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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

Mohi tum ne MriAra AT ke thread creator ko PM kiya??



Yes Kiya tha.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

Shagu tum ne meri demand purri nahi ki

mujhe mere ek boond ki list ke baki 25 boond abhi tak nahi mile



Lol!! 25 boond
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Posted: 11 years ago


sayad wo 3 feb se IF par nahi aayi hai

agar MriAra ki AT ka thread nahi hua too kya yahi karge baat😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


yes dear

remember shagu epi. wise 100th epi. celevration thread mein likh rahi thi

usne 75 likhe hai

mujhe pure 100 chahiye
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21



yes dear

remember shagu epi. wise 100th epi. celevration thread mein likh rahi thi

usne 75 likhe hai

mujhe pure 100 chahiye



O ab samji!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shagu agar tumhe pics chahiye too

sehru ki post se loo

har page par hamari post ke side mein ek column hota hai

jaha likha hota hai last 10 topics

uske upar orange box mein likho pics aur click karo

phir dekho jadu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21



sayad wo 3 feb se IF par nahi aayi hai

agar MriAra ki AT ka thread nahi hua too kya yahi karge baat😃



Yes yahi kar sakte hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

Shagu agar tumhe pics chahiye too

sehru ki post se loo

har page par hamari post ke side mein ek column hota hai

jaha likha hota hai last 10 topics

uske upar orange box mein likho pics aur click karo

phir dekho jadu



Shagu try kiya??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Pankhis😃 this is first attempt to write scene so plz tolerate me😉 and give your reviews

On Thursday have all have seen Majnu MJ😳 desperate to say his feelings to Tara but our Tara bachu was not in a mood to give MJ a easy confession.😆

We also saw in precap that our Tara bachu had got brilliant idea to come out from jungle and while informing this by-mistakenly she blurts her thoughts about MriDha(MJ-RaDha) relationship.

Our MJ's expression after she reveals this was like "WHAT??"😕😲

So I according to my demands😉 the V-week should be:

Day-1(Monday 10 Feb):Our Majnu MJ goes to Tara his darling to confess his love but our Tara in her own world of MU is talking about idea to get out of jungle and after that proving MJ innocent and bringing together MriDha. Our MJ bitva in shock😲 after hearing this wants to say something but as usual he is late ,before he can utter a single a words Tara cover-up her plan by saying she there is road . On road a car is seen , Tara runs towards car and guess who is in car our baba JR on quest to search beta-bahu and sabut(Radha) . They bring Radha to car and start their journey to Bhopal.

Yug is searching evidence to know his Baba's murderer. RP(Kala) is celebrating on death of his/her enemy with some dance performance😆 by her. Nimmo is worried.

Day-2(Tuesday 11 Feb):Baba,MJ,Tara and Radha in car moving towards Bhopal. Radha's health condition is degrading (chuimui hai naa bechari😆). They visit hospital(Today hospital scene will be executed well i.e. it will take half epi. ).😉

(In my post song should be their naa😉 )MriAra will have BG

~ Kitni baatein kehne ki hain
Honton par jo sehmi si hain
Ek roz inhe sun lo
Kyoon aise gumsum ho ~.

RP returns for election campaigning to Bhopal(don't know EBI's Bhopal is in India or out of India as election in Bhopal are completed 2 months ago😕 😆).Nimmo still worried for JR calls JR he cover-up his location and finding of trio👏. AD is still worried for Tara.

Day-3(Wednesday 12 Feb): Doctor informs trio(Baba and MriAra) about Radha's stable condition. Baba says to take Radha home but MJ refuses and suggests that she should be kept hidden until she is fine as there are many people behind Radha to kill her. Tara and Baba agrees with MJ's suggestion. Worried AD asks Nandu about Tara and she informs her about Tara's visit to Mangalgadh. Baba,MJ and Tara takes Radha to safe place. MriAra reaches home(finally).😆

Day-4(Thursday 13 Feb):MriAra finally at home. Baba informs DIG about MriAra's return to home. Meethi and Vasu are teasing MriAra on their trip.Meethi asks Tara about what she wished at dargha. Tara says she wished MJ's happiness in her mind she says and its Radha -MJ's true happiness. Nimmo asks JR were he meet MriAra. Biggest shock 😲 😲😲😲to RP(Kala) on knowing MriAra alive and who else must have informed none other than Nimmo. In MriAra room MJ was waiting for Tara desperately walking in whole room remembering her statement about MriDha. When Tara enters MJ goes to her asks what she was telling about MriDha relation have U gone mad.Then Tara starts her bak-bak about Radha and MJ bounding , her status that she is chatwali and other nonsense.MJ listening all this shouts.

Day-5(Friday 14 FEB):(Most awaited day by us) MJ shouts Tara how U can think I this about me and Radha. Tara U were the one who believed in me when even I was not believing. U were the one who fight with your own mother for me to prove me innocence. Tara it was always U who tried to bring that Ek Boond Ishq to my dying life. Tara U are my moti. Radha is just my best friend but U are my life Tara.I LOVE YOU TARA "MEIN TUMSE PYAR KARTA HOO AUR APNI PURRI ZINDGI TUMHARE SAATH BITANA CHATA HOO". On hearing this our Tara gives a tight hub to MJ saying "MEIN BHI TUMSE PYAR KARTI HOO" and in BG what else can suit other than our EBI's Title track.

Ok so this was my perspective on next week(V-week).😉 I know its boring and over demanding but what to do it all came in my mind so I shared with U all .

Plz Share your views.😉

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ShaguElina(Shagu):

Hmmm mera bhi...khyaal sun lo...
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tara bht udaas hai...ab se pura ignore karegi...distance maintain karegi...jo ki already start ho gaya hai...
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phir kya ...ghar pohonch kar...
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Tara ...UC mein date prepare kare...Mj aur Radha ki...
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Radha ko bhi bulaye...aur Mj ko.bhi...
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Full.UC decorated with candles...balloon...
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Tara decorating with all sadness...
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Mj aata hai...
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Yeh kya hai tara...
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Yeh tumhare aur Radha ke iss pyaare se UC mein swaagat ke liye...
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Main toh kabhi iska hissa thi nahi...
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Mj peeche se confuse look dete hue...
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Tara bole jaa rahi hai...
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Radha tumhare liye bani hai...aur tum uske liye...woh tumhaari khushi hai...
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Main tumhe har haal mein khush dekhna chahti hun...
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Mj ke gusse ka level high...
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Tara ko zor se kheech kar apni taraf kar leta hai...
donon haatoh se usse kas kar pakad kar kehta hai...
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Mujhe khush dekhna chahti...meri khushi kismein hai...tum yeh kyun nahi dekh paa rahi...
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Meri khushi tum ho Tara ...TUM...
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Meri zindagi tum ho...
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Tum ho mera Moti...
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meri zindagi ki roshni...
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Tumhe har baat pata hoti hai...toh phit kyun tumhe meri aankh mein pyaar nazar naahi aata ...bolo...
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Jawab do...
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Meri.aankhon mein dekho...
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Mera pyaar tum ho...
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mera jeena ...marna sab tum se hai...tara...
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Main tumse pyaar kartaa hun...
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I LOVE U ...ONLY U...
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Tara rote hue Mj ke.gale lag jaati hai...and tight and passionate hug...
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Phir tara MJ ko.dekhti.hai...aur kehti hai...
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Main bhi tumse pyaar karti hun...main bhi tumhare bina nahi reh sakti...
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Again Hug...
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Yahan MriAra ek dusre se gale mil rahe wahan Radha ...aati hai...
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Unnhe iss tarah dekh woh laut jaati hai...

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MastaT(Mohi):

Maybe MJ birthday celebration! Would be a nice set up!! Tara dressed up enjoying every minute as she's thinking it's her last making life time memories for herself!!

Yes! Ghaam chupakar life to its fullest enjoy kar rahi hai! MJ baat karne ki attempts kar raha hai khabie vasu Tara ko ley jathi hai to khabie Tara khud baba ke paas chali jathi hai! MJ frustrated! Waha se gusse se chala jatha hai! No one notices but Tara does n try's to send Vasu, meethi, Joseph, fahim chacha yahatak radha aur baba bhi but radha suggests Tara should go and look for him and everyone agrees phir aage kya hoga tum log hi bata do!! Kaha miltha hai MJ, Tara kya kehthi hai, etc!!


Yes doll! I want the wind to do its highest badtameezi with MJ's hair!!

How about we include the wall!!

UC wall!!

Back at the party when she goes to look for MJ!!

He leaves little notes as clues for her

Poetic notes

From the dark room to their bedroom!! Dark room there's clues in a photo of Tara!! Ones he clicked of her when she was unaware

Bedroom par Rubik style sketches of Tara with a message

Leads her to the UC

Phir waha she starts to search for MJ

She notices writing on the wall

She slowly creeps up to the wall

Night time tha koi roshini nahi thi magar sirf moon light ki!!

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Worldpeace(Bani):

UC Wall message :

Hamesha se adhura raha hun...tumne kami puri ki hai...

Tumhari har ek aadat ...har ek adaa ...aur

hassi...main bhool nahi sakta...

.

tumhare aane se zindagi...phise roshan ho gayi hai...

jab tum na thi ...toh yeh akelapan...yeh ghar

mujhe viraana lagta tha...

.

tumne aakar isse zindagi de di...mujhe har khushi dedi...

.

main chahtaa hun...ab kabhi door na ho tum mujhse...

bas iss tarah mere saath...mere paas ...hamesha rehna...

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MastaT(Mohi):

Whatever was written on the wall Tara was surprised she picked up the chalk and started to write something on the wall!! All this time MJ was watching Tara observing evry move.

He was sat up on the (I don't know what it's called where he went to sleep in the uc days).

Watching Tara scribble something on the wall MJ couldn't wait any longer to see what his lady love has written as answer to his

He comes down saying the confession shayr he had been working on since the day he first realised his feelings for Tara.

To his surprise he sees Tara laughing at him mocking him. Not taking him seriously at all.

He turns his gaze over to the wall and try's to read what Tara has written with the help of the light illuminating from the moon

He is in utter shock!! Tara had written a few lines not for him but on his behalf for radha!!

Now this pulls his last string, ticks him of, triggers his anger his annoyed to the next level!

Whilst he was trying to control his anger he hears Tara apologising he now thinks she understood him put played hard to get

His heart melts away and the hot fire turns to water

He turns to look at Tara she's smiling at him

He opens his mouth to speak but Tara interrupts

he apologises again and says I knew radha should of come I really did try to send her but she was too busy playing pin the tail on the donkey with Vasu! So this is what you were trying to tell me you have a surprise set up for radha.

Now that had pinched MJ's last nerve and he was really annoyed!! He banged his hand against the ladder so hard that blood started to gush out

Tara runs up to him tells him off and tears her dupatta to bandage MJ's wound

But that wasn't enough for MJ he was still breathing fire!

Tara starts to speak again I know your annoyed I'm not here to stay i will go back to the havelli and send Radha

Don't worry I won't spoil the surprise for her

Her words were piercing his heart. How did she come to this conclusion, does she not notice what his trying his level best to show her!'??

Her words were like fuel to the fire that was burning him inside

She notices that there's more to this then the eyes can see! Her instincts tells her there's a mystery left yet to solve

The mystery within

Within MJ's eyes within his heart!! His eyes were speaking to her

Interpreting his heart

Really??? She was questioning herself!!

Was she on the same page as he was! Or was it that she didn't understNd the language MJ's heart is trying to convey to her!

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Archi21(me):

she was seeing in MJ's eye wondering what she missed that MJ said without saying anything from mouth but from eyes??

what??

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Masta(Mohi):

She saw love!! HaAi

But she couldn't accept it her insecurities didn't allow her to!

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Archi21(me):

she don't want to see dreams which cann't be fulfilled

she was full of fear if she she interpret wrong she will lose her friend MJ also

~Dil samal jaa zara phir mohobat karne chala too
Dil yahi ruk jaa zara phir mohobat karne chala hai too~

she was quite but her heart and mind where at war

heart : MJ has done all this for U and U are not accepting it

mind: No, MJ did all this for Radha but U the outsider came and spoil all

MJ broke silence

He hold Tara tightly with full love and asked why U are doing this to me Tara ?why??

Normally Tara U understand what I want to say without saying

But why today U are behaving like stranger

Why???

Tara was seeing in MJ's eyes like searching at least one clue what she is feeling is true

MJ: Tara I arranged all this for U

Tara U are the person who believed me

Who understand me

even if I tried to be harsh to U

U were always with me

then why today U are not with me ??

with my feelings??

Tara's tears rolling on her cheek

Tara's heart was beating like drum

MJ continued ...

Tara tell me what made U interpret this that all this preparation is for Radha

Which of my talk or behavior have hurt U that U are behaving in this way today

MJ continued holding Tara more firmly

Tara... Radha is my best friend my childhood friend just nothing else

Tara it was U who brought life to this place (UC turned to PC-pyara chaman)

It was U who brought light to my life Tara

It was U and only U who never left a single stone turned to find proof for my innocnce

U never cared for yourself in doing this ...

BG song from movie Nautanki saala
~Aasma tu mera,ya hai mera khuda
Ek kalma mera ...,tu hi tu,tu hi tu~

Tara was seeing MJ without taking her eyes from his eyes

MJ's eyes were filled with tears

He was in pain

His pain was internal

His pain was because his friend com soul-mate who read his eyes interpreted him wrong

Tara was trying to say something

but...

But MJ stopped her from uttering by keeping his hand on her mouth

He told Tara with full... overflowing love and emotion

His voice was cracking ...

Tears were flowing from eyes of both MriAra...

MJ: Tara I LOVE U

Tara U are my moti Tara

Yes Tara I love U

Tara hugged MJ tightly

This hug was tight and full of passion

Tara was crying ...

MJ was crying ...

Both were silent but there heart were saying

BG EBI title track

~Yaar basa loo rom-rom dewani ban jaoo,

Aur kaha rab dhudhu mere yaar mein rab paoo

Tu hi tab tha, tu hi ab hai,jag hai jab se tab se tu hai

Meri hasti, Meri rutba ,meri dulat-shuhrat tu hai

Maan samandar

Tu hai dariya

Mein too tu mein bahta hai~


MJ tried to loose the grip but Tara's hold was strong

She was still crying ...

She said : I love U MJ

I always loved U MJ but feared what if I tell U and I will lose my friend then...

...

MriAra were in arms of each-other

Living their life in each-others arm

They don't want to be separated for a single moment

They were living every single moment of life.

~Ek Boond Ishq pe hoo zinda~

Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg...u r rockstar Archi...
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Mujhe dikha...
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Ab toh main likh dungi...

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