*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September - Page 35

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Part 16:-

"Chhavi, is everything fine?" he asked concerned.


"Yes..." she said slowly but her tone said that there was a lot which was she was hiding.


"No you have to tell me clearly what's the problem." He demanded.


She parted and looked into his eyes, "You were right Viraf."


"Kya? Kis bare me?" he asked further.


"About Vinny." He just looked at her and waited for her to continue. "She knew everything. I mean about Pracheen." He gave an expression which said see I told you. "She even helped him so many times as she wanted to bring us closer." She explained. Viraf again gave an expression of see I told you. "I never knew that my best friend can do that to me."


"That's why she was saying so many wrong things about me to you...and sometimes about me and Saba." He stated.


"Now I can understand all that." She made a sad face.


Viraf could clearly understand what was going through her mind. He moved closer to her and hugged her tight. "It's ok Chhavi...let it go."


"No I can't." she said still feeling hurt.


"Chhavi." He called her name softly, taking her hands in his. "I know how you must be feeling right now but I think you should not think about it anymore. Let the bad experiences and things go."


She looked at him adoringly and asked, "How can you be so sweet and normal? Don't you ever lose your temper?"


He gave a small smile and said, "I do...trust me. I do sometimes...jaise jab woh ..." And he stopped not wanting to remind her of the moments that she had faced which humiliated her.


"Woh kya Viraf?" she wanted to know how he was feeling when Pracheen was misbehaving with her.


"Let it go Chhavi..."


"No I want to know what you were feeling? Tell me...I want to know everything, whatever is in your heart." She said.


Viraf looked at her, "Is it necessary?"


"Yes it is, it will make our bond stronger. What if I hide my feelings from you, then?" she questioned back.


Taking a deep breath he said, "I wanted to surprise you and when I saw him there I was unhappy. I didn't know how he found out that information that you are at home today. I was not angry but when he...he tried to touch you and was...forcing you...I don't know Chhavi ... when he spat out those horrible words for you...I was unable to keep my cool. How dare he speak such words to anyone? He is a sick, bloody bas***d...and he even wanted to..." He stopped suddenly looking at her possessively. "You know...no one has the right to touch you except me." He said hugging her passionately. "No one has the right to kiss these luscious lips." And he gave her a passionate kiss on her lips to which Chhavi responded with equal passion. "No one has the right to kiss this lovely throat of yours. I just want to kiss each and every part of you like this." He said moving down and kissing down her throat to the crook of her neck.


Chhavi had never felt that much loved and here someone was so passionate about her. It was a new feeling for her and she was enjoying it. Her closed eyes and her gestures were fully supporting Viraf and he didn't want to stop as well. "How can someone ever think to touch this waist of yours which fits between my hands?" he spoke and moved down to her waist kissing and nibbling each part of it. His fingers gently rubbed her navel and Chhavi moaned with ecstasy.


She just took his name as if encouraging him in his act, "Viraf...I am all yours...make me yours tonight forever." Her lovely moans were making him more sexually alert and for some time he forgot everything and just wanted to go with the flow. Viraf was unable to stop himself and Chhavi's aroused state was itself alluring and inviting. He moved upwards and once again captured her lips and his hands started circling her beautiful mounds over her tee pressing them.


He halted suddenly thinking something. When Chhavi didn't feel his touch for some time she opened her eyes. Her eyes asked him, "Why did you stop?'


"Are you ready for this?' his eyes asked.


"Yes completely.' Her eyes responded.


Now he didn't need any more affirmation and he just moved forward to complete the next level of their relationship.


Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Mujhe aadat bana lo ek buri
Kehna yeh tumse hai


He carried her in his arms and brought her to the most appropriate place where they should have been, not breaking their eye contact. Chhavi could sense the passion rising on both sides equally. His eyes almost made her blush and she was unable to look into his eyes.


Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Sar pe hai, kab se hai


He placed her on the bed and just kept on looking at her for sometime as if seeking her permission again. He bent over her kissing her forehead and came down to her feet kissing her both feet. He started kissing her upwards from her toe to her forehead making Chhavi hold the bed sheet tighter and she was unable to sit straight for so long.


Jism ke samandar mein
Ek lehar jo thehari hai
Usme thodi harqat hone do


She wanted to lie down and she lay softly on the bed. He reached up to her face and their eyes met for sometime and Chhavi closed her eyes blushing as if she wanted to proceed further. He again captured her lips and she gave in as if she almost wanted to submerge in their passionate kiss forever. He invaded her mouth as it was his territory.


Shayari sunati inn do nasheeli aankhon ko
Mujhko paas aake padhne do


"Chhavi open your eyes..." he requested her as he wanted to drown in the beauty of her eyes. He always loved those beautiful eyes which spoke volumes to him. She opened her eyes and looked at him. He could see the same intense passion in her eyes which he wanted to see before moving ahead.


Ishq ki khwahishon mein
Bheeg lo baarishon mein
Aao na...


Their eyes met and she gave her affirmation. He kissed her forehead and moved down nibbling her throat and kissing them passionately. She was enjoying his each and every touch on her bare body parts. He kissed her shoulders and came down to one of the most sensitive areas of a woman's body. He slowly removed her tee and her almost bare upper body increased his excitement to explore her more.


Tumhe paakar na khone ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai


They fit in his hands automatically and he pressed them softly letting Chhavi moan with pleasure. Soon Chhavi's fingers started ruffling his hair and the way she increased the intensity of her actions encouraged him. He made her sit up gently and unhooked the piece of cloth which was preventing his vision from beholding the beauty of his woman.


Mujhe nazron mein rakh lo tum kahin
Kehna yeh tumse hai


Chhavi felt shy and now she was unable to keep her eyes open and so she closed it feeling the pleasure of her man tasting her bit by bit. He was awestruck to see that naked beauty and he couldn't resist himself from tasting it. He took this beautiful treasure in his mouth and started sucking it. Chhavi was now moving into another world which was a start to becoming a woman.


Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Sar pe hai, kab se hai


He tasted them fulfilling his hunger. He was hungry for them yes hungry...he himself didn't know how long he waited for this day. Like every normal guy who wants to make his woman his and love her more and more, he had imagined this day and now when this day has come he was now unable to control his manly desires.


Hmm.. rokna nahi mujhko
Zidd pe aa gayi hoon main
Iss qadar deewanapan chadha


Chhavi was loving the pleasure caused by him on her mounds. She was moaning and didn't want him to stop. She could now feel his manhood touching her lower parts ready to give her the ultimate satisfaction which she wanted. If she said she had never thought of this day then it would be a lie. She always wanted that day to come fast. Her desire for her to have him in her was equal.


Dekho na yahaan aake
Mera haal kaisa hai
Toot ke abhi tak na juda


After a long time, when his hunger satisfied for the time being he got down and his hands made patterns circling her waist arousing her and in between moans she said, "This is killing me Viraf, move ahead." She paused for a moment and blushed hard when she understood what she had said. Viraf loved her intentions.


Ab sambhalna nahi hai
Jo bhi hai woh sahi hai
Aao na...


He kissed her waist and explored each part of it making her moan louder and soon went down and within moments she was totally nude in front of him and he was just loving the bare beauty. His eyes feasted on her and his manly hunger wanted him to enter inside her and give her and himself the ultimate satisfaction.


Tumhe khud se milane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai


He tasted her feminism with his mouth increasing her passion on top and she was almost breathless when she found his mouth tasting her feminism. He wanted to explore everything in her and he did which made Chhavi delighted. He knew what should be next and in order to follow the next step he started kissing her tight thighs which were also waiting for him.


Mujhe rehne do apne paas hi
Kehna yeh tumse hai


Her wait was finally over and he entered her, his thrusts in her matched her rhythm and she was finally happy to have him inside her. This was the most beautiful moment of her life which made her a woman and she always wanted this to go on and on. He was her man and only she has the right of his body, heart and soul.


Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Sar pe hai, kab se hai


They were now one for forever. They were breathless for sometime after the first steamy love making session. Chhavi was still blushing and Viraf was smiling. He hugged her tight and she was also feeling blessed and happy in his arms. He kissed her forehead and both of them were silent for some time.


"So?" he asked teasing her.


"What?"


"Should we have something more?"


"You are very shameless. You didn't get tired by now?" she said.


"Dirty mind Chhavi, I was talking about the food I cooked for us."


"Oh that..." she felt embarrassed about her own thought.


"I think I should heat it up and you come." He said and got up but stopped, thinking something, "Rest of the things we can have later." He winked at her and left.


Chhavi blushed again and after half an hour both were at the dining table cutely feeding each other and sharing some quality time with each other.


Next morning:-


"Stop it now Viraf...mujhe shoot pe bhi jana hai." It was eight o'clock in the morning and Viraf was still kissing her body and fulfilling his desire.


"No, don't go today..." he said kissing her waist passionately. It was hard for Chhavi to respond between his passionate kisses as she moaned but her commitments couldn't be ignored.


"Virafff...bus na..."



"Just once more..." he said looking naughtily at her.


"No..."


"Yes..."


"No..."


"Yes..."


"Yes..." and he smiled. After half an hour they were again breathless and she just put her forehead on his chest trying to calm down her speedy breaths. After sometime she said, "Done for now? Can I go now?"


He thought to tease her, "Aise hi?"


"Dhat..." she hit his shoulder playfully.


"Actually I don't think tum ko aise jana chahiye. After all I will never like ki mere maal ko koi aise dekhe."


She gazed at him with ewww, "How cheap." She said.


He laughed at her and pulled her closer and kissed her briefly, "No matter how cheap and cheesy it sounds, my love for you will always be the same."


"I know." She said hugging him tight.


Two months later:-


"Hey meri jaan kahan ho?" he asked her with happiness.


"On the sets." She replied unhappily.


Viraf found her voice calm but she seemed worried, "Chhavi are you fine? Is everything ok with you?" Chhavi fell silent and Viraf felt worried. "Come on my love tell me what's wrong with you?"


"Can you pick me up today after shoot?" she asked.


"Of course, you just order. Call me when your shoot is over." He said.


Later in the night when the shoot was over, "What's wrong with you baby?" he asked cupping her face lovingly.


"My show is getting off air next month." She said with utter calmness in her voice.


"Oh..." he replied perfectly understanding the matter and the reason for her serious tone. "So that made my baby sad?"


"Hmm" and she hugged him putting her head on his shoulder.


"Don't worry baby, you know everything comes to an end na?"


"But I never expected it to be so early."


"I can understand but don't worry, you will get another show very soon." He assured her.


"But you know the channel was so big and I got so much exposure. People started liking us and our show...my chemistry with... " She said closing her eyes still hugging him but Viraf didn't let her complete.


"Diaper boy." He responded.


Chhavi got up and smacked his right arm, "Shut up."


Viraf laughed and hugged her again, "I love this cute little angry Chhavi."


"Cute and little? Am I an eight year old kid?" she asked looking at him with fake anger.


He gave a smile again, "Yes a cute, lovely and little Chhavi in that bold avatar with sexy legs." He said eyeing her legs in her hot pants.


"Shut up, you are getting really naughty. Ek to mera mood aise hi kharab hai, upper se tum ko..." but he didn't let her complete and sealed her lips with his. They were engrossed in a deep passionate kiss. They were breathless after sometime and Viraf just looked at her keeping his head on the back rest of his car seat. Chhavi too was in the same position.


"So now how are you feeling?"


"I think your therapy worked." She winked.


"Yes I knew that Mr. Viraf Phiroz Patel is really smart and he knows how to tackle the situation smartly." He winked back. "If you want I can give you a thorough therapy which will help you to reduce your stress."


"I would love to have it as I think I need it the most now." She said.


"Right here?"


"What do you think?"


"I think your place would be better as you have to go for shoot tomorrow na?" he said.


They were at her home after half an hour and Viraf had cooked some delicious food for them and fed Chhavi. She was in her bed almost closing her eyes and he was feeding her like a mother feeds her daughter. After having dinner he asked, "Still want to try the therapy?"


"Yes, waiting for that." She said still with her eyes closed.


One thing struck Viraf's mind after they made love and both of them were panting after their first round of love making. "You really think you and that diaper baby shared some nice chemistry? More than ours?"


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
So finally Chhavi found out Vinny's reality that she had been trying to fix her up with Pracheen all along!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Viraf is soo sweet to comfort her while she can't let it go!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Chhavi is right that how can he be so sweet and normal!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

It is good that she made him confess how he was feeling when Pracheen was misbehaving with her!!!!

Viraf is so possessive and this side doesn't come out very often but it was wonderful to see it here!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It is so good to see even in that he asked for her consent before proceeding further!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Viraf and Chhavi are sooo romantic and passionate!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It is sizzling hot!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was just beautiful and truly magical!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Finally they became one!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Chhavi is so happy and Viraf is also happy to finally have her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Great that he thought about the food and she was thinking something else!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved it when he teased her about it!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

It was really cute when they were feeding each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The morning after scene was too cute and funny!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He just doesn't want to let her go and managed to convince her for one more round of lovemaking!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He doesn't leave once chance to tease her but he is soo adorable when he says his love will always be the same!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Chhavi is upset over the news of her show going off air and Viraf is so sweetly comforting her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

In which world does Chhavi live in that she thinks people liked her chemistry with Abhay??😕 😕 😕 😕

It was hilarious when Viraf calls Abhay's character Diaper boy!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Chhavi was annoyed but Viraf sure knows how to get her in the romantic mood again and release her stress!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Viraf is just the best boyfriend ever and he has cooked for her and is now feeding her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He is now jealous and wants to know who looks better with her,him or Abhay!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Is there even a comparison??😎 😎 😎 😎Of course he and Chhavi make a far far far better pair!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

This part is fabulous and mindblowing!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏




Edited by Shaina_b - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful and passionate update.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

What should I say? 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 You are always master in writing romantic updates.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 This was truly magical. You used one of my favorite song which made it more beautiful. 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

So finally Chhavi got the info that her show is going off air and she is sad about that. But I am happy that Viraf knows so well how to release her stress.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 He is jealous wow and want to know who was better with her.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Continue soon.
Edited by varshita - 8 years ago
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Hello😊
I'm a new reader. Just read the first chapter. And it was so good. This is the first time I have encountered a piece of writing that culminates real life events into a fan fiction. Hats off 👏

About the chapter- They both love each other But they are believing what others are saying and not trying to make a real effort to tell each other their feelings. 🥺

I'll be back with my review on part 2 ASAP. Continue your writing. It is unique😳 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 15
Wonderful ud.. viraf and chavi r so much in love😊viraf called chavi blushing queen😆both r so happy and so much in love😳.. but ek call ne sab khraab kiya😕hamesha romance me cell phone hi kyu beach me aata hai😡.. BTW song bahot accha tha.. suits on situation 😃

Pracheen.. no words for him😡🤢viraf is so understanding.. 😳it was nice part.
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Omg what a UD. Super hot. And song perfectly suits for this scene😛😳😉so finally they became one.. and i must say viraf is so caring BF.. and naughty also.. 😆😉
Do ud soon. 😊
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I am a new reader. Just read the first part. It was amazing. Loved the fact that they were thinking alike in most of the cases whether it is about being jealous or about thinking of each other after so long. Will try to catch next part ASAP.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: luvankit

I am a new reader. Just read the first part. It was amazing. Loved the fact that they were thinking alike in most of the cases whether it is about being jealous or about thinking of each other after so long. Will try to catch next part ASAP.



A big thank u too dear for taking time and reading my FF.🤗🤗 I am happy that you liked it.😊 😊 Yes they think alike many of the times and it will help to bring them closer. 😉 😉

Thanks for comment and will be waiting for more comments.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: OmkaRaman

Hello😊
Hey dear
🤗

I'm a new reader. Just read the first chapter. And it was so good. This is the first time I have encountered a piece of writing that culminates real life events into a fan fiction. Hats off 👏

Thank u dear for liking my effort and I think I was up to the expectations.😉 😉

About the chapter- They both love each other But they are believing what others are saying and not trying to make a real effort to tell each other their feelings. 🥺

Don't worry it's going to be happen very soon.😳 😳 Than you will have no issues. 😉 😉

I'll be back with my review on part 2 ASAP. Continue your writing. It is unique😳 🤗

Thank u so much dear for your comment
🤗 and I will be waiting for your views.





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