was silent, feeling each accusation of his hit her like a knife to the chest. "Nowhere. I am nowhere Pooja. In all the YEARS that we were together...together?!" He scoffed. "It would be a crime to use that word to describe any part of our relationship. You USED me." He growled. "Played with my feelings. Played with my TRUST. Played with my LOVE. And for what purpose Pooja?! Because you believe my father was a MONSTER for deceiving and killing your father?!"

She could see the spark of fury return to his eyes. "If he was a monster, then you must be an incarnation of the devil itself, Pooja. If my father broke Ashok Sharma's trust, then you broke my trust, faith, love and every feeling I had for you. If my father killed Ashok Sharma, then you killed Dhruv Mittal. Inside and out." He neared her, coming dangerously close to her lips. "So answer my question, Pooja Sharma.... What is the difference between you and the man you've been taking revenge from from all these years? What is the difference between you and PK Mittal?"

A cold silence had fallen over the room. Pooja felt her hands grow cold. She was numb. What is the difference between you and P.K. Mittal? You and P.K. Mittal? It felt as if the blood in her body had simply stopped flowing. What had Dhruv just said? Her and PK Mittal? The same? No. It couldn't be. It wasn't possible. Her mind was in a whirlwind. This was the man whose morals, ideologies, habits and ways of life she had been fighting all these years. He was exactly the kind of man she despised. But somewhere, over the years, as she had been fighting silently against him...had she BECOME another PK Mittal? It couldn't be true...could it? Her face had grown as white as a sheet.

"I'm just showing you the mirror, Pooja." Dhruv murmured. "The truth hurts, doesn't it? It hurts to realize that this belief of yours that you're perfect...that you're 'sarvagun sampanna' is actually nothing more than an illusion...a 'bhram'. You blame my father for choosing his family over his friend. What are you doing right now Pooja? If you were the perfect person that you seem to think you are...would you have just now asked me why I want to kill my brother?" He smirked. "Your mouth won't say it, but your mind has already decided it. If you had to choose between saving your family and saving a friend, your family would always win." Her eyes moved to Kabir. He nodded.

Pooja glared up at Dhruv. "No. You're wrong." She said. He looked at her expectantly. "If I were made to choose between my friend and family, I would choose to save them both. Even if it meant sacrificing myself in the process." Quickly, she pulled off the rope from her wrist and wrapped it around Dhruv's neck, choking him.

He growled, trying to pry her off, but her grip was firm. She put all her strength into her hold, knowing she was fighting for the life of both Kabir and her sister. The next moment, Kabir was out of his seat. He had a blade in his hand that he had used to cut the rope holding him prisoner and was using it to fight off the guards. With a quick slash at the neck, two of the five hefty guards had fallen. "KABIR!!!" Pooja cried, realizing she wouldn't be able to hold Dhruv down for much longer. He rushed towards her, kicking off the remaining three guards that were repeatedly surrounding him. "UNTIE RANI!" He demanded. Pooja hesitated, wondering if Kabir would be alright in dealing with three guards and a furious Dhruv. "GO!" Kabir screamed. Wasting no further time, Pooja ran to her sister, untying her wrists and feet.

Finally freed, both girls ran towards the table and grabbed a hold of a gun each. "STOP!!!" Pooja screamed. "STOP RIGHT NOW. GET THE HELL AWAY FROM KABIR. ALL OF YOU!" She yelled, eyes flying from one person to another. Slowly and fearfully, the guards began shifting away. "MOVE!" Rani ordered. At gunpoint, they forced the guards into the three chairs that had previously been used to hold Kabir, Rani and Pooja captive. The girls held the gun against Dhruv and the three hefty men while Kabir secured the rope around them. It was only Dhruv to be dealt with now.

Kabir turned to him. "Dhruv," he said, eyes becoming moist with tears. "What have you done?" He walked over to his brother with shaky legs, eyeing him up and down. "The person in front of me isn't my brother," he whispered softly. "The things you said today, Dhruv..." A tear slipped down Kabir's eyes. "Do you really believe I have misconceptions that I am perfect? That I am someone who can't do wrong? Dhruv...I don't want to be perfect. I'm not trying to be perfect. I'm not perfect, you're not perfect and Pooja's not perfect. You're right. Being Sarvagun Sampanna is a Bhram. That's all there is to it. Perfection is unattainable." He placed his hand on Dhruv's shoulder.

"But you know what? There would be no need for love if perfection was possible. It's the small and imperfect things that we love about a person, Dhruv. Love arises from imperfection...from our each having unique perceptions and beliefs...from always needing forgiveness. And that's what you need to give Pooja today, Dhruv." He said, squeezing his shoulder. Dhruv's eyes were lined with pain and exhaustion. As if he himself was tired of this new and vengeful person he had become. "Forgive her Dhruv. And let her go. You showed Pooja her mirror and now you need to see yours. Pooja isn't Jahnvi. And Pooja was never your wife. Don't let the pain she caused you in the past define the person you become in the future." He whispered.

There was silence in the room. Pooja couldn't say anything. But she knew the embarrassment in her eyes spoke volumes. Dhruv seemed lost and confused. As if he had woken up from a strange dream and was unable to recognize where he was. And though the atmosphere was still tense, the anger seemed to have diffused into a deep, melancholy ache in the hearts of everyone in the room. They all knew this chapter was over. And even though this may not have been the best way, it had still given an opportunity for Dhruv to release his pent up anger and frustrations towards both Pooja and his brother. It was a step in the right direction. And when Pooja looked into Dhruv's eyes in the next moment, she saw no sign of hatred or anger. She saw only pain and defeat. As if he had finally recognized that the woman he had considered for years to be his would never be a permanent part in his life. Understanding. Together, in that tiny attic in the Sharma house, Dhruv, Rani, Kabir and Pooja had all taken their first steps towards moving on.

End

So I want to build this story up further and focus on Pooja's trauma after this incident, her past, how she, Dhruv and Kabir all learn to forgive each other and ultimately also how Pooja and Kabir fall in love <3

Hopefully you guys are enjoying this journey with me so farrr! There's lots more to come!

Love you,

Sanjana

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