Mriara Consummation VM on the song 'Maine Khud Ko - Page 4

Originally posted by: -Ritu567-

Loved the VM 👏

Originally posted by: nRiya

keeping my though aside, my mom said it should be in the actual episode. this is what we were waiting & excited about MriAra's SR😳

love it

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Thank you so much Opti for listening to my suggestion!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Also can you please do a one shot on the whole thing which would include the maang scene as well and if possible introduce a morning after scene in it!!!!!😳 😳 😳

I know I am getting greedy but I cannot help it after seeing your VM!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Opti

I couldn't find the maang scene. Can you give me the link and also some suitable song?

Originally posted by: Cathy25

wow! what a difference slowing down the pace made. so much more coherence now and its more enjoyable. great job with the vm opti.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Thank you so much Opti for listening to my suggestion!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Also can you please do a one shot on the whole thing which would include the maang scene as well and if possible introduce a morning after scene in it!!!!!😳 😳 😳

I know I am getting greedy but I cannot help it after seeing your VM!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Opti

I have posted a one shot as you wished, with all the aspects you wanted covered. This is an adaptation from an earlier fic but I rewrote the entire first part to suit Mriara.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

I loved the first part!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Actually I wanted it to be 80% same as the show and your VM with the "Jadoo hai nasha hai" song!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

More on the lines of a written and more detailed version of the VM with the maang scene and morning after scene put in and whatever gaps have been left out by the editing filled in by you!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Opti

You are turning out to be a greedy customer! Anyway I believe that a picture can speak a thousand words. So no use reproducing the VM in the OS as the VM speaks for itself.

As to the OS, it may not be 80 per cent original but the circumstances under which Mriara took place was similar to that shown in the show. In my view a couple who had such close brushes with death would have a passionate union which expresses all their fears as well as desire for each other. It is, as I said, a celebration of life in its fullest.