Mriara OS SERIES..... OS WPMAWPB UPDATED ON 26-01-17 ON PAGE 11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Beautiful part 😊

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Who is watching Tara from a distance??😛 😛 😛 😛

I am sure it is Mrityunjay!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The poem is absolutely beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks

Mrityunjay describes Tara in it so fabulously and it expresses his love and admiration for her wonderfully!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

The letter expressed Mrityunjay's situation and his feelings very well!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

It was heart wrenching!!!!🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺

Poor Tara is so alone without her Mrityunjay and how will she manage all alone??😭 😭 😭 😭

😭

This part is fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Archi21

Awesome update dear👏

Poetry was marvelous👏

Thank You

Bahut khubi se MJ ki halat bayan ki 👏👏👏

Poor Tara kaise sahe itna dukh

Kaun hai jo chhup ke dekh raha hai 😕

"Koi Jo hai apna sa par hai baigana...

Aankhein ho jiski gehra samunder...

Baatein aisi ki dil jeet le...

Dekhe usse toh dil moh le..."

Very good Teacher ji 👏👏

Please update soon😃

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Hi Ila !!! 😊

Glad to see a new OS series 😛
You have watched the epis at hotstar and decided to write ...
That's really cool 😊

This is one of my fab track that you choose to write 😛

The banner is beautiful ⭐️

Thanks...

So MJ had died already and Tara was living a miserable life

MJ had written those lines for Tara ❤️

Yup hope you liked...

But Tara should know who could write these 😊

Like the prologue 👏👏👏

And welcome to forum 😃

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Mriara OS: First Meeting

Someone was watching Tara from distance ...
That was must be Mrityunjay 😛
But he couldn't go to her
Tara remembered about the envelope and read that ...
She found out that was from Mrityunjay

The poem was lovely ⭐️

Thanks for liking...

Mrityunjay also wrote a letter 😊

He was telling how he felt when their marriage happened ..
He didn't want to ruin a girl's life
But what could he do ..
They were mean to be together 😃

He wanted a promise that Tara would never cry
But how could Tara hold herself 😒
It was very sad to see Tara's state 😔

This part was great 👏
You write emotional scene very well 😊

Thanks for the compliment...

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Finally you updated it no matter how long time you took.

Painful part.

Tara got MJs letter and it all explained why he didn't want her to get married to him.

Continue soon