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Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sirf tum

Roshni aur andheron mein,
Sitaron si chamakti hui
chand ki thandak mein,
Tumhara ehsaas rehta hai dil ke angan mein
Ankho se behti hai dard ki siskiyaan
Banjar ban gayi zindagi , har taraf hai viraniyaan
Sur nahi , sannaton pe palti hai ab har
dhun Har baat mein sirf tum hi tum...

Iss dil ki har angdayon mein tumhara naam
Tumhari baton se sajti thi zindagi hardam
Ban gayi ho parchai meri , mila tumse sukoon
Tumhare bina soona hai khawabon ka jahaan
Dhundhle ho gaye sare sapne , sare raste ho gaye gum
Har lamha, har pal, har yadon mein
Sirf tum hi tum...

Pyaar ke do meethe pal ,
khamoshi se lipti hui ek ek mulakaat
Katon jaise chubti hai har vo sari baat
Hawa ki jhonke se bunti ankahi kitni batein
Narazgi tumhari , roothna , manana, sare jazbaat
Yaad jab ati ho tum kho jatey hain sab lafz
Ankhe ho jati hain num
Bewajah zindagi mein jeene ka ek hi maqsad banke
Rehti ho tum Sirf tum...

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The poem is just perfect for MriAra!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The first stanza reminds me of their Diwali at the UC!!!!

It is soo romantic and emotional!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The second stanza seems to describe the state of MJ's heart during the Leader track!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

The third stanza seems to express MJ remembering and yearning for Tara while in jail!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

The title is apt for the poem as MJ ke liye bas Tara hi hai!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

I especially loved the last time as she really was the reason for his existence!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The poem is fabulous Nira!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome lines!!!👏👏👏

First stanza remind me off diwali half face off!!!!😳😳

Middle stanza. Leader track⭐️⭐️

Last stanza Tara ka mj ke bina widow ki life😭

Thanks for sharing⭐️⭐️

Edited by kumari27 - 9 years ago

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Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Wonderful Poem Di ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Perfect for MriAra !!!
Title is also suitable 👏

"Bewajah zindagi mein jeene ka ek hi maqsad banke
Rehti ho tum Sirf tum..."

Love this line 😳

Great work Di 👏 👏 👏

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Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27
Awesome lines!!!👏👏👏
First stanza remind me off diwali half face off!!!!😳😳

Middle stanza. Leader track⭐️⭐️

Last stanza Tara ka mj ke bina widow ki life😭

Thanks for sharing⭐️⭐️

Thank you so much Pooja for liking it...

It was my first effort to write a poem on MriAra...

Glad that you liked it...!!!! 😳