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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

You are Mine:- Part a

It was just beautiful moment when Tara is now here to face the world and for the first time the whole world will no that she belongs to MJ.
Dada jee's idea was right. They have to introduce Tara to the society.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Dada ji knows when to do what very well๐Ÿ˜Š

MJ now is feeling kuch kuch for Tara and now his heart also realized that she belongs to him.
She is his and he has every right over her.๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Slowly, but kuch kuch hota hai ๐Ÿ˜Š

He was ordered to bring Tara and now Tara is ready to come with him in the party.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š For many times he always keep his eyes away from him whenever he was caught red handed. But now he has realized that he can do that as he has every right of that.

If he would not have been ordered, he would not have escorted her. It took him time to realize that he had right on her ๐Ÿ˜Š

He was spell bounded to see how beautiful she was looking in that red saree.
He always love to see her hair open so he did and she was blushing.๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ He took out her specs making her feel more beautiful without them.๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Finally both of them proceeded to the party.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Magician Tara ๐Ÿ˜Š



Thanks for loving it so much ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja


Confession : Part a

Stunning update โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
Thanks๐Ÿ˜ณ

Poor MJ couldn't propose Tara๐Ÿ˜›
But he was happy at least Tara was with him โค๏ธ
yeah ๐Ÿ˜Š

Tara was angry !!! ๐Ÿ˜›
She just couldn't understand what he was doing ...
And MJ opened his mouth he said he had meeting ๐Ÿ˜†
I don't know this situation was so cute and funny ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›
it was cute and funny for us but Tara was angry

MJ tried clam her down listening radio ๐Ÿ˜‰
Perfect song for the situation ... โค๏ธ
MJ wished Tara could only understand his state ๐Ÿ˜ณ
But Tara became more angry ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
sometimes you need to speak too ๐Ÿ˜†

MJ was so lost in Tara that he drove in wrong lane ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I love the little romance without talking โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
But MJ couldn't tell his feelings... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
he was lost in Tara ๐Ÿ˜Š

Tara was happy MJ came back to room and something had changed in him ๐Ÿ˜Š
Tara's situation was really hard ...
As she had no clue about what he really wanted .
it was surprise for her ๐Ÿ˜Š

Tara saw her own portrait ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
yes๐Ÿ˜Š

Wow!! MJ had sent CD as he couldn't tell his feelings ๐Ÿ‘
And the Gazal was so beautiful ... โค๏ธ
Finally MJ confessed
That's one of my favorite line by the writer ๐Ÿ˜Š
Finally!!! he confessed๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Tara's life's one of the happy moment it was ! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Her reaction was like the portrait MJ made
She waited way too long ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
MJ knew how his woman would look๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

WOW !!! Archu so beautiful part this was โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
Superb writing ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘




Thanks for loving it so much ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

You are Mine part b

MriAra is totally engrossed in each other. Finally Dhanraj jee introduced Tara to all the guests that she is the daughter in law of Shekhawat family and MJ's wife. Their simple marriage didn't g8ve them chance to invite much people.
MriAra are acting like love sick puppies ๐Ÿ˜†

I love the way MJ's eyes were fixed on Tara's and so as Tara's on MJ. Hehehe people call MJ as langoor. This is hilarious . But this is the truth that he is lucky to have such a beautiful wife. Dada jee knew they are talking with eyes.
Dada ji is wise man๐Ÿ˜‰

He is not less and he gave some hidden instructions to Band and they were invited on dance floor. Dhanraj jee helped them and sent them on dance floor. The song you chose was perfect and suits the scene.
Dada ji is the catalyst MriAra relation๐Ÿ˜Š
Glad to know you loved the song ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

They almost forgot where they are and were completely lost in each other. Fir the first time Tara felt a different sensation and vibes in her heart and this is the beginning of love. MJ too didn't let the chance to let her go.
MriAra were lost๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Finally his touch is sending some signals to her๐Ÿ˜‰
How can MJ leave the beauty of his life ๐Ÿ˜Š

Both were embarrassed after the dance got over. Yes they didn't visit their kuldevi they have to be there. Both were ready quickly and left for the place. MJ want to see Tara everything but Tara is no less naughty. She teases him on purpose and the poor guy can't do anything.


Hehehe ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Tara is naughty๐Ÿ˜†

Thanks for loving it sooo much๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Itna detail comment๐Ÿ‘ thank U ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

You are Mine Part c
Fantastic update. I just love to see more and more cute expressions of Tara and MJ when they behave like teenager. They are immensely in love and their activities are now showing it.
Glad to know you loved teenaged MriAra๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

MJ always love to make beautiful sketches of Tara whenever he imagine her. Her beauty and innocence make him love her more and more every time.
yeah, he use to sketch but now he is more loving it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ anyone will love to sketch their loved ones๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Finally they have started behaving like a married couple who is in love. Pandit jee make them married once again. This time all it was falling rightly. They were living the moment.
yes, they had started acting like married couple๐Ÿ˜ƒ

On the way back Tara on purpose irritated MJ by changing the way she sat and both were playing when the driver didn't give them more chance to romance.
Driver was the villain at that moment๐Ÿ˜†

Oho wrong timing of phone call. It disturbed their rhythm and MJ has to go back to office. Tara is right he also loves her. Generally gals never misunderstands who like them who don't.
Girls are smart๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰

Ye MJ bhi na, can't he gets tired? Itne raat me aaya & when he found Tara sleeping he went to make sketch of her no matter how tired he is. Tara was happy and blushing when she found him sleeping holding her hand.

He never gets tired if it comes for Tara๐Ÿ˜Š



Glad to know you loved it so much ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanks for reading it๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khadeja





Superb edit Archu ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Very cute โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ



Thank YOU ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

part b...

so tara having butterflies in stomach...๐Ÿ˜ณ
yes ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

again tara got suprise ...she didnt recoverd frm previous one.๐Ÿ‘
MJ is on run to give her surprise ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

oh mj ...aaj toh pyaar ki barish hi ho gai...๐Ÿ˜ณ
sirf baarish ki suruvat hai, main badal jab aayege tab hogi asli barish๐Ÿ˜ƒ

koi mauka nai chhodna chahta hai apne pyaar ke izhaar ka...โญ๏ธ
Bilkul, ruthi biwi ko manana jo hai๐Ÿ˜Š

he messaged her so that she will listen or understand the depth of love...๐Ÿ˜ณ
kya karta bechara, jab bolna tha tab too bol hi nahi paya, too kuch too karna hi tha ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

she tuned to radio...by that she was hell shockd๐Ÿ˜†
yeah๐Ÿ˜†

with every passing lines of song he is messaging her...he dont want to leave any stone unturned๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
yes, our lover boy is on mission express your love ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰

i m loving this mj more than anything else...
Enjoy๐Ÿ˜‰

so now its tara turn ... sahi hai...itna wait karwaya hai mj ne thoda use bhi dose milna chahiye๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
ofcourse ๐Ÿ˜†


great chapte...it was read worty๐Ÿ˜†
Thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Thanks for loving it so much๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Tomorrow last chapter of this fic will be posted๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks for being regular reader of this fic๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Reply for part

You Are Mine
Part d

The start was indeed beautiful where both of them were totally engrossed in each other's thought. Tara is sure that she loves him and he has a war between his heart and mind which says that he is in love.
Thanks for loving the start๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Tara is but MJ's heart and mind are not

Finally after whole day MJ also admitted that he loves her and reached home. Tara was waiting for the whole day of his arrival and she got ready in her best way. Looking more beautiful than ever. It is the glow of love.
Heart wins over mind๐Ÿ˜Š

Song you chose was nice.
Thank you๐Ÿ˜ณ

What's wrong with this man? How can he again think like a stupid who has no brains? Tara was in hurry when she hurt her leg and instead of helping her he was thinking that he should not have come closer to her.
The man still has that thinking in him

What a fool he is!!!! Even Kaka asked him to help but he turned away and left the place. Dada jee jas to come and he was equally surprised to see him behaving like a stupid.
yeah

He even didn't ask about her leg at least once. How can someone change all of a sudden? I can never like such things. Where his love gone all of a sudden? I don't believe his mind. He should just listen his heart only.
He doesn't changed. He always had that feeling . From past few days they were just suppressed. His thinking had not changed yet.


Lets see how his thinking changes๐Ÿ˜Š

This for reading and bearing this part๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

The Drift Part (a)

I am really angry with MJ. Now even he has shifted himself from their room. How can he do it? Just because a small wound she got because of him (as he thinks). Neither he can help her nor he wants that. He thinks he is doing right by moving away.
You have full right to be angry with MJ

Tara is hurt and sad. She is almost broken by his such act. She wants answers but he avoids facing her. He not only quits the room but also never visits her. Now he is behaving pathetic.
Tara was more hurt by MJ than by the physical wound

Tara's college students came to visit her and they want to invite her in Farewell party but how can she tell if MJ comes or not. Nice song MJ played for them. It's one of my fav song.
Previously MJ and Tara were almost one but after that small mishap, they are poll apart
The song is one of mine fav too๐Ÿ˜Š

MJ said yes and they must go to farewell so that some ice would break between them. Tara is still confused that what happened to MJ all of a sudden? Things are going on very bad between them. She is sad more because she doesn't know the reason behind it.
Hope so this function breaks the ice๐Ÿ˜Š
Unsaid things are most painful


Thanks for reading ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

The Drift
Part b

MJ ko peetne ka man kar raha hai. They went to the Farewell and didn't even talk whole way. How can someone do that? This is not done. She has not done any mistake by loving him. How long will he run away with this feeling?
Please go ahead and beat MJ till he get some sense๐Ÿ˜Š

Song you chose was perfect for the situation and in one of my favorite song. Yug and Adi's performance is really nice but Tara was lost in her thoughts knowing very well that something is disturbing MJ but he is so naive and don't want to share it with someone.
yeah, Student is not ready to share and Professor is unable to understand

He had some work so he dropped her at home. She was again restless and good that she decided to check his library and found her numerous sketches there. How would he deny more that he doesn't feel anything for her?
he will find some stupid way to deny

He was back and he has to answer now. Tara finally understood what is stopping him to come closer to her. He has a fear of loosing her. He is again behaving rigid and rude knowing very well that only this way he can avoid all questions and answers of Tara.
Tara is smart to figure out the reason

MJ was crying and so as Tara. She would go somewhere for sometime and I am sure only than he would realize that he loves her. Tara ko itna hurt kar k vo bhi chain se kaise baith sakta hai? When he will miss her than only he can realize how much important Tara is for his life.
I agree with you, he will realize his love for her once she is not with him



Thanks for reading it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

The Drift

Part (c)

Should I kill this man MJ? He is making her cry how dare he? She has gone and told him that if he feels her missing he would surely realize his love for her but he is damn stupid he is still trying to avoid the fact that he doesn't love her. ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก
Kill this man!!! but wait just for a bit he is on point of realization๐Ÿ˜Š

For how long he will run away from the truth? She is thinking about her continuously and he didn't even call for once to know if she safe or not? He could have called anyone of the team. Aisa to nahi hai ki he didn't have anyone's number.
he is very stubborn and still thinks his thinking is right that's why he is not calling

Poor Tara she is still thinking that MJ will be back and he will tell her about his real feelings and so we think he will do that but he really tortured Tara so much just because of his fright of loosing someone. ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•
yeah, MJ is acting stubborn and Tara as optimistic

Song was nice. The emptiness of his life and the huge mansion told him that he truly loves Tara and now it's high time to express his love for Tara. In every small thing Tara is remembering him and now he should accept the truth. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks๐Ÿ˜ณ
finally he is missing her ๐Ÿ˜Š



Thanks for reading this part
From now onward no more torture chapter๐Ÿ˜†

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