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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 2 - If Only I Could

Folks - Thank you for the response and your lovely comments...

Happy Sunday and Happy Dashera Greetings!

Tara was still snuggled up in bed... ...the blanket half sticking out of it... cushions on the floor...after tossing and turning some more...the morning light breaking through the curtains...she wakes up, stretches herself and jumps out of bed.

"Tara bacchu woh shaitan idhar nahi hai...achha hua...nahi toh teri nikli, jaldi se kapde badllo."

Click!...the door to the bathroom opens and out comes Mrityunjay wearing a pair of jogger tracks and a full-sleeved body-hugging T-shirt.

He notices...what was that? The weirdest of whatever that was...a garish oversized shirt...maybe some pyjamas or something...

She runs into the bed and covers herself up with the blanket.

He walks out. Gosh! Yeh sportsman kahan se aaya! She had to be careful she couldn't be found wearing anything that made her look less feminine...I mean what if...

Whilst going down the stairs, his thoughts went back to her... he had come into the room to find his bed taken over by her...and cushions strewn on the ground. He had picked them up and placed them on the bed, only to be kicked back on the floor...he had seen her asleep, his eyes were drawn to her even without him wanting to...she looked like a silly young girl...breathing heavily...clutching the pillow... locks of hair covering her face...she was so messy...

Why was she in his thoughts? He needed to get out of here...

"Mrityunjay come here...join me for breakfast" he heard his father call out to him.

"Baba lekin."

"No arguments...don't know for how long we can share these times together, so please...make it a habit to join me for breakfast."

Mrityunjay sits at the table reluctantly.

Daijaan had come up to inform Tara that Baba had asked her to join him down.

What if the guy was around? She better be prepared. Ok now I have to deck up just so that he does not look my way. Yeah anything very feminine would do it. Yes a sari! And then she thanks Nandu for all those girly accessories. It did come of good use now.

She adorns a plain simple peach sari with a silver grey border...and pulls her long hair to one side of her shoulder...leaving some of the locks to frame her face. Tara bacchu gets herself transformed into a very pretty young lady!

She walks down the stairs only to notice his back to her. She had no choice so walks upto Baba and touches his feet.

Mrityunjay glances at the woman bent at his father's feet. So this was an act? Good actress! She rises...he notices the slim frame...that bare waistline...damn where were his thoughts moving to...

He looks away.

Jairaj, "I am so happy to see both of you here,sit down have some breakfast." and points to the chair right opposite Mrityunjay.

Who wanted to be around this jerk? "Nahi abhi nahi... bhook nahi hai?"

"I don't want to hear a word...if nothing just a glass of juice."

Jairaj thinks so I got to play cupid...these two aren't even looking at each other...

He insists, so she pulls out the chair and sits. He looks away and she too averts her face...where did he change his clothes? If not their room! Good for her though. He won't hover around her space!

"Are waah dono ne ek hi rang ke kapde pehne!"

Tara stares at the similar shirt colour and turns to Baba saying sweetly, "Kapdon se kya...insaan under se sundar hona chahiye!"

That insulting tongue, he drops his fork onto the plate and glares at her. She stares back angrily. A large pair of accusing liquid brown eyes and flared nostrils strike back at a pair of steely brown ones...told him this was for insulting her earlier. Tara bacchu wasn't someone who was going to take his nonsense and cry over it.

He does not know she was the Bhai of Bhopal. Oh no no no...not Bhai Tara...be careful...think and act like a female!...galat, galat, galat...think like a woman, act like one...

She lowers her gaze to the plate. Jairaj asks her to have some juice. The decanter is sitting at his side of the table. She raises her torso and reaches for it...Jairaj asks Mrityunjay to pass it to her.

They both end up holding the decanter...and the tip of their fingers touch. She withdraws her hand...His gaze is stuck at the black string of beads dangling around her neck and the diamond pendant sitting on her heaving chest...whoever chose that design of two peacocks entwined! Huh! ... He gulps hard...he had enough for today..."Baba...I'll be at the outhouse."

She gives out a soft sigh of relief, he gives her a stern look...and walks past her...she catches the whiff of his male scent. She gulps...

Tara lovingly tells Jairaj,"Baba aap ne kucch bhi toh nahi khaya...aur aaj kaafiyan bhi nahi? Today I will serve you."

Mrityunjay glances over his shoulder... She seems so comfortable with his father...Acting again ofcourse! Kaafiyaan my foot!

He walks out towards his shack...he needed to feel the fresh air hitting him...the warmth of the morning sun scorching him...the pain within just wouldn't go away... the hate, the rejection, the outcast that he was, ...this freedom...which was his just for a few more weeks or days...he wanted to scream, "Why me?"

He sat and spoke to his mare, "Why me? What have I done to deserve this?'

He kicked the stack of hay that went flying. The horse neighed seeing his master in distress. He realized his behaviour affected the animal who understood him better...and so calmed down... covered his face with his hands and sobbed bitterly.

In a way death would free him of his misery..., once and for all...there was no reason to live...Baba would be the only one to miss him...but then his own children would soon fill the void...No one remembers the dead for too long...

He would cook something. Faheem chacha has left some stuff for him to churn out. He would manage. Meals were now something he ate just to keep him going...

He loved his isolation...thank goodness he wasn't in the presence of that that...Spitfire! Her tongue was longer than her whole frame. Tiny that she was...

To be continued...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tara bacchoo,

Think like a woman!
Act like a woman!
🤣
Amazing one!
Only if the CVs could make them meet like this for real!! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣D, you made my day sweet heart 😆
Tara in her attempt to make him repel is actually making him umm uncomfortable(can't type the word I was thinking 😉)
Awesome D, thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story DD 😊 I loved reading both the updates 😃 Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lol, the 'think like a woman' part got me. Love how MJ was checking her out even though he didnt want to. U captured his feelings perfectly. Lovely update.
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Hai, awesome! Mriara's thoughts are well written..! I have a feeling that its going to be hot..! Continue soon...
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Awesum update yaar...👍🏼
I luv that Tara alot... Shez very pretty...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice FF dd
hope this happens in the show also
and i found time today to read ur FF isiliye ab comment kar rahi hu
cont soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for the wonderful response

I am trying my best to give updates as early as I can. Due to time constraints it does become a bit difficult but will try as much as I can....

Here is Chapter 3...

Chapter 3

Daylight streamed in...but there was gloom around...the sky looked threatening. As part of his daily routine, he rode his horse, returned to prepare a simply meal of vegetables which tasted terrible, then sketched a little... Another lonely night would go by. The weather was windy...it might rain...or maybe not...

He set the book aside and decided to retire to bed. Feeling a strange ache in the joints...he turns off the lamp, placed his torch beside him and tried to catch some sleep...that never came.

Tossing and turning...he heard the thunderous sound outside. The mare neighed out of fear. The incessant rains lashed out angrily around him and his mare. He tended to the frightened animal and stayed out until the storm passed away. He felt miserable.

What about the storm within him. Was death going to be the answer?

He sighed and walked indoors, changed into something dry. He would have to go back to the house to get some more clothes and stuff to prepare himself for the weather. Who knows how many more days and nights it would be like this. He felt the chills.

It was a cold and dreary night. Sleep evaded him and his skin felt hot...it was almost dawn...

Here Tara got up with a headache...the thunder and lightning had kept her awake all night. She loved the rains...but last night was strangely scary...and the walls felt cold around her. She had hugged the blanket, hoping it would go away.

She recollected similar days back home, where Tara and her siblings always cuddled together during such nights...she felt alone and sad...

She got up and showered...leaving her long wet hair and put on a simple sleeveless yellow churidaar...she was about to fill her maang with sindoor when she heard a knock on the door.

Presuming it was Meethi as always, "Come In"

Mrityunjay entered just when her fingers filled her forehead with a dash of vermillion. Their eyes met through the mirror. His eyes took in the action. A strange kind of feeling swept through him. And he took in her wet back from the long damp hair with a few strands framing her face.

Her eyes widened with surprise and her cheeks burned. She moved away from the mirror hoping he would not notice her reaction.

She immediately sought her dupatta , and turned to him in a sharp tone saying, "What do you want?"

"Just came here to get some more clothes, that is all." She noticed his wet clothes, a long wet lock falling off his face.

She thought okay let him be, after all it was his room, she would just go on with her pooja.

He moves towards his closet, when she finds him holding on to its door for support...swaying and almost falling down. Without thinking she runs towards him. He was such a big man. Thud! Mrityunjay slumps to the floor shaking like a leaf.

"Kya hua hai aap ko?" she touched his arm and found it burning hot.

"Le...leave me alone." he growled trying to push her hand away. She did not bother but grumbled back, "Mujhe koi shauk nahi hai...its basic humanity which you would never understand, so shut up." And then gets up and gives a shout out, Faheem Chacha, Baba, Joseph!

Jairaj and Faheem both come running. They pull him up and place him on the bed. She stands back and sees him being taking care of. The doctor was called.

She stood back in the room whilst hearing the Doctor say, "I have taken blood samples, but it does seem like a bout of malaria. Do you want me to send a nurse?"

"Oh no, that won't be necessary, his wife is here to see to him."

'That's good then, just make sure he doesn't leave the room. I know Mrityunjay can be very stubborn at times. He loves his freedom. If taken care of properly, he should recover in a week's time or so."

"The clinic will call you with the results of the blood test and I shall be visiting him everyday Thakur Sahab."

"I am so grateful for that Doctor."

"Oh after what your family and Mrityunjay have done for my clinic and you still continue to do, it's now my turn to repay back in some way."

She titled her head to see, yeah he was knocked out with the medications, breathing heavily.

She listened to the instructions being given and simply nodded. They all expected her to take care of him as a dutiful wife. Oh damn! she had to act as nurse now for this man! Why does she have to give into Baba every time?

All left the room and she sat down on the chair, seeing him lying on his bed, thinks - The price she had to pay for a few materialistic things. When was life ever fair!

He probably did not know she was present. For sure he would object to her administering the medications. Anyways, he was asleep. She would go into the kitchen and help Meethi.

It was a moonlit night...with no trace of the previous night storm...he stirred...he heard the rustle of cloth...opening his eyes he looked around him...he sat up...and held his spinning head.

His eyes fell on the recliner, cuddled like a flurry ball was her...even the recliner looked too big for her...she shifted...with her back turned to him...the long plait was left hanging off the recliner.

He got up pushing the blanket away, stilling feel weak from the fever, sweating, his parched throat sought some cool liquid...he would leave though...she stirs and turned to see him making an attempt to stand, holding onto the bed. His back was turned to her.

She rose too hurriedly...he could feel her presence...the night lamp cast a shadow on both.

"Wait...C...Can I get you anything?" and nears the bed.

He growls..."Stay away from me, I can manage...don't need you."

Tara thinks, this man is as stubborn as a mule. He tries to stands without support and sways with dizziness...sits down on the edge of the bed holdings his face in his hands.

"Paani."

She goes to the water jug pours out a glass of water and brings it to him. But doesn't give it to him. He better hear her words before she satisfies his thirst.

"Rassi jal gayi lekin bal nahi gaya. Now you better listen up Mister, I don't enjoy doing this...but consider me your paid nurse. Don't worry I will charge your father extra for this service."

He felt too weak to either argue or reply. He knew she was speaking up taking advantage of his weak situation. And then she holds the glass of water to his parched lips. Their eyes meet whilst he sips the soothing liquid down his throat.

" I would prefer you get well sooner than later so you can leave this room at the earliest...so stop fussing and let me help you." Was it the fever or was it her touch on his skin that burned him more. Her face flushed.. what was it...the close proximity of this man?...was the room strangely warmer? She places the glass and helps him to lie down again on the bed, and pulls the blanket over him.

Tara returns to the recliner. Sleep evades both of them...with the first rays of dawn fills through the room... another day had just begun...she hears his heavy breathing...

Who was this man? Was Baba telling the truth that he was innocent?


hugs

dd


To be contd...


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