Let's be merry my Dove - ArDhika SS PT:4,5 UPDT PG:4 - Page 3

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Thank u😳
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Awesome story
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Originally posted by: Nandinisai

Awesome story

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PART-4

Rads hid behind a tree and saw A's confused face,she took out her phone from her jeans pocket and dialled a no,"Hello...Are you ready Nik?"

The person on the other side:Yes Rads...

Rads:OK...jaldi se start karo...

After that call,Radhu saw Aj looking in the direction,from where his favourite song is being sung by someone.He slowly moved in the direction of the song,mesmerized by the singers voice.Rads too followed him carefully,hiding at diff places,as he felt someone was following him and was frequently turning around to check.He finally reached the garden area,where a band was performing on this song and the crowd gathered there,enjoying their performance and cheering them.He forgot everything and got lost in the sweet voice of the singer and the music,being played by other members.Rads saw him and felt very happy seeing him enjoying it.

"Wowww!my all time favourite song,kya gaa raha hain yaar yeh banda,he is awesome.Jab bhi mein yeh gaana sunta hoon,i feel sooo good."

"I know hubby,,this is your favourite song,u know na it's my fav too.So,i planned this specially for you.After this song ends,you will get your sixth card."

A was enjoying and suddenly his eyes fell on d letter,that he was holding in his hand.

"Oh no...yeh maine kya kiya...i have to find the 6th and 7th cards and mein yaha aaram se gaana sun raha hoon,yeh gaana sunke mein kho jaata hoon,isiliye jaise hi yeh gaana shuru hua,mein kheeche chala aaya yaha sab kuch bhool kar,now i have to go and think why she has left 6th and 7th songs blank."

He then heard few people standing near him,in the back row,were gossiping something and one of the men said,"Kya baat kar raha hain,yeh specially kisi ke bulane pe yaha aaye hain."

He heard another man saying,"Yes dude,this song is dedicated to someone special by a girl."

Aj was shocked listening this and then it struck him that,"Kahi Sunshine hi woh ladki toh nahi,jisne yeh sab arrange karwaya mujhe surprise karne ke liye."

"Haan Arjun,yeh sab maine kiya hain tumhare liye."

(She tied a scarf across her face,so that AJ would not recognize her,she slowly walked towards d stage and placed the card in the guitar case,then came back and silently stood in the crowd.Jyaada bheed ki hone ke baad bhi kisi ka dhyaan Rads par nahi gaya, they were totally involved in the performance...including Arjun)

Aj was shocked would be an understatement because he was touched by dis sweet gesture of his wife,apnon ke liye kuch bhi karne ki Rads ki yahi quality Arjun ko bahut pasand hain,he now understood the reason behind those blank 6 and 7 serial no's

"Yehi 6th song hogi and after they finish the performance,i think i will get the 6th card."

As soon as,the band finished their Performance,the crowd cheered 4r them and showered them with applauds.AJ also applauded and shouted excitedly,"You guys are awesome,loved ur performance."

Nik invited Arjun to join them on d stage.

The crowd made way for Aj and he finally reached the make-shift stage.

Aj shook hands with them and praised them.

The singer,from the band...introduced himself saying,"Hi,i am Nikhil...friends call me Nik and these are my friends,this is Rahul, Premium, Sid, Raj..."

A-Hello everyone,I am Ar...

Nik-Arjun right,i know you?

AJ-"How?"

"Wait...it means Sun..i mean Radh...he was cut short by nik."

Nik-Yes dude,Rads planned this specially for you.I must say,you are lucky to have her in your life.

Aj-"Do you know her?"

Nik-Yes,she was my classmate in high school...

AJ:Oh,that's great...nice meeting you...

Nik-Same here...

(Then his eyes fell on the card,placed in the Guitar case nearby.)

He took it and opened to see Rads's 6th promise:Whatever comes in our life,be it good or bad,we will face it together...

AJ's 6th promise:Yes Ms.Shiny,we will face everything together...saying so,he smiled widely.

(Rads was standing in the crowd and observing all this,with a huge smile plastered on her lips,seeing her Arjun happy)

AJ:"Can u give me the mike,I want to say something?"

Nik:Sure...here take it...

AJ to the crowd:So,guys.You all would have understood that,that lucky guy is me,for whom this rocking band especially performed...

Crowd in unison:Yes...

Arjun:Awesome...so,i want to thank my jaan,for planning this for me.I know she is in the crowd,because she would have definitely come to see my reactions...All i want to say is,"I love you Sunshine and you are the best."

"I love you too Arjun"

A:So,guys i also want to sing something for her...my voice is not so good,but i will try...

"OMG!Pehli baar Arjun mere liye khud gaane waala hain,that's so sweet of him."

Arjun started singing,"Banjaare ko ghar...and the band started playing the instruments."

Rads got totally involved in the performance and lost in her beloveds voice.

After he completed singing,Nik,his band and the crowd cheered and applauded.Sunshine smiled and blew a flying kiss,exactly at that point,her scarf fell revealing her face...

AJ winked and pointed to her,"There she is...my SUNSHINE."

The crowd turned to her and clapped for her,she bowed them and thanked Nik and his band.After that,she ran away from there,gesturing AJ to follow her...

A was confused seeing her running,he also thanked Nik and his band and ran behind her...

Nik's band and the crowd congratulated them for their future ahead and they thanked them...

A:Stop baby...why r u running?

R:Because,abhi bhi ek card baaki hain,u have to catch me,to reach that card...she showed the card to him,that was in her palm clutched protectively and increased her pace.

A:Accha,yeh baat hain...ab dekhna mein tumhe yun pakad lunga...and started running even more faster...

As,he was about to catch her,exactly at that moment...due to heavy breeze,the letter,that he was holding in his hand flew away,he started chasing it and finally caught hold of it...When he turned around searching for Rads,he saw her ascending the terrace stairs.After reaching the terrace,she halted breathing heavily and gestured him to come up...AJ was about in d midst of climbing stairs, when his eyes fell on the card and a small box placed on one of the steps.He took the box and saw his favourite 'Rolex' watch in it...He became very happy and gasped gleefully,"Thank u sooo much Sunshine,i loved it."

Rads looked down from the terrace and replied smiling,"Mujhe pata tha,tumhe zaroor pasand aayegi...ab jaldi se upar aa jao,i am waiting...

While climbing the stairs,he opened the card and saw her 7th Promise:Whenever u will feel low,i will cheer u and be your pillar of strength...

A's 7th promise:Even i promise,to cheer u up,whenever ur mood will be off...

As soon as,he reached the terrace,he started searching for Rads but she was nowhere to be seen...

He started singing,"Jaanam dekh lo,mit gayi dooriyan...

Mein yahan hoon,yahan hoon,yahaan hoon...yahan..."

Rads smiled from,under the shed like thing,she was hiding and sang,"Yeh haseen wadiyaan,yeh khula aasman,agaye hum kaha yeh mere saajna,mujhko tum jo mile har khushi mil gayi..."

AJ moved in the direction of the voice and as soon as she heard the foot steps at a distance,she stopped singing and ran away from there,but her dupatta fell there itself,before she could reach to it,she heard the footsteps coming closer and ran away,leaving it there itself...

A saw her dupatta and bent down catching hold of it,"Gotcha..."

Arjun ka sara mehnat paani mein phir gaya,kyunki waha Rads nahi,sirf uski dupatta thi...

It started lightning and he felt rain drops falling on him...

He started singing loudly,while simultaneously searching for Rads,"Kabhi jo badal barse,

Mein dekhu tujhe aankhen barke,tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki dua..."

He finally spotted her standing at a distance,closing her eyes and stretching her arms,facing the sky and enjoying the feeling of rain drops drenching/caressing her...

Arjun was mesmerized seeing her and stood frozen in his position...She was looking like an angel,in that white salwar,pearl necklace and matching ear-rings...resplendent girl i must say,he thought to himself and smiled sheepishly,ruffling the back of his wet hair...

"Waise har colours mein meri Sunshine beautiful lagti hain, lekin white mein toh yeh aur bhi pyaari lagti hain,aisa lag raha hain ki koi angel seedha aasman se darti par aayi hain..."

Within few minutes,the drizzle turned into heavy downpour...

Rads was still closing her eyes and enjoying drenching in the rains,her dress sticked to her body,like her second skin,accentuating her perfect curves...

Arjun was wearing a transparent shirt,the rain drops revealed his muscular torso and well toned body...

She finally opened her eyes and was surprised to see Arjun standing at a distance and staring at her intently.She immediately lowered her eyes blushing furiously...

Edited by priya1101 - 10 years ago
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PART-5

This part is strictly for 18+

Not proof read, ignore the types

Aj grinned mischieviously and started moving in her direction,she looked up and they both got lost in each others eyes...

Zara zara song was playing in the background...

"Zara zara bahekta hai, mahekta hai

With little temptation, full of fragrance


Aaj to mera tan badan, main pyaasi hoon

today is my body , I am thirsty


Mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein

take me in your arms"

Rads opened her arms widely and d next moment Arjun was in her arms, hugging her tightly...Rain is increasing desires in them,they both closed their eyes,with their bodies pressed against each other,after what seemed like eternity,they broke the hug and he cupped her face and captured her lips gently taking all d time in d world, savouring d sweetness of her Delectable lips,it gradually turned into a passionate kiss.She too responded with equal passion and they kept on kissing and finally broke apart,when they became breathless...

"Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam, door kahin na jaa

Take oath on my life my love, don't go anywhere far


Yeh doori kehti hai paas mere aaja re

these distances are requesting you to come close to me"

Then he hugged her tightly,lifted her up and turned around in circles.Rads stretched her arms,enjoying the rains drenching her completely,after some time he placed her on the ground and pecked her forehead and whispered in her ear,taking her hand and vowing that,"I will always be with u,chahe kuch bhi hojaye,mein tumhe chodkar kahi nahi jaaunga."

Rads also promised him,by placing her hand on his heart,"Mein bhi zindagi bhar,tumhara saath nibhaungi Arjun."He smiled and gently pinched d tip of her nose...she pouted and asked,"tumne mera nose kyun pinch kiya..."

A:Because...it's sooo cute...

R:Accha...toh phir thik hain,and pulled his ears gently...

A faking anger:Tumne yeh kyun kia?

R:Aww...kitna cute lagte ho,jab ghussa karte ho...and giggled...

A also gave in and they both bursted out laughing...

"Yunhi baras baras kaali ghata barse

May the dark clouds keep raining heavily like this


Hum yaar bheeg jaaye is chaahat ki baarish mein

we my love are drained in the rain of love"

It was raining cats and dogs,they both were getting drenched in the rain of love,AJ took her right hand and placed it on his shoulder and caught hold of her left hand,his other hand found it's way to her petite waist,they started dancingto the music of the rhythemic sounds of rain fall and their heartbeats,which they could clearly hear,as they were standing very close to each other...even though it was raining,their proximity and the intimate dance moves are ingniting fire,which is burning their bodies with desire.It was like,"Donon ki chemistry,paani main bhi aag laga rahi hain."After few minutes,they both smiled looking into each other's eyes and headed downstairs,hand in hand...They entered the lift and reached their floor,As they were walking in the passegaway, leading to their room,it was empty,calm and little dark because it was late in the night and all were asleep.

"Meri khuli khuli laton ko suljhaaye

you try to smoothen my open hairlocks


Tu apni ungliyon se main to hoon isi khwaahish mein

with your fingers , that is what I desire"


A opened their room door and they both entered in.Rads took her clothes 4m d wardrobe and went into d washroom to change her clothes.Meanwhile Arjun changed them in d room itself.She came out and grabbed her towel to dry her wet hair.Arjun smirked and went towards her.He then caught hold of her towel.

R:Kya kar rahe ho Arjun,towel do na...

A:No...

R pouting:Kyun...

A:Kyunki,aaj mein tumhare baal pochna chahta hoon...

He made her sit down on the floor,he sat at the corner of the bed and started drying her hair,after that he started caressing her cascading longtresses and ran his fingers through her smooth and silky hair,as though trying to free the knotted hair.Radhu closed her eyes feeling contented.A saw this and smirked,as they were exactly sitting opposite to the mirror and they can clearly see each other's faces.He leaned a bit and whispered in her ear,"Hmmm...seems like my Princess is enjoying it...".Listening it she at once,shot open her eyes and their eyes met and they both got lost.He then winked and she looked down blushing,breaking the eye contact...

A:Koi aaj bahut blushing blushing kar raha hain...

R hitted him playfully:Ab chalo baitho,it's ur turn...

They they changed their positions and now R was drying A's hair with the towel.After she finished it,he dragged her down and they both sat on the floor,facing each other...He leaned in and was about to kiss her,when she gently pushed him and ran from there.She giggled seeing him pouting...it was a rare sight to see,he pouts rarely...looks shooo cute,when he does that..

A:This is not fair...

R:Everything is fair in love and war Mr.Perfect...kuch bhi aasani se nahi milta,u have to earn it by impressing me...

A: Accha...yeh baat hain,theek hain,ab dekho Arjun Mehra ka kamaal...

R:Dekhte hain...

"Sardi ki raaton mein hum soye rahe ek chaadar mein

In the cold nights we sleep together under one sheet


Hum dono tanha ho, na koi bhi rahe is ghar mein

we two should be alone, there shouldn't be anyone at home



Zara zara bahekta hai, mahekta hai
Aaj to mera tan badan, main pyaasi hoon
Mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein

take me in your arms


Aaja re aa re

Come,please do come"

She was standing in the balcony,leaning against d railings,enjoying the feeling of rain drops caressing her face.A got up from the floor and slowly started moving towards her.As soon as she felt his footsteps,coming nearer and nearer,she felt her heart beating fastly,but decided to act normal...

"Yeh tu kya kar rahi hain,abhi se haar manooge toh kaise chalega,come on u can do it."

She then felt,A's breath against her neck and it sent shivers down her spine.Arjun wanted to laugh seeing Rads, trying her best to control herself, but bit his lip to stop d laugh 4m emitting, he enjoyed d the affect he has on her and smirked.He hugged her tightly from behind,placing his chin on her shoulders.

As soon as,she felt her back colliding his chest...she felt weak at her knees,as though she can't resist herself anymore,she just wanted to get lost in the feeling of the wonders his body was creating to her...she controlled her feelings and stood,as though nothing was affecting her...But as soon as he planted a kiss on her shoulders,she turned around to hug him,only to get rooted to the spot,with her jaws dropping down seeing him shirtless,she was checking him out and her eyes were fixated on his well toned body.He slowly bent and started placing wet kisses on her neck.She now lost her control and gave in...Arjun spoke while continuing the kissing session...

A:So Sunshine...did i succeed in impressing you?

R: moaning:hmmm...

A smirking:It seems u became speechless...i must say,i am d best...isn't it?

It took all her energy to let go off him because she wanted to feel more and more of his touch on her body,but she decided to tease him little more,before giving in finally...She somehow composed herself and gently pushed him away and ran into the room.

AJ smiled naughtily:Mein bhi dekhta hoon,kab tak rok paogi khud ko...

He went inside,as soon as she saw him coming towards her,she started stepping backwards and he was stepping forward,her one step back and his one step forward...She crashed against the wall and was now tensed,as there was no way to escape,because AJ was right infront of her,just few inches of gap between them,they both could clearly hear their heart beats.

AJ inched closer and she closed her eyes,expecting a kiss.But,what he did later shocked her...instead of kissing...he moved closer to her ear and whispered,"Ab bolo,aur impress karna hain kya."Rads's eyes shot open as soon as she heard this and saw him grinning.He was about to move away,but she pulled him closer and pecked his lips and released him...

She thought of escaping,but she couldn't because A caged her between his arms,as he placed his arms,on either sides of the wall.A leaned in and kissed her passionately,she too responded wid equal fervor...they kissed till they became breathless,after that they broke apart .

Arjun looked into her eyes,as though seeking permission to continue further,she looked lovingly into his eyes and blinked her eyelids,as though giving him green signal...He then lifted her in his arms and took her to the bed...He took rose petals,that were decorated on the bed and threw them on her,she smiled and pecked his forehead.He made her sit on the bed and sat behind her,unzipping her Salwar and remaining accessories she wore...He also undid his remaining clothes and laid her on the bed and hovered over her, covering them with the duvet...They made love passionately amidst the aroma of the scented candles,soft sensation of rose petals touching their bodies,rhythm of rains mingled wid their erratic heart-beats ...,Then they laid beside each other entwining their fingers...

A:Thank u sooo much for making this day so beautiful Sunshine,i lovvved your surprises...

You are the best...thanks for entering my life baby...'

A:Nah...i have to thank u,for making my life beautiful wid ur love...

Rads placed her head on his chest and he encircled his arms around her shoulders...held her tightly to him...

Awhispered:'My night has become a sunny dawn because of you Sunshine'..."Let's always be merry my dove"[cause as u all know Dove' is the term of endearment for one regarded as pure and gentle,juz like our Rads]...and kissed her hairs...

Rads:Lets always be merry my Love...

She sighed in contentment and snuggled even more closer to him.She felt safe in his arms,as though a caterpillar feels in it's cocoon,in the same way he cocooned her in his arms,they both closed their eyes and fell asleep peacefully and comfortably in each other's embrace.

After enjoying few more amazing dawns and romantic dusks in Shimla,they went back to Mumbai.

Needless to say,this trip brought them even more closer...their bond grew even more stronger.As promised Nesam came to Mumbai to visit ArDhika and after few mnths,ArDhika too went to Delhi to meet Nesam.As time passed by,4 of them became very close frnds.During holidays,all the 4 went together to many trips.Their bond grew stronger wid time.

P.S.So guys, this is my story.Hope u all liked it.Kindly let me know how is it?...will be eagerly waiting for ur comments.

Lots of love...always keep smiling

Edited by priya1101 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing,beautifully written 😊
You are such an awesome writer 🤗
Loved it ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asheley

Amazing,beautifully written 😊

You are such an awesome writer 🤗
Loved it ❤️

Thank u sooo much dear😳
That's so sweet of you🤗
I am glad u liked it.😃😳
Once again thank u❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written 😊 Awesome..loved it 😳
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Originally posted by: raashi246

Beautifully written 😊 Awesome..loved it 😳

Thank u dear🤗
I am glad u liked it😳
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Thank u dear😳

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