New OS ~ INDIVIDUALS..~ 2nd SHOT pg: 5 (25/08)

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Aha, here I'm back with the first Os of my life.. Honestly telling guys, I'm a person who strictly likes stories which continues for a long time... And I can't think of something which would be over in a single shot... But with the current scenario, in the forum and the show, I've got an idea.. And I'm in no mood to continue this for a longer time...

So here comes my first experiment with One Shots...

About the story, its not about Ardhika, or Raneil, or Samarj, or Nesam... Yup, its strictly about two person, who decides to devote a single night of their life to themselves... Its, how they try to avoid, their regular issues of life, for a night... So yes it's about how Radhika and Neil decide to spend their night, when their respective partners are off to dinner with each other...

I read many OS, on this topic, but none wrote in this way, so decided to write it myself..

Hope it pleases you guys... Ok enough of my blabbering... Let's read my first effort...

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OS: INDIVIDUALS...

He went.. He isn't joking.. He went to the Dinner with Sam.. Not for once he thought about me... Isn't he suppose to be with me?!?! I'm his wife right?!?! Does he care for this relationship?!?! Do I care about it?!?!', all this thoughts have clouded her mind. She's sitting on the couch of Their so called home.. It wasn't a home actually, but only a house.. A house where three people stays, not as a family, but as individuals...

DING DONG... DING DONG...

Her thoughts, were interrupted by the bell ring. She sighed, and went to open the door. She got surprised to find Neil standing there. HE flashed his brilliant smile to her, and said, "Common Chasni get ready... We're running away, before your pathetic husband reaches home.."

Radhika's mouth fell agape.. What the hell is he talking?!?! Running away?!?! Where?!?!'

Seeing the horrified look on her face, Neil burst out laughing. And his laughter causes Radhika to understand his prank.. She too giggled at him, and invited him inside...

Fatefully, the Nandu di, isn't at home.. Just when they were about to sit, Neil said, "Go and get ready, we're going out tonight.."

Radhika looked at him confused, so he went forward and cupped her face, and said, "Look Chasni.. Arjun and Sam, are having their time.. We can't help, but weep at their ignorant and hurting behavior. They didn't cared for us..." Her face fell hearing this... But Neil continued, "So I want to spend this night with my friend... No no... Don't get any wrong ideas, I'm not going to lose my virginity to you..."

Radhika chuckled hearing his words, whereas Neil just smiled.. "Chasni, today let's forget who we're.. Let's just consider each other as a individual , with whom we're sharing our time tonight.. Just forget the whole damn world, all those people who don't bother about us.. Let's not be Neil and Radhika tonight... Let's be someone else... Let's be some INDIVIDUALS..."

Radhika absorbs his every word, and nodded her head with a huge smile...

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WOOOHHHOOO... yyyaaahhh... YAY YAY YAY YAY...

Radhika was making all kind of sounds as possible while standing on the footrest of the bike instead of sitting... Neil is riding the bike, while adjoining more voices at intervals.. Radhika decided to become a person, who she can't be in her proper senses.. But tonight is the night to lose some senses...

She's drunk... YUP drunk... Radhika Mishra, oopss no Radhika Mehra is drunk for the first time in her life.. She's wearing a knee length frock, for the first time in her life... She's shouting on the road like a mad person for the first time of her life.. Well now is not the time to think about all these craps.. Hehe , it's time to njoy..

Neil was drunk as well, but still in senses, so managing the bike nicely, whereas although drunk for the first time, Radhika, is enjoying it the most..

"Let's go to some PARTY... Where's the party tonight?!!?", she shouted at the top of her voice.

"Uff Chasni, don't shout near my ears. I'll deaf by tomorrow then..", Neil said rubbing his left ear with one hand.

Radhika sits with a THUD, and the bike almost disbalance itself.. "Oye Chasni, don't make this ride the last ride of our life.. Are you planning to go to Heaven in this same bike?!?!"

"I'm not Chasni... Don't call me that.. You told to forget your identity didn't you?!?!", she said grumpily, folding her hands over her chest..

"Yah.. I forgot.. So did you thought of a name for yourself?!?!", Neil asked trying make divert her attention.

"Haan... You know I love VEERU, from SHOLAY..", Radhika said with a childlike innocence. This make Neil turn towards her immediately, "Really?!?! But for me now KAALIA's situation resembles mine... However much, he tries to convince GABBAR, but he won't listen to him ever.. And Poor Kaalia has to bear him, due to his undying love... So I'm Kaalia.."

"Awww...", saying this Radhika glided her hands around his arms and pinches his cheeks cutely..

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"Chahe koi mujhe Jungli kahe...

Kehne do ji kehta rahe...

Hum pyaar ke tufano me pale hai...

Huuummm kyaaa kare...

Yaaahhhooo...", Veeru and Kaalia are singing on the top of their voice, sitting on the divider between the road..

"Yaar, you know, me and Samandar always do this... Let's try something new.", Neil said.

"Yah, let's go to Juhu beach, I saw someone distributing pamphlets about any beach party today...", Rads said taking her head off his shoulders.

"Wait wait...", Neil suddenly shouted. "What what?!?!", Radhika asked totally startled..

"This... THIS water have CROCODILES in it...", he said pointing at the road. Radhika looked at the pointed direction, and screamed, "AAAHHH... They'll eat me..", saying this she jumps on Neil's arms.. Neil carried her in his arms securely and cutely said, "Don't worry Veeru. No Crocodile can eat you , until Kaalia is there.."

Radhika just passed a drunken smile to him and hugged him tighter, occasionally peeping over his shoulders, and sometimes shouting, "Run... Run, they are after us"...

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They enters the beach party, and decides to do everything their heart desires today.. Today they'll bow to its every wish...

They went to the centre of the party, and shouted in chorus, "DJ THODA LOUD BAJA.."

MUSIC: (CHOOMANTAR, from MERE BROTHER KI DULHAN, movie.)

Oh oh.. Oh Baby Oh Baby... Oh Baby Oh Baby...

Oh Baby Oh Baby... Ooo...

Oh oh... Oh Baby Oh Baby... Oh Baby Oh Baby...

Oh Baby Oh Baby... Ooo...

They acted like a free bird ready to take off for a long flight, and roamed on the whole floor in the same way...

Chhooomaaataaar...

Choomantar...

Chhooomaaataaar...

Choomantar...

They came closer to each other and singing the lyrics, as if telling to each other... They are swaying their hands in a way as if try to feel the air...

Choomantar ho ...

Aaja chal ghum ho jaye...

Neil said holding Radhika's hand in his and signaling her through his eyebrows to let just vanish somewhere..

Choomantar ho...

Khud se hi khud ho jaye...

Radhika eyed him in a way , saying to lose their ownself, somewhere..

Choomantar ho..

Nazaron me hum na aye...

They danced their fingers around their eyes, playfully..

Dhunde jahan...

Hum bhi na jane hum h kahan...

They gestured through their hands, asking where are we, and made a face..

Choole zameeen se...

Who aasmaaan...

They both stretches their both hands making a baby face, trying to reach the sky..

Chalo re.. ore ore ore...

Chalo ore... (Music plays..)

They both come close and started doing bhangra in a disco style...

Oh oh.. Oh Baby Oh Baby... Oh Baby Oh Baby...

Oh Baby Oh Baby... Ooo... (Guitar was played in a rough manner..)

They motioned their hands in a way like playing guitar vigorously..

(Are you ready for this...)*2 What...

(Are you ready for this...)*2 What...

Choomantar... ar ar ar...

Then Radhika comes forward in the floor, singing..

Thodi si yaari yaara...

Raho se nibhale...

She waved her hands in flow, depicting the flow of water, continuously swaying to the music.

Apne pe bhi to...

Kabhi apni chala le..

She said giving herself a slight push from ahead..

Thodi si yaari yaara...

Raho se nibhale

Now Neil sungs these lines, with a sway of his head which makes his hair fall on his forhead..

Apne pe bhi to...

Kabhi apni chala le..

He sung with full motion, gliding his hair back with both the hands... All girls present just drools over him... Oh so hot..

Hooo... Chale kahin...

Awara hokar nape zameen...

Radhika comes from behind, swaying her hands over his shoulder..

Hum dhoonde kahin...

Kuch aisa jo khoya hi naaahiii...

Neil brings her forward, and sing those lines, gesturing her to follow him, everywhere.. And Radhika just giggled at him..

Choomantar ho ..

Aaja chal ghum ho jaye...

They both entwined their fingers of left hands with each other, and stretches their hands fully, with the other hand holding each other so close that their cheeks are glued together...

Choomantar ho...

Khud se hi khud ho jaye...

They moves in sync in the way, parting everyone who comes in their way.. Their entwined fist, was making way for them to proceed...

Choomantar ho..

Nazaron me hum na aye...

Now they changes their position, with their rights hands entwined instead of left, and the other one is holding each other close..

Dhunde jahan...

Hum bhi na jane hum h kahan...

They just sway with each other in the same manner..

Choole zameeen se...

Who aasmaaan...

Now Neil raises Radhika holding her waist, and she tries to reach the sky, but no success..

Chalo re.. ore ore ore...

Chalo ore... (Music plays..)

He lowers her on the floor, and just motioned her to let it go, and she just cutely pout, making Neil to pinch her cheeks..

Oh oh.. Oh Baby Oh Baby... Oh Baby Oh Baby...

Oh Baby Oh Baby... Ooo...

Neil gestured Radhika, to come out of the party and take a stroll on the beach.. Radhika just blindly follows, him, while he's taking her through the crowd...

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They both were walking on the beach side, for almost 5 minutes and could still here the music slightly..

After walking for few more minutes, they both settled themselves, on the sand, feeling the cool air to carrasses their features..

"Veeru... Why did you leave that Jai alone?!?!", he asked after sometime.

"He is a Maha Pakau, kind of person you know... Never talks, only threatens... And if asked something, then he'll make your life hell... As if, asking questions are banned... How boring...", she said making all kind of faces she could..

Then she turned towards him and asked, "Why did you leave Gabbar?!?!"

Neil asked, "What could I do, if Gabbar falls for Jai?!?! For the whole life, Kaalia served him , and what do Gabbar ask.. HOLI kab h re?!?!", he said in a Gabbar style..

"How sad.. Poor us..", Radhika said with an exasperated sigh..

Neil immediately sat up, "Why poor us?!?! Poor they... Poor their whole Khandan... Poor their next generation... Why, poor us?!?!", he was saying continuously, while trying to stand up.. Whereas Radhika, was sitting, all the while holding his hands, trying to console him, "Ya ya, poor they.. Not us.. Poor they.. You sit down.. Poor they.. Sit sit.."

Finally Neil sat, but then decided something and slept on the sand, gesturing Rads to join him by his side..

"Veeru, what if we ran away, today, will they ever search for us?!?! Will they ever miss us?!?!", Neil said looking at the sky.

"I don't know Kaalia... Maybe they would, maybe they won't... But why think about them , who didn't cared about us, before going to DATE..", she completed bitterly.

"You know, I enjoyed very much today.. Everytime I get drunk is to console Sam, and always it is about her..It always remained as a Gum bhulane ka Tonic.. For the first time, I enjoyed getting drunk, for me.. I did everything for myself.. It, actually felt good.", Neil said with an amused smile on his charming face.

Radhika, looked at him for a while, and just giggled, again looking towards the sky, "So true. I don't know whether, I'll remember all these tomorrow or not, but I don't want to forget it.. It was fun actually... Wish this night never ends..", she said, with a genuine smile.

"By the way... What was the song which was played in the party?!?!", Neil asked suddenly.

They both makes a thinking face, and suddenly screamed, "CHOOMANTAR..."

Hahahahaha... The soft cool breeze, the moon, the never ending sea, the beautiful night, becomes the witness of these two individuals, their laughter, their friendship, their companionship..

A story of Two INDIVIDUAL..

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Phew, finally done... Tell me whether you liked it or not... It is a hard task to write OS guys.. So hats off to them who have written so, ever... You guys are superb...

Please let me know, how you liked it...

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zuaireah thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nicely done...I always wanted to see their friendship.
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Originally posted by: zuaireah

nicely done...I always wanted to see their friendship.



Glad you liked them...
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i am so fond of story without intense love and romance and always prefer to read and write that kind... this story suited my taste... i like it... good job.
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Wow just amazing ❤️
I loved it ❤️
Words will become less to say about this
you are excellent
I dint read an OS like this
It is different
you are amazing writer 👏
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Originally posted by: shravanfan

i am so fond of story without intense love and romance and always prefer to read and write that kind... this story suited my taste... i like it... good job.




Thank god.. I thought none would like the concept, since its not a love story or romance type.. Phew, mehnat bekar ni gyi, atleast..
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Originally posted by: Asheley

Wow just amazing ❤️
I loved it ❤️
Words will become less to say about this
you are excellent
I dint read an OS like this
It is different
you are amazing writer 👏



Yaar, your comments just take my confidence to whole new level.. Cant thank u enough.. A big Hug for u sissy..
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Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL



Yaar, your comments just take my confidence to whole new level.. Cant thank u enough.. A big Hug for u sissy..



YOU ARE BEST.I LOVE YOUR STORIES.A BIG HUG FOR U TOO FOR GIVING SUCH WONDERFUL STORIES
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Originally posted by: Asheley



YOU ARE BEST.I LOVE YOUR STORIES.A BIG HUG FOR U TOO FOR GIVING SUCH WONDERFUL STORIES


Aww. Waise i read your stories too, sorry couldn't comment still.. Can u PM me pls. Eagerly waiting..
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Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL




Thank god.. I thought none would like the concept, since its not a love story or romance type.. Phew, mehnat bekar ni gyi, atleast..

in lovestory there is mainly love in that story but without love in story there remain only story.

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