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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Oh my God... U left me in 😒😭 girl..
Awesome story and the last two parts are so touchy.. No one believes her, poor Radz.. Hope all this made her rise above the odds..
Update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: -Enigmatic-

Ohh god i'm dead here it self
I was crying while reading 😭😭
*Heart Broken* 🥺
Very graceful writing 👏👏👏
Pls pls update nxt part. I don't have patience now ...😭



Updating yaar.. Sorry for making u cry...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Heart breaking parts Divya💔

I cried while reading these parts😭



Me too... While writing it...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

I am numb..I am so so sooo angry at evry1..😡And i dint evn realise wn tears started falling from da corner of my eyes..
Dis is so heartwrenching..
Can I just ask for one thing aftr u r done wid Radhika suffering more..?PLZ PLZ MK ALL OF DM SUFFER LIKE ANYTHING!!!ALL OF DM!!!!🤢
I dnt know Y I hv a feeling Radhika has a twin or something..Or were da pics photoshopped..?😕Do updt soon plz..I want to read more already..
Nd thank u for da pm!🤗



Aww... Thank you yaar.. Glad that my words could portray the emotions properly..
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Originally posted by: taahir004

That was sad yet it was soulful
really awesome



Thank you so much..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: love_never_dies

Oh my God... U left me in 😒😭 girl..

Awesome story and the last two parts are so touchy.. No one believes her, poor Radz.. Hope all this made her rise above the odds..
Update soon..



Wait for the tables to turn yaar.. I'll take proper revenge for each one of ours tears...
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Ok with this chapter we'll come to an end of the present persona of Radhika. The Radhika you'll see next is the one born from the ashes of the old one. Lets see how much I can make you love her...

WARNING:

This chappy is gonna make you cry again...

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Chapter 4a :

A sudden splash of water make her open her eyes, with urgency. She suddenly tries to grasp as much air possible for her lungs, as if the next second, she will be devoid of oxygen. She's panting hard, as if she was running from hours.

Tut.. tut tu tut... She looked above to see Nandini di standing there with Saral.. Wait a minute Saral.. Did I saw Saral.. SARAL?!?!

Looking at the pure shock and horror filled face of Radhika, they couldn't help but burst into laughter..

Sar: "Did I shocked you Radhu?!?!"

Radhika is still looking at him with confused face, how come he's here?? How did I get here?? No, the first ques should be, where the heck am i??

She remembered herself coming out of the place. That place where she lost everything she's not going to forget this marriage hall. She looked behind to see the huge, board hanging at the entrance of the hall MANGLAM HALL'. Huh, Manglam?? Not for me...

She walked in the road, with barely any energy to drag herself. She was walking like a dead has been rose from its corpse. But the irony is, she's also dead, but in the search of her corpse. She's a living dead. What more worse could happen to her???

Well she shouldn't have thought so!!!!!!!! Bcoz the very next second she was grabbed by few people, and was pushed in a vehicle. It seemed like a car, but who cares. Kidnapping in Hyundai or Mercedes, it will remain a Kidnapping.

A hankey was pressed against her nose, a very tangy smell comes from it. She tried to resist but couldn't stop the darkness to engulf her in its embrace.

And the next her eyes got opened and here she sees the devils. Great!!! So those were the beast of death, specially brought a car to bring her to the HELL. She don't need this.

A voice broke her reverie.

Na: "Radhika.. Someone has came to meet you. We'll talk later..", saying this they went outside the door, leaving her alone in the darkness with only a bulb lighting the whole space.

Radhika, looked around to see if she recognise the place. It's a semi dark room, with green paint on the wall. There's nothing but a stool a bed side table, attached to the bed, she's sitting in.. WAIT... No no, correction.. She's tied in. Now it is giving the proper feeling of being kidnapped.

The door creaked open, and she saw Sam entering the room, in her bridal lehenga. Her forhead was adorned with Sindoor, and Mangalsutra hanging around her neck. Radhika has no doubt that Sam, and Arjun must have gotten married. A tear drops from her eyes.

Sam: "What happened Radhika?? Sad??? Your plan failed to snatch away MY Arjun. Now he's MINE. Forever and Ever. No one can separate us."

Ignoring her words, Radhika said to Sam, "Sam, look you know that I didn't slept with that man. Pls believe me. Those photos are farce. Nandini Di lied to you. Saral has joined hands with her. I saw him. Pls believe me . I didn't did that."

Sam: "I believe you. I believe those photos are not true."

Radhika suddenly saw a ray of hope. Hope that everything could get fine. But her bleeding heart which she's holding tightly, have a more deep crack, after listening to her next words.

Sam: "I know this coz, I photoshoped those pictures. You see, I have learned so much from Idiot, and it is one of my talents.."

Radhika sat numb, without knowing how to react, while Sam continued ... "I don't know whether you slept with him or not, whether this child is his or not. But this is your punishment. Punishment for trying to snatch my love, punishment for ditching my friendship, punishment for selling our presentation to our rivals, punishment for trying to destroy my mother's dreams, punishment for every game you have played on us. PUNISHMENT. Punishment with INTEREST."

By the time Sam finished Radhika felt like blood is flowing through her eyes instead of tears. But Sam wasn't done yet.

She throws a bundle of money on her face, and said with loathing, "Go and get your abortion done. Kill that pathetic shit of flesh and blood you're carrying in your womb. Or if you couldn't then give me a call, I'll like to do the honour."

She started leaving, and Radhika panicked, "No... NO... Sam don't go.. Sam don't leave me here Sam... Sam you were my friend pls... Sam I didn't did anything... Help me Sam pls..."

Sam while walking can still hear her voice coming from the room, and last she heard was a shout SAAAM, and then she stepped out of the last door.

3 hours later...

Saral and Nandini opened the door to see Radhika sitting in the same way they left her, with more swollen eyes and dried tears marks on her cheeks.

Na: "Oh, dear. I truly pity you.. So much torment, and pain for just being a good person. You know Radhika, nowadays people don't value good people. You should have been a little bad too. Sad, that you weren't. But your main fault is you dare to cross my path, and see what destruction I caused. You shouldn't have. You shouldn't..", she said all the while roaming all around Radhika.

Sar: "But didi, everyone are satisfied here. But what about me??? You see, I always have many fantasies about me and Radhu... What about those???", he said with the most innocent face he could make.

As soon as he completed his sentence, Radhika looked at him with horror in her face. As if lightining has strucked her. She started struggling against those ropes, with continuous murmurings of "No.. no.."

Ignoring her Nandini went towards Saral, and said, "Oh!! Is it?? Well being an elder sister I should fulfil you every wish. So its done. You will complete your every fantasy today.."

SEE BELOW...

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Chapter 4b:

Sar: "Really di?? But you see I don't want to force her into it. I don't want to RAPE a girl."

Na: "Aww. Such a kind soul... See Radhika..", she said while holding Saral's chin with her fingers.

Na: "Ok then, this will not be any force love making. But Radhika will willingly let you do everything to her. She won't even stop you, even if she couldn't take you anymore."

Radhilka see her with confusion. What is going on in her mind... Then Nandini turned towards her, and bend herself in an angle that she's just few inches away from her. "But just don't take her very hard. She's pregnant with my Arjun's child."

Radhika gasped out loud. She knows. She knows about it??? How did she came to know??? Nobody knew..

Without prior warning, Nandini injected a syringe in her arms. Radhika winced, and then looked at her. She doesn't know what is this, but it is not giving her any good vibes. She wanted to ask her but only a light voice came from her mouth.

Na: "See it started to show its effects. Have a good time sweetheart.", saying this she went out of the room locking it from outside.

Sar : "Oh, Radhu... Believe me, you're going to enjoy every bit of it. This drug you're injected with will stop your body cells from functioning for few hours. None of your body cells will obey your brain's commands. You will be just lying there enjoying me for the whole night.", he was saying all the while undressing himself.

Sa: "You love light don't you?? So, I'll enjoy you and all the while the light will remain on.", saying this he climbed on the bed with only his pants on. He un tied her and she slides on the bed like a sack. She wanna push him, but she could only move her fingers. She wanted to scream, but only a moan came out of her mouth.

Whereas Saral has already started his job. He settles her in the bed and ripped her clothes off her body. Soon she's lying all naked in front of him, and she can't even do anything to cover herself. She saw him, touching her with his eyes first, then his filthy hands, and then his mouth and tongue.

She saw everything happening to her, and she's lying there helplessly. She saw him, kissing her mouth and the whole face, she saw him pressing her mounds with his hands, taking it into his mouth, she saw him pressing her stomach roughly, as if trying to kill her child inside, she saw him touching and fingering her private parts. And finally she saw him taking her, and fulfilling his fantasies in every way.

All through the night, he took her body for many times, and savaged her soul. And all she could do was shedding silent tears and making a light fist of her fingers. She's being brutally raped, her soul is screaming in torment, but her body couldn't react. This wouldn't termed as rape, as she wouldn't be able to prove it. Even the medical test will show, there's no resistance from her side. He's careful enough not to leave any love bites on her body. But what about the scratches and gushes on her soul.

By the time, he took her for the last time, Radhika lost the last ray of light, which could take her away from the darkness. She was left behind forever in the darkness. Once the lover of LIGHT, is now the forever resident of DARKNESS.

Saral left her after satisfying his desires. He has taken her in every way he ever wanted, and now she's nothing but a piece of meat for him.

He left her the same way, naked, on the bed, with no clothes upon her to cover her body. He left the room after throwing a new set of clothes on the bed by her side.

After few hours in the morning, Nandini entered the room with a tray of breakfast in her hands, and saw Radhika in a sitting position. She sitting with her knees drawn closer to her chest, and her face buried in it. She imagined her still crying over her fate.

Na: "Ooo, Radhika. Are you hurt??? Are you hungry?? See I have brought fruits for u.. Have it. Its good in pregnancy. Your child will be healthy then.", she said with a smirk on her face.

That's when, Radhika raised her head above. There are no tears in her eyes, but just a blank face. But as soon as her eyes get locked with Nandini's the smirk on her face got wiped off. She knows what it means. In her desperation to destroy Radhika, she just gifted a new Nandini to the world. And this time, the main culprit is her.

She left from there in hurry and forgot to lock the door. After an hour, a men of hers informed her that Radhika ran away from there and they couldn't find her.

Saral just shrugged his shoulders nonchalantly, and said, "Good, now she'll be gone, and suicide. End of the story."

Na: "I don't think so Saral. Today I saw darkness in Radhika's eyes. A very very deep darkness.", she said with pure worry etched in her face.

Sa : "So what?? This is what you wanted right??? So what's the problem??"

Nandini rose from her place and went towards the window, from where she could see the storm coming. She said, "It was not the darkness which engulfs the beholder in itself, instead it's the darkness of a raging storm. The darkness behind which the dangerous and the lurking storm is hiding. The darkness which will not get satisfied with only Radhika, but will want lot more to satisfy itself. We should be scared of that darkness Saral, as it could be as deadly and evil as possible."

Just then a huge thunder roared in the sky, and the darkness engulfs the whole place... NOW is the time for DARKNESS. The future is very dark for everyone...

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Next chapter will bring a much needed leap in the story. And Radhika will be back with BANG. Hope the chappy makes you cry the same way it did to my bestie after reading it..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL



Updating yaar.. Sorry for making u cry...


part was heart touching that automatically tears came in my eyes. 😭 you wrote so beautifully which left me numb. Angry on every1 specially on arjun 😡 what kind of man is he ? 😡 did he do timepass with radz 🤢 he deserves sam
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Originally posted by: -Enigmatic-


part was heart touching that automatically tears came in my eyes. 😭 you wrote so beautifully which left me numb. Angry on every1 specially on arjun 😡 what kind of man is he ? 😡 did he do timepass with radz 🤢 he deserves sam



Uh.. hun... That fattu man deserves no one... He should stay with his NANDU ONLY..

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