SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63

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jey3ram

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

lovely update,...

u made my predictions fail like arjun sleeping in the house,radz going with arjun,...

their phone convo with ankush instead of dadaji...

its really nice dear,...loved ur update,..

Edited by jey3ram - 10 years ago

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: don girls
Awesome update

Thank you for taking your time to leave a comment. It really means a lot! So glad you enjoyed it 😃

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iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: lovv
hope u r feeling better now

i really liked it a lot...nice update...
i thought arjun vl go to d movie at last...bt u made it so good vth his n nandhu's dialogs b4 gng to bed...so nandhu started her plan ...

dat phone call to arjun by radhika n their banter was good...

z it like original, trapping sam...i am guessing it bcz next nandhu's call, sam z gng vth arjun...

i really like radhika "he z missing a screw" and other dialogs abt arjun lol...

i expected, at last minute radhika vl go vth arjun...bt u made dat also too good...

already arjun knws wat radhika thinks, n hope after sam's conversation he wanted to talk to radhika...

lol..atlast radhika used her bhai, insted of dadaji dialog...

i totally liked ardhika conversation

Yes, I am feeling much better now. Had some really bad sinus pressure and sinus headache. There weather is changing here as autumn is coming and generally a large change in pressure tends to set my sinuses off.

You are very perceptive lovv I know the story has been dragging a little everyone wants to start seeing the romance and what Nandini is up to so I started dropping clues and hints of what is to come...I'll try to pick up the pace and bring in the romance and dramatics 😆

I am so glad you liked the phone banter...it took me the longest time to write that scene...that and Sam and Arjun's scene..trying to decide just how much personal information the characters should know about each other at this point. What it means when they say things or do not say things hence the title Khamoshiyan 😕

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: esprit_00

glad you are feeling better!!

This chapter was really awesome!! I loved it absolutely. The little details... and phone conversation was perfectly written. Now you have me pondering on Banjara! 😊

Sadly, I am down with sinus too ... my head feels like it weighs a ton

Sinus colds suck 😆 my ears pop and the nose pressure drives me insane...can't really look at the TV, cell phone, or computer for periods of long time as it bothers my eyes and worsens my headache.

The phone conversation was hard to write for me. I confess I wrote some of that scene with my eyes closed cause the laptop screen was bothering me but I was bored just sitting at home staring at nothing.

I hope you feel better soon. I heard masaala chai is good for clearing up the sinuses

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Aishwarza1
Oh no I'm already hungry for the next chappy! Lovely chapter & extremely sweet ArDhika convo! Can't wait for more 😳 keep up the amazing work. You are a talented writer 👏

Thanks for taking the time to comment. It means a lot. So glad you enjoyed the chapter 😃

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iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: jey3ram
lovely update,...
u made my predictions fail like arjun sleeping in the house,radz going with arjun,...

their phone convo with ankush instead of dadaji...

its really nice dear,...loved ur update,..

Thanks for taking the time to comment. I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter 😃

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lovv

@lovv

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Yes, I am feeling much better now. Had some really bad sinus pressure and sinus headache. There weather is changing here as autumn is coming and generally a large change in pressure tends to set my sinuses off.

You are very perceptive lovv I know the story has been dragging a little everyone wants to start seeing the romance and what Nandini is up to so I started dropping clues and hints of what is to come...I'll try to pick up the pace and bring in the romance and dramatics 😆

I am so glad you liked the phone banter...it took me the longest time to write that scene...that and Sam and Arjun's scene..trying to decide just how much personal information the characters should know about each other at this point. What it means when they say things or do not say things hence the title Khamoshiyan 😕

nice to know u r feeling better...yes masala chai works...n black pepper hot soup too works...

haan yaar, i think too much...cant help it...

i really liked both d phone conversaitions of ardhika...u did a great job vth dat...

i liked ardhika conversation as well as arjun-sam conversation too...their both target z radhika apart from their work...its nice...n neil-radhika dialogs also nice...

its not like i dnt like ardhika romantic scenes...bt i am really ok vth d pace u r gng...i am ok if u write more gang or ardhika banter or little fights...i am even ok vth nandhu-arjun-neil trio also...

haan yaar i actually thought of d title, n got doubt, wen both of them i mean ardhika spoke n showed concern, n nesam already talking all d waking hours...so y khamoshiyan...then i cam to conclusion dat...arjun z not totally opeded up, n few important things/turns already started silently like arjun's feeling, nandhu's plan...so may b dats y d title...

thanks for d explanation...

looking forward to read d next update...take care of ur health first then abt updates...enjoy ur time...