Mriara OS SERIES..... OS WPMAWPB UPDATED ON 26-01-17 ON PAGE 11 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome OS! well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Tara seems to get lost in the letter getting happy and reading it over and over again
very Interesting OS
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Hi Druvika,
I read the next part of your OS. it was nice, good to see that she was reading his letter n somehow it was connected to what she was doing, she just wake up, jaise MJ ko pata ho wo abhi uth ke hi padhne wali hay yeh khat. So it was good.
Nice progress ... good feeling in letter. Thanks for PM.
keep writing πŸ‘πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
First meeting:


Tara is alone & thinking abt mj.

But who is this man ... why he is watching Tara &f in anger????

Finally Tara opened the letter.
So much pain on in this letter.
Mj described Tara beautifully.

Nice poem...

So bad Tara is in deep pain & no one to console her

Whole chapter was well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Poem is really intense & romantic...

This chapter remind me first meeting of Tara & mj in reception.
U fully justified the whole scene.
It was NYC chapter
Continue ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Ajnabi si

Sorry for late reply πŸ˜”

It was a great part πŸ‘

Tara slept while reading

Again the poem was very lovely πŸ‘

And MJ knows his Tara very well ❀️
Well, he remembered about their first meeting 😊
Yes, it was mesmerizing incident

He mentioned it was like he became alive 😊
And he gets courage from her smile 😊 😊 ❀️
So he wants to see her smiling face always 😊

At least remembering the incident and reading letter Tara smiled πŸ˜›
Good Tara kept hide the letters ...

Thanks for the PM Ila πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Tara woke up and immediately started reading the next letter!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

The poem is beautiful and describes their first meeting perfectly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

So this is what Mrityunjay had felt when she had fallen into his arms!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Mrityunjay seems to know Tara kab kya karegi and even knew she would read his letter after waking up!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

He always did love adoring his sleeping beauty Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The trip and catch sequence was just the best!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It was the first time they had face to face and seen each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

It was wonderful to know Mrityunjay's feelings at that time and he expressed it so romantically!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Even I wish that time could have just stopped in that moment!!!!

At least Tara smiled reading and then remembering those moments!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Now Nandini is copying Nirmala and having green tea in the morning!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Good that Tara hid those letters because Nandini enjoys torturing Tara far too much!!!! πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

This part is fantastic!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘







Thanks for your comment i was happy reading full comments
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: taahir004

Tara seems to get lost in the letter getting happy and reading it over and over again
very Interesting OS



Thanks Taahir for commmenting although you are not in this forum i m glad you acknowledged my work its worth while your comment means a lot...


Really i know you dont know about show still you feel the essence thnc for commenting...


Looking forward to see a comment on Maaneet story too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronshaan

Hi Druvika,

I read the next part of your OS. it was nice, good to see that she was reading his letter n somehow it was connected to what she was doing, she just wake up, jaise MJ ko pata ho wo abhi uth ke hi padhne wali hay yeh khat. So it was good.
Nice progress ... good feeling in letter. Thanks for PM.
keep writing πŸ‘πŸ˜Š





Thnc for commenting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: kumari27

First meeting:


Tara is alone & thinking abt mj.

But who is this man ... why he is watching Tara &f in anger????


Well Lets see it will be revealed slowly slowly...

Finally Tara opened the letter.
So much pain on in this letter.
Mj described Tara beautifully.

Nice poem...

So bad Tara is in deep pain & no one to console her

Whole chapter was well written





Thnx for the reply

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