MriAra two shots *ITS HURT ME*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello hi EBI forum wallon..me moumi you can call me mou/mon whatever you like to call..well you guys might be surprised by my intro and thinking why I am here & what exactly I want to do..

well I am gonna troubling you guys..as you all know I am crazy about Viraf I mean Mritunjoy & MriAra..so I come here with a Fiction..hope you guys liked it and enjoy it...If you not then don't panic feel free to send me your precious gali, egg , sandle whatever you like to send...

.So enough of my bakwas chapar chapar now enjoy this crazy idea, emotional attyachar my first ever attempt on MriAra...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prolouge
Dark night silent room a man in rocking chair holding a photo frame in his right hand and in lost in his own world just watching his own room in this darkness with a deep silence...thinking about something that does not exist in this word now...thinking about someone presence who is not a part of him now..who left him in this darkness...thinking about his loneliness...

Silent pain, still my heart finding you
peach that I want


Missing you
might be scaring by this darkness
my lonely life


was their when I need you
always hurt you
that's hurt me still I hurt you

you fall for me
always ignored you

hide me from you hide my soul
but you recognize me
just recognize me
you forgive me

And me still hurt you
lost you,
just lost you...

But still in my heart you are there
my heart say you are here
You are here

Never said you truth
I love you
I love you, I love you..


His heart crying but he is silent still silent...someone entered in this dark room and says, mritunjoy...the man was sitting in chair seeing that women...and in anger saying : koun??


That women: Mritunjoy mom..

Mritunjoy: mom?? Mera koyii ma nehi hain..nikal jaiye ehase..

Mj's Mother: main janti hoon tumhare ma kehlane ki layek toh nehi hoon..paar rishta toh wohii hain na hamara ma bete ka?? i know I hurt you..please listen to me once...

MJ with more anger: suna nehi apne maine kaha nikal jayiye iss kamre se...saabkuch khatam ho chuka hian..pher aap eha kiya karne aye hain...what you exactly want now??

MJ's mother: mujhey baas tumhari maffi chahiye...aur kuch nehi...please forgive me my son...maaf kardo apni mom ko...

MJ sceamed out: mera koyii ma nehi hain..nehi hain koyii ma...chali jao eha se... leave...

Mj's mother: mritunjoy!!??

MJ: I said get lost from here...other wise I will kil you..kill you...

MJ's mother: main to baas...

MJ: get lost from their...

After hearing this and watching MJ's craziness his mother leave from there come out of the room...but till then everyone come outside of MJ's room...she is seeing everyone with deep pain in her eyes...

And here inside in Mj's room he get violent and start crying loudly...


To be continued...

Well it's depends on your feedback that I will able to continue or not..If I feel feedback was not that much then I will not continue it further as there is no use to drag such uninterested fiction/story which is really unwanted...then I will end it in two shots...
waiting for your sandle, gali anda or anything you going to send...love you all...

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Edited by Moumimon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW nice start and interesting one...Will be waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start ! Looking forward to next chapters. Continue soon...
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Originally posted by: pinkstars

WOW nice start and interesting one...Will be waiting for the next part...

thank you so much for liking it..try to update soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: capriya

Nice start ! Looking forward to next chapters. Continue soon...

thank dear for liking it..will trying to continue soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting one..
luv to read further just don't drag unnecessary
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: precious-pie

interesting one..
luv to read further just don't drag unnecessary
update soon

thanks for liking it..try to update soon...😛
dragging well i am too unexpected in writing so 😆 you are free from dragging😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bismillah5985

Gud start plzzz continue

thanks dear...thanks for liking it...will continue😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarunarshi72

Great start. Update soon

thanks for liking it dear..will try to continue soon..😛

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