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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4:

6th September 2015

Radhika's house:

Radhika after playing with bonzo for a while goes inside the house...

Radhika(with a smile and loud voice):mom,dad m home...

She goes to her dad,sits beside him

Radhika(cute puppy face):m sorry for my arrogant behaviour this morning...I shouldn't have talked to u and mom rudely..r u angry at me..

Dilip(smiles):no..its okay choti..

Radhika smiles and side hugs him..dilip places his hand on her head and taps her head gently twice..

Radhika(low voice):Is mom still angry?

Dilip(gentle smile):ofcourse she is angry...the way u behaved this morning was not right choti..

Radhika:I know dad... but now what should I do...how vil I patch up with her..give some ideas pa

Dilip:m not gonna interfere in this...its between you and ur mom...do wat u usually do to patch up with her..now go and get the peace treaty signed..

Radhika nods and hugs her father..she then goes gets up and slowly goes to the kitchen with bonzo following her ,she keeps her finger on her lips and signals bonzo to keep quite where her mom is making everything ready for dinner..radhika back hugs mala..

Radhika:sorry mom!i behaved so rudely this morning...sorry..u dint even call me this afternoon...are u still angry..

Mala:Radhika!leave... leave me...

Radhika:see..u are still angry...u are not even calling me choti..

Radhika(moves her head left and right with a smile):No..first you forgive me,then I will leave u..

mala's anger fades away and she smiles,she places her one hand on radhika's head and says

mala:I forgive you...now go freshen up..i vil bring some snacks for you..

radhika: (kisses mala on cheek cutely):Love you mom...!

After this radhika takes bonzo along goes to her room..she freshen ups and comes downstairs along with bonzo...dilip is sitting on the sofa,radhika comes sits beside him and bonzo sits beside rahika.just then mala comes there with a tray with three coffee cups and a milk bowl on it..mala gives coffee to dilip..

Radhika:mom I and bonzo vil sit outside and enjoy ur coffee..lets go bonzo (Radhika takes her cup and bonzo's bowl and goes outside..)

Mala:radhika!(radhika stops mid way,turns around and sees mala)

Dilip:let her sit outside..let her go mala..(mala smiles and nods)

Mala:okay go..

Radhika (smile) turns around,walks outside..she comes outside and keeps the bowl on the veranda and she sits on the steps and starts drinking coffee..

Arjun's house:

Arjun reaches home..

Rana:Go freshen up..i vil make tea for you..

Arjun(with a bit smile):no kaka today I vil make tea..u just sit and relax..

Arjun quickly freshen ups and goes to kitchen makes a tea for him and rana..he takes the two cups and walks towards kaka...

Arjun:(giving the cup to him)lets sit outside and enjoy the tea..

They both come outside and sit on the varanda..

Arjun:(with little sadness):sorry kaka..i shoudnt have behaved like that with you this morning..it's just..

Rana:it's okay arjun.u don't need to apologise...i dint feel bad..

Arjun:But kaka..i...

Rana:Arjun..leave it..so you tell what happened today?

Arjun(smiles):we got hold a drug dealer today..(he remembers radhika and smiles)

Arjun's smile was a bit different ,his smile reached his eyes..the smile was genuine..it was nearly more than 2 years that he smiled this way..rana notices his smile..

Rana(with a smile):Arjun..did something else happened today..ur smile is bit different..

Arjun:it's jus..I met a girl..and (narrates the whole incident..)..she was really brave..she tackled that drug dealer with her smartness..(he continuously remembers radhika)(in a husky voice)she had a beautiful smile...(he remembers rahika's smile,there was an affection in his voice,his eyes wer gleaming)..

Radhika's house:

Radhika is sitting on the steps and drinking coffee..just then a butterfly(dark green and black coloured)flies near her eyes..radhika blinks..radhika who notices the butterfly,smiles..the butterfly continuosly flies around radhika..

Radhika(smile):bonzo look butterfly..bonzo,butterfly..

Bonzo steadily gets up and begins to bark after seeing the butterfly..

Radhika:shh..shh..bonzo..quite..it vil fly away..

The butterfly flies away...Bonzo barks and runs behind the butterfly..radhika runs behind bonzo..

Radhika:stop bonzo..stop..

Arjun's house:

Rana(with smile and affectionate look):after a long time I have seen u talk like this..u used to have the same smile and look when u talked about zubin..

Arjun after hearing zubin's name gets sad..his smile completely fades away..there was grief in his face..

Arjun(grief eyes and stammering voice):Zu..zubin..

He begins to have all those flashbacks of zubin and gets teary eyed..he closes his eyes and images of zubin getting shot appears before him,a tear escapes from his eye..

Rana:(who saw arjun's tears):arjun..wat happened?arjun..are u again remembering that day..

Arjun(opens his eyes,tears flowing,taking a heavy breath):kaka,zubin..he..he..why?

Rana(concerned and worried look):arjun..for how long are you going to blame yourself...you are not at fault..

Arjun(sad):but kaka..he died because of me..u know he got shot while...(long pause..arjun's eyes fill with tears)..

[FB:Ashok aims his gun at arjun,zubin who sees this..runs towards arjun and inturn gets shot...)

Arjun(he closes his eyes and tear drop from his eyes)(with a heavy heart and tone):he..he...he gave his life for me...y did he do that..

Rana:( gets emotional and sad..he palces both hand over his shoulder and consoles him..)don't blame urself arjun..dont..

Arjun(crying):no kaka..its cos of me..i couldn't save him..its all cos of me..(he kneels down and cries)

Arjun completely breaksdown and rana(with tears) tries to console him...

Radhika's house:

Dinning table:

All are sitting and having dinner,

Radhika:mom,dad u know wat happened today..she begins to narrate the incident that happened at TM road and red light area..

After listening to her,mala gets little tensed and angry..

Dilip(proud smile):look mala..my daughter is so brave,m proud of her..

Mala(little angry):what bravery..it is stupidity..what was the need to do such heroic stunts...wat if something had happened to u..

Radhika(smile):nothing happened..look at me..m fine..your parathas are so yummy..

Mala:don't change the topic..you r fine cos of that officer who shot that drug dealer..had he not shot him..you would have been in danger..wat was the need to do such stunts..

Radhika:mom..leave it..m fine..

Dilip:yes mala..leave it..

They continue the conversation and have their dinner..

Arjun's house:

Rana has made arjun sleep..he caresses his hair..

Arjun(in his sleep):zubin..

Rana(while caressing his hair)(inner voice): don't know for how long he is gonna blame himself.. I know no one can take zubin's place in your heart..but I believe god vil send someone like zubin in your life again..

Radhika's house:

Bonzo(with his two paws on window) stands near the window and looks at the sky,he blinks his eye...

Arjun's house:

After some minutes rana gets up and goes towards the door..he stops near the door,turns back and looks at arjun..

Rana:time heals all wounds..it vil heal yours too..and someone will help you heal it..
(after that he closes the door and goes to his room...)

Radhika's house:

Radhika enters her room and looks at bonzo(who is looking outside)lovingly..she slowly goes near him and sits on the window..she caress his head..bonzo quickly jumps up,places his head on radhika's lap and lays down...radhika continues to caress his fur..and looks at the sky...

After a while..

Radhika(sigh,sad): People talk about how hard it is to remember,but no one talks about how much efforts we put into forgetting...the more we love someone the stronger and difficult it is to forget them..isnt it bonzo?.

Bonzo steadily gets up,starts barking and begins to shake his heads,rubs his head against her hand,her face..radhika holds his face kisses his forehead..

Radhika(smile):I love you too bonzo..(bonzo barks).

Radhika:see the stars have blossomed..lets see our angels are...they look at the sky and start searching for ankush and sufiya among the stars...

Radhika after a while points finger at two stars..

Radhika(points finger at two stars):see bonzo (bonzo looks up)that's ankush bhai and that's sufiya..

Bonzo:Baw Baw.(moves his tail).

After some minutes...They both go to sleep...bonzo jumps unto the bed and lays on the bed..radhika sits on the bed..she takes the blanket and covers bonzo..she turns to her left and looks at a photo(ankush's pic),she takes the photo,wipes it and kisses the photo..

Radhika(tears)(sigh):miss u bhai..(hugs the photo)

After a while,She keeps the photo back on the side table,turns around covers herself with a blanket and goes to sleep..

Arjun's House:

(Arjun's dream:arjun is running in the dark dense forest with gun in his hand..

Arjun:zubin..come fast..

he looks back and all of sudden stops..he turns around and sees bright light behind him...he sees someone coming through that light..but cant see his face..

Arjun:zubin..is that you..zubin

He is still unable to see who it is..His eyes shrink due to brightness..he still tries to see the person..the brightness of light increases..he closes his eyes due to brightness)

Arjun steadily wakes up..he becomes restless and sees here and there..he gets numb..after a minute gets up from his bed and walks towards the window..he (bereaved) stands near the window and looks at the sky(with a yearning look)..

At the same time..(radhika's house)

Radhika's house:

Bonzo feels something..he quickly gets up and stands on the bed(restless),gets down from the bed..goes towards the window,stands there and looks at the sky..

after a while radhika too gets up..and looks at bonzo looking at the sky..


7th September 2015:

(Radhika's dream:Radhika is in a deep,dark and dense forest..she sees a tiny light glowing on and off from a little distance..she goes near it,she smiles seein it..it was a firefly..she tries to catch it,but it flies away..she follows the firefly...in the background baw baw baw,radhika hears the bark and looks up,she is not able to figure out wer the sound is comin from,she closes her eyes)
Radhika opens her eyes,gets up and looks here and there...

Radhika:oh..it was a dream..smiles and looks at bonzo
Edited by gunsandroses - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Sorry for the late late update..I feel the continuity missing..vil avoid next time...

Hope u all like part 4..

After reading some ff..I feel I write like a nursery kid... 😆 I vil continue with my nursery rhymes...

There are really some great writers in here..
Edited by gunsandroses - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Thank u all for the comments and likes...and do point out if there's mistake...

Goin on a vacation..so my next update vil be in october middle..if possible vil try to update earlier...

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