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TINAMONI thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Just beutiful . .
Please update soon..
Many thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Nice update πŸ˜›
Everything is going so smooth in life then letter came & disturbed all smoothness.

Mj is actually doubting on tara...

Why he didn't asked her...

Feel bad for tara


Keep updating
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Mrityunjay's mind is not in a good condition and he is doubting Tara's love now!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Actually he is jealous of the person Tara loved😊

He is thinking that Tara had never chosen him and only loves him as she is his wife and it is her duty!!!!
yaa

He actually thinks Yug is so lucky as Tara had chosen him, is he crazy??
yes , he is crazy πŸ˜†

Tara notices everything about Mrityunjay and noticed that he had no interest in the preparations for the visit to his in-laws' house!!!!
She is smart woman and understands everything 😊

He is recalling his old memories but he had never noticed anything different between Yug and Tara!!!!
He is recalling his memories not the exact situation what things backπŸ˜‰

But the idiot cannot seen to be able to remember Tara blushing or smiling at him!!!!
YesπŸ˜†

So Mrityunjay had only thought of Tara as a friend and only fell for her after their wedding was fixed!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
He is sadha sada sareef ladkaπŸ˜‰

But Tara had loved him for so long and wanted to see the same love in his eyes!!!!❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
Tara longed to see the love

So he had never noticed that Tara liked him or seen the love in her eyes!!!!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ
He was busy studyingπŸ˜†

He had only cared for her as a good friend!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
yaaπŸ˜†

Mrityunjay is trying to convince himself that it was Tara's past and he is her present but can't!!!!
It is very difficult for anyone to convince

It was so sweet when Tara hugged him from the back but he didn't tell her anything!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
yes,it was😳

He should not behave like this, after all he has her now!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
Tara knows something is wrong with him and she is really hurt that he is behaving like this with her!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
He should appreciate what he have but he too is human and is hurt with just the thought of Tara loved someone else
Tara is hurt because of MJ's behavior

Good that Mrityunjay knows that he is wrong but he cannot hide his frustration!!!!
yes, after all he too is human

What does he want now??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Does he wants to leave her??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Don't knowπŸ˜•

It was awesome the way you expressed Mrityunjay's feelings!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thanks😳

Poor Tara is crying as she doesn't have any clue why he is not talking to her!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The situation has become so complicated!!!!

Whatever may be the past but he has no right to behave like this with her over it!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑
yaa😑😑

I wonder how he would make it up to her once he finds out he was so stupid!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
For that you need to read till the endπŸ˜‰

This part was superb!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thanks for loving it and for the sooo long comment πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ronshaan

hi.. I feel happy to be the 1st to respond on it, Must say thanks for PM SO i know there is new update coming in.

see no matter how great lover he is or she is.. when doubt comes in it does bring rift b/w them. I know he will read more and will know that actually that lucky guy wasn't someone else, it was him and he was so dumb to never notice it. he recalled his memory thinking he never notice something different but he never noticed her blushing or smiling or acting differently toward him. when u r in love u do look different when u are with the one u love..
any ways Nice progress, looking fw to hear the rest of it.



Wow!!!πŸ‘ U are first to commentπŸ‘


Agree with you doubt creates rifts, lets see how their life progresses 😊

Yes, when you are in love you see thinks differently 😊
πŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for loving, reading and commenting πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ronshaan


Oh yes in the end he might slap on his back head and say Ofo MJ u r such a fool , u couldn't guess it then u couldn't guess it now.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
but seeing his behavior he will have to make it up to tara and also be sorry "Aray kisi ki diary padhna achi baat nahiii" πŸ₯±
Thanks for writing it so nicely that when new update was up i came to read it


Magic happens wait for endπŸ˜‰

Thanks for loving itπŸ˜ƒ
Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Khadeja


First of all thanks for the PM Archu... πŸ€—
I am such a lazy reader though you always send PM after every update πŸ˜›
I know u will read whenever you will get time😊

Basically MJ's condition was horrible ...
He was thinking Tara never chose him as love of her life...
Now, she was loving him as she is his wife
He thought Yug is so lucky
Poor MJ he has gone illogical

So, next day they were going to Tara's home .
But MJ had no interest in that πŸ₯±
yeah, he was in his own world of confuse

Tara had also noticed it.
MJ just thought all things about Yug and Tara.
Never he thought about he was also there πŸ˜•
He got the point that they were nothing more than classmates but his ego said they were happy πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’
Tara is his wife she knows him well
Ego creates all problems


So MJ never thought about Tara more than a friend .
He had fallen for her after their marriage was fixed 😊
yeah, for him she was just one of classmate

Now, got the point why MJ couldn't understand it was only him πŸ˜›
He never noticed Tara like Tara used to notice him.
He cared for her as a good friend 😊
smart girl πŸ˜‰

MJ couldn't convince himself saying it was only Tara's past
He also didn't responded to Tara as she was expecting πŸ˜”
She knew something was wrong with him...
yes, he was not able to convince himself about anything

And finally MJ brusted out his thought 😳
Tara hadn't any clue what he said
And he didn't answer to her πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’
His words are hurting her

Situation was become so complicated
MJ knew he was not doing really right but he also couldn't hide his own frustration
Poor Tara was crying πŸ˜”
unwillingly things are happening and worsening their condition

I don't know how MJ will make up to Tara for this behavior πŸ˜†
He is going to think himself the stupid one πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
will see that πŸ˜†

Superb update Archu ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Wonderfully you wrote MJ's situation πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
You are an excellent writer ⭐️
I love this story πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ



Thanks for loving it so much πŸ˜ƒ


Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Superb update as always!
Beautifuly written! πŸ‘ πŸ˜› ❀️
yaar yeh MJ...feeling bad for Tara!
thanks for pm! πŸ˜›



Thanks for loving it so much πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Just beutiful . .

Please update soon..
Many thanks for the pm..


Thanks for loving it πŸ˜ƒ

Updating it as soon as possible
Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice update πŸ˜›

Everything is going so smooth in life then letter came & disturbed all smoothness.

Mj is actually doubting on tara...

Why he didn't asked her...

Feel bad for tara


Keep updating



Life should have some bumps so that we can realize the importance of smooth road 😊

MJ can't ask her, otherwise it will be reveled that he read her diary πŸ˜›

Tara is suffering


Thanks for loving it πŸ˜ƒ

Updating as soon as possible
Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: ronshaan

waiting for new update.


I was busy with my work at office, so update got delayed😳

Thanks for loving it sooo much πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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