Ardhika FF (w/ NeSam)- Missing Pieces -Updated Act 11, Pg 32, 18/11 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I have the same restlessness reading this as I had d day before the last episode. Can't wait for your version of their confession.
Jus wow! Stay blessed! Love!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aradiv

I have the same restlessness reading this as I had d day before the last episode. Can't wait for your version of their confession.

Jus wow! Stay blessed! Love!


I'll share my pre-cap thoughts with you lol ...

1) guess what RAdz writes or creates with the pen-paper?!
2) Samrat should be held responsible too
3) Arjun meets the Mishra men :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...it's perfect..nd the particular para where arjun says 'he lost everything this morning' is superb...scene 4 was awesome...jus loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: esprit_00


I'll share my pre-cap thoughts with you lol ...

1) guess what RAdz writes or creates with the pen-paper?!
2) Samrat should be held responsible too
3) Arjun meets the Mishra men :)


Naiceee!!! Bring it on, darling! 🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gunsandroses

Wow...it's perfect..nd the particular para where arjun says 'he lost everything this morning' is superb...scene 4 was awesome...jus loved it...


Thanks ...

I tried to create lines with double meaning in Arjun's confession dialog - because we know he likes to speak in a manner that can be taken by different people in different ways. Hence the line about "being blinded by our idea of ... not seeing the truth when it is in front all along" in Scene 2. It applies to all the characters - it's a very reflective line IMO, and took me some time to word it properly.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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perpect yaar.This is just felt wat could have happen in real epi about Arjun confession U make excatly how he may do.And atlast he cleared the mess wat he created .Yes now samrat is needed to buck everything.And as aradiv said U carried that restlessness excatly the way as the show carried .Stay blessed dear.😊
Precap seemed good.Now make dadaji rock before Arjun.I looking forward for their convo😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: raji_sudha

perpect yaar.This is just felt wat could have happen in real epi about Arjun confession U make excatly how he may do.And atlast he cleared the mess wat he created .Yes now samrat is needed to buck everything.And as aradiv said U carried that restlessness excatly the way as the show carried .Stay blessed dear.😊

Precap seemed good.Now make dadaji rock before Arjun.I looking forward for their convo😃


Thanks ... yeah it will be hard to write that convo down ... but i think i won't make it so heavy ... more lighthearted conversation with subtle deep meaning. Let's see what my brain churns out.. lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow, seriously the way you've written Arjun and his lines...I could so picture that scene in the office when he came clean to Sam and family.
You really have a way with words and have done a superb job of keeping the essence of the show in each act and scene you've written 👏

Can't wait to read the next installment!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome! Can't wait for ArDhika confession ;) Please update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love it! I hope Samrat also tells the truth to Piyali, atleast. The chapter was awesome and I hope to read ArDhika reunion soon. Update soon, please.

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