New OS ~ INDIVIDUALS..~ 2nd SHOT pg: 5 (25/08) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL


Aww. Waise i read your stories too, sorry couldn't comment still.. Can u PM me pls. Eagerly waiting..


Ok dear. I just read you are updating next part. Wow i am eagerly waiting for that 😃
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Originally posted by: Asheley



Ok dear. I just read you are updating next part. Wow i am eagerly waiting for that😃



Thanks sissy.. Hope it don't spoil the flavour...
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Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL



Thanks sissy.. Hope it don't spoil the flavour...


It won't dear. i believe in your writings. It will come out in wonderful way
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Originally posted by: Asheley



It won't dear. i believe in your writings. It will come out in wonderful way



Thank u for that..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys... As you all, already know, this was supposed to be a single shot, but my dear friends want to have a 2nd shot of the same.. So I've gotten a idea, for the next part...

But I'm scared that it may destroy the flavour of this OS. And I don't want that to happen with the very first OS of my life.. So friends, do tell me, if you don't like it, I'll remove it immediately.. Please tell me honestly.

Ok here you go...

God save me...

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OS- INDIVIDUALS... 2nd shot.

Arjun and Sam are having Dinner together, Although, all smiling and happy they are pretending to be, they couldn't help but let their mind to think, what is Radhika/Neil maybe doing at the moment. They tried hard to concentrate on each other, but couldn't make their heart to do the same.

Just when, they are about to go for a dance, Sam's phone rung, showing an unknown number. She got confused with the number, still excused herself from Arjun. Whereas same goes with Arjun after a while and he picked the phone..

Next moment, they both rushed towards the table, and quickly, started collecting their things. They both looked at each other for a moment. And after a second of uncertainity, they spoke together, "Radhika/Idiot is in the police station."

Their eyes widened as realization dawned upon them, Radhika and Neil is together, and that too in POLICE STATION...

At the Police Station..

(Humka Peeni h...

Peeni h ...

Humka Peeni h...)*2

Radhika and Neil, are singing loudly, with the other criminals of the Police Station. From the Inspector to the sub-inspector, all are clutching their hair to save themselves from the torture, whereas Veeru and Kaalia, have made a bigger team including the criminals of the Police Station. They all are singing so loudly, that sleep has ran miles away, from the place.

Lastly, when they couldn't take it anymore, one of the inspector shouted, "Aaaeee... Chup re... Just shut your mouth, all of you..."

For few minutes, silence prevailed at the whole place, and the police officials thought, that his trick worked. Then suddenly a voice came,

"Jab life ho, out of control..

Hothon ko krke roll...

Hothon ko krke roll...

Seeti bajake bol...

Aal is weelll...", Radhika sang shaking her head from right to left. Seeing her, everyone else joined in. "Aal iss weelll..."

The police officials, slapped their forhead with their palm, shaking their head.

Neil added, "Murgi kya jane ande ka kya hoga..."

Someone asked, "Kya hoga?!?!"

Neil sung, "Life milegi, ya tawe pe fry hoga..."

"Kock kok kockok..."

Someone sang, "Are koi na jane..

Apna future kya hoga..."

A guy kept a palm on his one ear and stretched the other and sang, "Kya hogaaa?!?"

They all gathered at the centre, and sang in unison,

"Are hoth ghuma...

Seeti baja...

Seeti bajake bol ..."

"Are bhaiyya...

Aall iss well...", they shouted, each dancing at his unique style. Whereas the inspector, started banging his head on the table. One of the criminal started whistling loudly...

"Are chachu ...

Aall iss weelll..." Neil sang with others, while Radhika just shakes her head from left to right and vice versa, closing her eyes, and sitting upon the cemented floor. A sub inspector, stretches his hands above his head, making a crying face, asking the Lord to show some mercy. The guy whistled again.

"Are bhaiyya...

Aall iss well..."

Neil sat beside Rads, and both started shaking their heads together... And the inspector, keeps his crying face, on the shoulder of the sub-inspector. While the sub-inspector consoled him saying, the bad time will pass soon... The guy whistled more loudly.

All were doing bhangra inside the locker, whereas the police officials are having worst time, as they couldn't even sleep a wink.

Just then a car stopped outside, and Arjun with Sam, rushed in to the Police Station.

They banged the table hard, demanding, "We came to release Neil, and Radhika..."

As soon as the words left their mouth, pure relief washed over the features of the police officials, whereas the other criminals lost the color of their faces. And here our Veeru and Kaalia, hides themselves behind the big forms of the other criminals.

After sometime...

Neil and Radhika were sitting on the bench, with fingers on their lips, and Arjun and Sam seemed like strict teachers, to the poor students.. They are talking to the inspector...

Ar: "Why did you arrested them?!?! What is their crime?!?", he asked desperately.

Sa: "Ya... And now, you're letting us take them without any bail papers and amount... Why you arrested them at the first place?!?"

The inspector just nervously scratches his cheek, and gulped his saliva.

Veeru and Kaalia, looked at each other with theif eyes and giggled silently.

/FLASHBACK/

They're sitting on a huge rock near the beach, while enjoying the flow of the cold air.

Ra: "Kaalia... Let's do something different. Something which we never did.", she said thoughtfully.

Ne: "Some new experience?!?!", he asked her.

She nodded her head in positive.

Ne: "Like... Like sex?!?", he asked after thinking sometime.

Radhika make a yucky face, and said, "Hut..."

Ne: "Hut nhi... Bungalow..", he said smiling, idiotically.

Radhika shakes her head in negative, "Not that hut... This hut...", saying this she gave him a light push.

After sometime, Neil saw a police van crossing from there, he followed it with his eyes, till he could. And then suddenly turned towards Rads and said, "Veeru have you ever been arrested?!?!"

Radhika went into thoughts, and said, "Once I did got arrested. All thanks to Jai. But never reached the police station."

Ne: "You got arrested?!?! What happened next?!?", he said leaning near her.

Ra: "You know what happened?!? That day I was so hungry, and the sub-inspector gave me his tiffin..", before she could continue, Neil pops in, "Such a kind and nice person.."

Radhika looked at him angrily and said, "Damn his kindness.. He gave me his tiffin, and made Jai have the whole thing, that too from my hands. That Idiot, duffer, world's biggest fool, is giving me lectures to become a good housewife and I was feeling like to chop him into pieces, pack him up in the same tiffin, and post it at his address."

Seeing Radhika huffing and puffing in anger, Neil started fanning her with his both the hands, saying, "Shanti... Shanti Maate... Shanti.."

Rads looked at him in anger, and said, "Damn you and your Shanti..."

Neil started pulling her towards his bike , while she continued to protest.

After sometime...

Neil and Radhika, were hiding behind a wall and looking at both the police officials infront of them. Neil whispered something in Rad's ears and she showed him thumps up.

Neil went near a wall, where it is written in a clear words, DON'T URINATE HERE... He opened his zip, and did exactly opposite to what was written on the wall, all the while making sure that the police officials are watching him.

The police officials rushed towards him, and in the next moment, as expected he's arrested. He's happily going towards the police van, when suddenly Radhika came rushing, and said, "I'm also coming.."

The police officials, looked at her strangely. She's telling like they all are going on a vacation.

1st inspector: " Ooo Madamji... You can't come.. Go away."

Radhika pouted cutely and asked, "Why can't I?!? He's going, with you, and I'm with him, so I'll come too."

2nd inspector: "No you can't. He did a crime, and you didn't. So we can't take you."

Radhika looked at them, then at Neil and then at the wall. "So I need to do a crime?!?! Ok then...", saying this she started walking towards the wall.

Neil's eyes widen, getting what she's going to do. "Are no no wait... Wait..", he rushed towards her, and picked her off the floor, holding her from behind, locking his hands around her belly. He carried her in the same way, towards the van.

He murmered something in the inspector's ears, and pushed some money in his pocket, and they are off from the place.

He sighed in relief, whereas Radhika just scratched the back of her head innocently.

After sometime...

Neil is riding his bike, with Radhika at back. He have a full proof plan, this time. From far he saw a police van standing at a corner, and now is the time to implement it into action.

Ne: "Ready for action Veeru?!?!"

Ra: "Ready, Kaalia..."

Next second he increased the acceleration of the bike, and then THUD...

He crashed his bike at the back of the police van. The police officials standing there stood with their mouth wide agape . There van is standing at the extreme corner, of the road, and still these people managed to crash against it.

Both the Police officials, are standing at the front of the van. They bend sideways to see the culprits, and they saw a girl and a boy on a bike looking at them , and smiling like fools.

After sometime...

Radhika and Neil are sitting on the divider of the road with a satisfied smile on their face.

The police inspectors are lost in a deep discussion.

Inspector: "We have to arrest them.."

Sub-Inspector: "Sirji, you're not getting it. Today's day was a hectic one, and then we got this night shift. If we arrest them, it will add on to the already heaving works for us... I'ld say, leave them..."

Ins: "Hmmm... You're right.."

They both went towards Neil and Radhika, and the former ones raise their hands, to get Handcuffed .

Ignoring their gesture, the Inspector said in a stern voice, "Look, I'm leaving you both with a warning. If next time I somehow caught you doing any crime, then you'll face me.,." Satisfied with his speech, he looked at his junior who just showed him thumbs up.

Radhika and Neil looked at each other, and said, "No Arrest... Just Warning."

Inspector: "Hmmm...", he said with a proud smile.

Rads and Neil looked at each other, and then at the police officials. Each one of the both went towards one of the police officials..

They took a deep breathe, looked towards heaven, closed their eyes, and said SORRY...

SHATAK... Two slaps, echoed all over the vacant road...

/FLASHBACK OVER/

Arjun and Sam, stood at the Police Station, with their mouth wide open. They couldn't believe, that these two people, can create so much of trouble.

Whereas the Inspector and the sub-inspector were still scratching their cheeks, reminiscing the incident, and Veeru along with Kaalia are rolling on the floor with laughter.

Ins: "Sirji.. Take them both away, from here. We won't file any case against them. Take them away. We won't arrest them next time, even if they murder someone... Please pls take them away...", he said literally begging Arjun.

Sub-Ins: "Madamji... From the time, they have entered this place. They have turned this place into a club house.. We can't sleep a wink. They influenced the other criminals to sing and dance with them. And from then till now, we're waiting for u guys to come and take them away. We can't risk being alone with them, otherwise would have left them in the same place.", he said folding his hands infront of Sam.

Sam and Arjun now turned towards Neil and Rads.

Ar: "Common Radhika. Lets go home..", he said coming forward.

Radhika immediately hugged Neil to protect herself. Sam made a frowning face, whereas Arjun closed his fist in anger.

Sam: "Lets go Idiot... We need to leave.", but Neil hides his face in Radhika's hair.

Sam couldn't believe, that Neil just did that, whereas Arjun's anger is reaching on the peak seeing the daring of the guy.

First of all the knee length frock of Radhika, then her messy hair, next the drowsy eyes ,and above all her drunken state, is enough for making any man to go weak on his knees. And here Neil is getting the priviledge to hug her. Excuse me... Isn't she MY wife?!?!

Here Sam is fuming in anger. The daring of this girl to hug her Idiot, and above all He's hiding his face in her neck. Did he just chose Radhika over her.

Sam and Arjun both took steps to separate the Veeru-Kaalia Jodi, while they both started running in the police station at various directions.

The inspector, sub-inspector, along with Sam and Arjun, are chasing them, and our Veeru-Kaalia, are in their full form to make them run behind them for the rest of the night...

Aaa... They both were screaming and running here and there whereas the rest of them are shouting, "Catch him...", "There she is...", "Under the table...", "Behind the almirah..."

With this we comes to the end of THE Adventurous night of Radhika and Neil...

Their time which they decided to spend as an INDIVIDUAL, ends here... From the next day, the torture will be revised in their life, but this night.. THIS very night, got imprinted in their and ours heart forever...

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Please please please tell me, that it is fine... I don't know, what to expect...

These 2 shots were an attempt from my side to relieve my friends of the regular tension, Cvs are providing in the name of an episode... So its just a fun filled adventurous night for Radhika, Neil and for us, and much needed break from this regular torture of life...

So tell me, if it fulfilled its purpose, nicely or not...

And lastly... Thank you all for your encouraging words, and appreciation, on my works... What else do any writer needs... So a big hug to all my friends and Uuummmaahhh...

Edited by DIGVIPAUL - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is really nice ,thank u sooo much😊
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Originally posted by: snehachinivar

It is really nice ,thank u sooo much😊



Glad atleast someone liked it... Thanks dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Now that's what I call an update! Simply brilliant! 👏 You write so well! Veeru and Kalia were just amazing 😆 Slapping the cops to get arrested 😆 Arjun might be so angry seeing his biwi ji with Neil 😈 I won't mind if you give us a third part too! Please think about it 😳
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Originally posted by: RainbowPearls

Now that's what I call an update! Simply brilliant! 👏 You write so well! Veeru and Kalia were just amazing 😆 Slapping the cops to get arrested 😆 Arjun might be so angry seeing his biwi ji with Neil 😈 I won't mind if you give us a third part too! Please think about it 😳



Thanks yaara... I don't know, if 3rd shot would be a good idea... Coz, INDIVIDUALS... is a story about Rads and Neil.. If somehow I get an Idea, for their fun and Masti, then I'll definitely, write it, and share it with you guys... Promise..😉

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