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Hi guys, I'm not exactly new to the forum I'm a silent reader of ebi, I actually forgot my log in details so I couldn't post stuff but I finally remembered!
Bit of info about me lol read if you want or skip ahahaha
I'm deena, 20, live in uk, not Indian but love Hindi programs
Frm my user name you might see that I was a huge fan of ipkknd season 1. Other shows I loved are Geet, KMH1&2, LNMJ, DMG... Even tumhari pakhi looks good, from all these shows you'll kno I'm a sucker for love stories moreover I'm a sucker for anti-heroes or the tormented suffered think there worthless kinds ahem... MJ ...
Anyone watch tvd? Guess who my fav character is/was... Clue Not Damon... It's actually Klaus... I absolutely love him... The villain! I'm still rooting for him and Caroline... Ok we are going off topic.. Anyway those of who have watched some of the shows above or all like me :D will know that the heroes in most of them aren't the chocolate boy kind well at least not in the beginning, and ek boond ishq just looks like a worthy love story to see, the story about kalavati is so captivating, she scares me! The depth these characters go in is what I'm waiting for, I love mysteries and we all know there's a new peheli in every Epi. And the portrayal of the leads is amazing, Kudos to whole entire team for doing such a good job so far with a few hiccups along the way which I can ignore lol.
JAIL SCENE
Anyway my topic is a scene that I want to see... The jail scene after MJ's Parol is over... I kno I got tears in my eyes too :'(
I woke up this morning thinking about them... Dreaming about them and in my mind made up a scene I want to see
Please excuse my Hindi not my first or second language
Ok the scene starts about a week after MJ returns to jail... He is refusing to see anyone, Tara goes in everyday with hope that hel see her.
On This visit Tara has had enough of his refusal she pleads with the police to see him and will not leave until she has... The cell is not far from where she is and MJ can hear scream and shout to see him... MJ clenches his fist, closes his eyes and is tormented because he too is desperate to see her but just will not allow it.
The officer finally gives in because we all know Tara is so adamant and no1 will have there way with her especially not her husband maimani.
Tara takes a slow walk to his cell, MJ knows she's coming so faces the wall not wanting to see her
During Tara's walk she has flashbacks of MJ and eyes filled with water... Wind blowing her hair.. Back straight like a fighter preparing for war... determined to get some answers!
Tara staring on at hubby feeling content as she hasn't seen him for a week felt like years for her but Before Tara could even wipe her tears, MJ snaps ap yaha kuyn arge?
T: apko Kya lagte hai main nahi aungi? In a soft tone
MJ: please just leave
T: main nahi jaungi jabtak ap humse nahi dekenge aur mudse baat karte
MJ: I don't care, main koi baat nahi karni, just go aur vapas maat aun
T: mritunjay Singh sekawat meri taraf dekho, main yaha din, raat kara rahungi in a stern voice
MJ: tum mudse kya chaye tara?? Main kya hoon?
T: ap humara pati aur mera haak hai Ki main apka saat doon.
MJ: mera saat? In a sarcastic tone... Mera saat to theen/char din keliye hai
Tara heartbroken on hearing this.
MJ laughing (sadly)at his misfortune
Tara wiping her tears, and almost angry because of how MJ is behaving.
T: mujhe koi marna chatein! Tara shouted! MJ's unhappy laugh suddenly stops!
T: ek aur hadsa horge!
MJ turns and rushes puts his hands through the cell and caresses her face.. Tumko koi chort to nahi lagi... Crazily searching for any cuts/bruises whilst Tara in a trance staring at him... And the background song playing... Aye haye ;) both in an intense eye lock.
MJ realises she was just lying so tries to turn back round, but Tara stops him, holding on to his prisoners uniform...
MJ: Tara mujhe choro
T: apke haat nahi tama chorne keliye in a cutsie voice
MJ sort of had a half smirk, but then started begging her to leave because seeing her is killing him..
MJ: chali kyun nahi jarti? Apki yahan hona mujhe...
T: apko Kya?
MJ: mein ek mara huwa insaan hoon, tumhari shok hai Kya inte young umar mein vidwa bana chate?
MJ: mein silf tumein darte, chort aur duke de sartki.
Tara doesn't agree with this and tell him all the time he has helped and saved her... Yaad nahi hai apne hume kitni baar bachaya! Ape humein jantitak nahi ti aur firbi humese bachaya. Mein manti nahi ki yeh girona guna apne kiya. Kyun saach nahi bateinye?
Apki hamoshi hume marte. Yelled Tara... The transition of emotions between is beautifully done. BG starts
MJ doesn't kno what to say and is worried Tara won't give up!
T: dekiye har din ap yaha ho mujhe andar se marti hain. Main nahi janti ki kab ap hona meri life main itni important bangaye. Without snything holding her she lets out her feelings... So brave right?
MJ is in a state of shock and disbelief that some1 has so much faith in him that some wants him.
T: please humein saach bataye radha ki saat kya huwa?
MJ memorising flashback of Radha.
MJ: screamed tumhe koi haak nahi hai Radha hi baremein jankilye!
Tara yells back! Kyun nahi? Apka rishta kya ti Radha ki saat? Like she wants to kno to get him out but sort of jealous too. Very angsty and passionate between them.
T: mein janti hoon yh ek Bari saazish hai?
MJ worried about how much Tara might kno... Expression of fear painted across his face... Takes Tara's hands off him! Tara shocked! And both have tears in there eyes..
Tara pleads MJ to talk to her, he again turns to the wall coz he can't face her... Tears rolling down his eyes!
Tara asks him to turn around and then she will leave... He agrees! Tara reached out to him and holds his hands he tries to fight the pull but gives in
T: mein nahi janti ap yeh sab kyun aur kaun keliye karti. Par mein kahi nahi jaoungi.
Mein apse vaje deungi larna keliye...
apko larna hoga apki khushi keliye... Apki zindagi keliye... Tara draws him closer almost body touching only if the bars weren't there... She goes on her tiptoes... MJ lowers his head and she whispers in his ear (very intimately) Aur kaaskar mereliye! BG going wild in the background... She kisses his forehead! And before she leaves caresses his face wipes his tears and in a firm voice says mein kal vapas aungi... Ap yaha se bahar janikeliye tayar ho jao! Bg again MJ overwhelmed! Hands separate... Last eye lock then Tara leaves with a bang like a girl on a mission.
This scene played out much better in my head I don't think I did it justice there was more passion and emotion when the scene came to mind. Sorry if I used the wrong words and spelling hope y'all understand, this took a while, maybe y'all can share your scenes with me, maybe a continuation or post this scene or another scene came to mind...ahem ahem suhagraat!
Please do comment would love to kno your take and how you felt about it. Thanks xxx
Bit of info about me lol read if you want or skip ahahaha
I'm deena, 20, live in uk, not Indian but love Hindi programs
Frm my user name you might see that I was a huge fan of ipkknd season 1. Other shows I loved are Geet, KMH1&2, LNMJ, DMG... Even tumhari pakhi looks good, from all these shows you'll kno I'm a sucker for love stories moreover I'm a sucker for anti-heroes or the tormented suffered think there worthless kinds ahem... MJ ...
Anyone watch tvd? Guess who my fav character is/was... Clue Not Damon... It's actually Klaus... I absolutely love him... The villain! I'm still rooting for him and Caroline... Ok we are going off topic.. Anyway those of who have watched some of the shows above or all like me :D will know that the heroes in most of them aren't the chocolate boy kind well at least not in the beginning, and ek boond ishq just looks like a worthy love story to see, the story about kalavati is so captivating, she scares me! The depth these characters go in is what I'm waiting for, I love mysteries and we all know there's a new peheli in every Epi. And the portrayal of the leads is amazing, Kudos to whole entire team for doing such a good job so far with a few hiccups along the way which I can ignore lol.
JAIL SCENE
Anyway my topic is a scene that I want to see... The jail scene after MJ's Parol is over... I kno I got tears in my eyes too :'(
I woke up this morning thinking about them... Dreaming about them and in my mind made up a scene I want to see
Please excuse my Hindi not my first or second language
Ok the scene starts about a week after MJ returns to jail... He is refusing to see anyone, Tara goes in everyday with hope that hel see her.
On This visit Tara has had enough of his refusal she pleads with the police to see him and will not leave until she has... The cell is not far from where she is and MJ can hear scream and shout to see him... MJ clenches his fist, closes his eyes and is tormented because he too is desperate to see her but just will not allow it.
The officer finally gives in because we all know Tara is so adamant and no1 will have there way with her especially not her husband maimani.
Tara takes a slow walk to his cell, MJ knows she's coming so faces the wall not wanting to see her
During Tara's walk she has flashbacks of MJ and eyes filled with water... Wind blowing her hair.. Back straight like a fighter preparing for war... determined to get some answers!
Tara staring on at hubby feeling content as she hasn't seen him for a week felt like years for her but Before Tara could even wipe her tears, MJ snaps ap yaha kuyn arge?
T: apko Kya lagte hai main nahi aungi? In a soft tone
MJ: please just leave
T: main nahi jaungi jabtak ap humse nahi dekenge aur mudse baat karte
MJ: I don't care, main koi baat nahi karni, just go aur vapas maat aun
T: mritunjay Singh sekawat meri taraf dekho, main yaha din, raat kara rahungi in a stern voice
MJ: tum mudse kya chaye tara?? Main kya hoon?
T: ap humara pati aur mera haak hai Ki main apka saat doon.
MJ: mera saat? In a sarcastic tone... Mera saat to theen/char din keliye hai
Tara heartbroken on hearing this.
MJ laughing (sadly)at his misfortune
Tara wiping her tears, and almost angry because of how MJ is behaving.
T: mujhe koi marna chatein! Tara shouted! MJ's unhappy laugh suddenly stops!
T: ek aur hadsa horge!
MJ turns and rushes puts his hands through the cell and caresses her face.. Tumko koi chort to nahi lagi... Crazily searching for any cuts/bruises whilst Tara in a trance staring at him... And the background song playing... Aye haye ;) both in an intense eye lock.
MJ realises she was just lying so tries to turn back round, but Tara stops him, holding on to his prisoners uniform...
MJ: Tara mujhe choro
T: apke haat nahi tama chorne keliye in a cutsie voice
MJ sort of had a half smirk, but then started begging her to leave because seeing her is killing him..
MJ: chali kyun nahi jarti? Apki yahan hona mujhe...
T: apko Kya?
MJ: mein ek mara huwa insaan hoon, tumhari shok hai Kya inte young umar mein vidwa bana chate?
MJ: mein silf tumein darte, chort aur duke de sartki.
Tara doesn't agree with this and tell him all the time he has helped and saved her... Yaad nahi hai apne hume kitni baar bachaya! Ape humein jantitak nahi ti aur firbi humese bachaya. Mein manti nahi ki yeh girona guna apne kiya. Kyun saach nahi bateinye?
Apki hamoshi hume marte. Yelled Tara... The transition of emotions between is beautifully done. BG starts
MJ doesn't kno what to say and is worried Tara won't give up!
T: dekiye har din ap yaha ho mujhe andar se marti hain. Main nahi janti ki kab ap hona meri life main itni important bangaye. Without snything holding her she lets out her feelings... So brave right?
MJ is in a state of shock and disbelief that some1 has so much faith in him that some wants him.
T: please humein saach bataye radha ki saat kya huwa?
MJ memorising flashback of Radha.
MJ: screamed tumhe koi haak nahi hai Radha hi baremein jankilye!
Tara yells back! Kyun nahi? Apka rishta kya ti Radha ki saat? Like she wants to kno to get him out but sort of jealous too. Very angsty and passionate between them.
T: mein janti hoon yh ek Bari saazish hai?
MJ worried about how much Tara might kno... Expression of fear painted across his face... Takes Tara's hands off him! Tara shocked! And both have tears in there eyes..
Tara pleads MJ to talk to her, he again turns to the wall coz he can't face her... Tears rolling down his eyes!
Tara asks him to turn around and then she will leave... He agrees! Tara reached out to him and holds his hands he tries to fight the pull but gives in
T: mein nahi janti ap yeh sab kyun aur kaun keliye karti. Par mein kahi nahi jaoungi.
Mein apse vaje deungi larna keliye...
apko larna hoga apki khushi keliye... Apki zindagi keliye... Tara draws him closer almost body touching only if the bars weren't there... She goes on her tiptoes... MJ lowers his head and she whispers in his ear (very intimately) Aur kaaskar mereliye! BG going wild in the background... She kisses his forehead! And before she leaves caresses his face wipes his tears and in a firm voice says mein kal vapas aungi... Ap yaha se bahar janikeliye tayar ho jao! Bg again MJ overwhelmed! Hands separate... Last eye lock then Tara leaves with a bang like a girl on a mission.
This scene played out much better in my head I don't think I did it justice there was more passion and emotion when the scene came to mind. Sorry if I used the wrong words and spelling hope y'all understand, this took a while, maybe y'all can share your scenes with me, maybe a continuation or post this scene or another scene came to mind...ahem ahem suhagraat!
Please do comment would love to kno your take and how you felt about it. Thanks xxx
Udne Ki Aasha
