Ardhika FF (w/ NeSam)- Missing Pieces -Updated Act 11, Pg 32, 18/11

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

awesome update

love the ghazal you mentioned in the end, it's bbbeeaauuuttiiiffuulll

Thanks for the PM and update next act soon.

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Battu

@bajarbattu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Darling Esprit,,

You outdo yourself everytime you pen a new update!!! 😛
Such a romantic you are.

loved the poem!
👏

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battu.

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esprit_00

@esprit_00

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Thanks everyone - as most of you have figured, this leads into the 2nd last episode. Let's see how I work the next chapter out.

I'm glad you all liked the ghazal ... I wanted to use something non-mainstream :)

@pippa I'll give it a try for sure :)

Thanks again ...

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lovv

@lovv

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

true...arjun never spoil sam's happiness by telling whole truth...bcz radhika did everything to make sam happy only...not spoil her family...

i am in 4th chapter...havnt completed others...so i dnt knw how u r unfolding d scenes...so wat i felt i am writing...

She never lied to you or anyone for that matter. Everything she told you guys about me, my secrets and Nandini-di was all true."

after this also, piyali just asked him to get out...no bugging for d truth completely...she knws arjun wont tell...

i think piyali-samrat also needs good closer or patch up after herat-to-heart confession of samrat's blunder mistake...

sam really needs to b strong enough to take her father's blunder..n hw she z gng to set her family straight...

coming to arjun-dadaji...i think already vth this call to meet radhika's family, arjun proved dadaji he z really meant for radhika...i so loved this scene...thanks...

i am looking forward to d updates...

n hw arjun z gng to reconcile vth nandhu...it only happens after he brings his life back from rishikesh though...

totally nice writing...great gng...

Edited by lovv - 9 years ago

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lovv

@lovv

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

wow...esprit...

just read part 5-bridging divides...

i liked d entire reveleation part of scene 1...

piyali's behaviour z upto her character on screen...

only thing i felt z, neil knws sm wer arjun has sm motive n also knws he z nt dat bad of a person, after ardhika marriage also, dats y he z worried,...so wen arjun tells d truth...i hope he z not dat much against arjun...(from d show dat dialog from neil, still i cant believe arjun...can b considered in anyway...bt dat was totally fun way for me...n neil z a forgiving person like radhika...)

"One would laugh knowing all she could do with that paper was fold it into a funnel cone so it looked like a peanut bag. If her writing career didn't work out, perhaps she could try her luck as a peanut vendor. The last thought actually made her smile, albeit wryly.

i totally liked this ...totally...

and this dialog of arjun...

"To start something new, start with something sweet",

...just into d flow

i thought after barfi he z gng to say nw jalebi...bt ur dialog was too good..."i want radhika happy"...

dats only possible vth him...

and this dialog...

"she has always been my one truth in life" totally bang on...

bt i didnt get y did he ask "does she love me"...bcz he knws she loves him..i would hav loved it to read it as "does she still love me?"

totally too good...

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esprit_00

@esprit_00

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

@lovv, Arjun wanted confirmation from dada-ji on whether she loves him... He knows in his heart but it's unspoken words so... Just fishing for confirmation. That's why dada-ji asks him the same question back ... Because the old fellow is smart enough to understand that Arjun's answer is likely to be the same as Radz's.

Also remember Arjun is a religious revert so sometimes he lacks in the faith department and he needs assurance from someone he trusts. It's just the way I understand his psyche :)

Edited by esprit_00 - 9 years ago

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Wow wonderful update ,loved it a lot...

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lovv

@lovv

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

today complted d 6th part...got answers to my questions from 5th part...

really nice update...

i liked d fact dat, arjun still hav dat blue stole of radhika...its really nice u remember n followed minute details also...

i liked d meaning of d ghazal...

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

EDITED 10/7

So I really want to read this but I'm going to punish myself by first making sure I post up a chapter in Dheere Dheere by the end of this week before I can give you a proper reply 😆

I'm having some horrible writer's block for some reason

I will comment about the ghazal...so awesome with subs! 👏

It was very emotional and deep 😭 when the first line was sang I already knew it summed up Ardhika's time apart...that feeling of longing and how that person's presence is just always surrounding you...neither truly there nor truly apart 💔

And I replied to your comment at the OS thread 😃

**EDITED

Posting up a proper reply as I promised 😃

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/127516992

Edited by iheartChai - 9 years ago

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esprit_00

@esprit_00

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: iheartChai
**RESERVED**
So I really want to read this but I'm going to punish myself by first making sure I post up a chapter in Dheere Dheere by the end of this week before I can give you a proper reply 😆

I'm having some horrible writer's block for some reason

I will comment about the ghazal...so awesome with subs! 👏

It was very emotional and deep 😭 when the first line was sang I already knew it summed up Ardhika's time apart...that feeling of longing and how that person's presence is just always surrounding you...neither truly there nor truly apart 💔

And I replied to your comment at the OS thread 😃

Thanks 😊

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