Realisation: An Aradhika Os (completed in pg1)

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Ok ppl let me 1st introduce myself 2 u ppl... I'm Sapna... n here I would like 2 continue d story from d point where arjun leaves radz alone in a deserted place... ok let me stop my bak bak n start d story...
Arjun entered d room with Radhika's bag n mobile in his hand... He starts having flashes of Radhika advising him n trying to help him...
Arjun's POV: OMG... What's wrong with me... I have 2 b planning abt getting Sam back in completing my revenge.. But y is this gal all over my thoughts.. I think I should call sam...

Arjun tries calling Sam n finds out Sam has swittiched off her mobile... He then decides 2 sleep n sort everything out in the morning...

On his bed, Arjun is tossing n turning unable 2 sleep with only 1 thought in his mind... Thought abt d way he treated Radhika n her tears... unable to control his feelings Arjun wakes up takes his car keys n runs 2 wards the car..he feels bad as it starts raining n thinks "Oh wht is this now... I just hope nothing would hav happened 2 her n I hope she's not getting wet.." Arjun reaches d place n is unable 2 find Radhika... He screamed 4 radhika everywhere but is unable 2 find her...

Since it was just drizzling Arjun finds few footsteps going into d jungle n decides to follow dem... After walking a little he hears Radhika screaming n runs towards d sound... he finds d sound cuming out from a house n breaks open d door... He finds a man trying 2 misbehave with Radhika... He directly goes n hits the man black n blue... n lifts the crying Radhika who hugs him tightly... He makes Radhika sit in the car who is still weeping...

Arjun starts d car...
Arjun's POV: How d hell could that man do tis 2 my Radhika... My Radhika! What's wrong with me... but I would hav surely killed him if Radhika wasn't in this position... My 1 wrong move has hurt her soo much D bubbly n talkative jhalli looks soo scared... I hope I make her alrite...

They reach d lodge n Arjun opens d door puts his arms around d scared Radhika n takes her towards the room... Then he takes his extra pair of tshirt from his bag along with his track pants n asks radhika 2 wear dem.. since radhika ws nt in her senses she just does as 2 wht arjun says n goes 2 d bath room 2 change... in d meanwhile arjun just changes himself into his tracks n wears no shirt as he gave away his shirt 2 radhika... a shivering radhika comes out...

Arjun's POV: I just hope I can make her alright... she looks so pale bt aw see looks so hot with diz loose clothes of mine.. What did I say just now... HOT... I must hav lost it...

Arjun asks Radhika 2 sleep on d bed n he himself goes on d couch 2 sleep.. After sometime he watches that Radhika is yet shivering he decides 2 go beside her...

He turns Radhika n says "Don't worry.. I'm here" n hugs Radhika... Arjun feels something passing through him when he hugs Radhika... Radhika who ws not in her senses doesnot realise how close she is 2 arjun but feels protected n hugs him back n rests her head on his chest n sleeps... Arjun looks at her n thinks I'll never hurt u Radhika... I hav realized in my idea of revenge I hav hurted u a lot though I hav started feeling for u but my mom"nandhini" is also important 2 me... I really don't know what 2 do... I just can't stop myself from taking this revenge coz my mom died coz of dem n dozes off 2 sleep..

TO B CONTINUED... scroll down for the continuation...

P.S: So ppl howz this... should I continue... hope u ppl liked it... Plz like n comment... evn tamatars are welcomed...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cont..
In d morning Radhika wakes up n is shocked 2 see herself hugging Arjun n her head on his bare chest... she gets up n starts screaming... Arjun places his hand on Radhika's mouth n asks what's wrong with u.. Radhika remembers all that happened d previous nite n a lone tear escapes from her eyes... Watching this Arjun's heart aches... but he gains strength n asks her if u r okay now plz change back 2 ur cloths... I had kept dem out n dey must hav dried by now...

Radhika thought how khadoos can a person be.. it ws all bcoz of him n couldnt even apologise... n gets into d bathroom 2 change..

Radhika's POV: I Think even I troubled him a lot... But he's not a bad person... he saved me... he could hav taken advantage of me.. he didn't even do tat... I think I should behave properly with him n ask him 2 forgive me...

Meanwhile... Arjun thinks of finding out wht exactly is kept in Radhika's bag n is shocked 2 see a girls photo with his Mom "Nandhini"..

Arjun's POV : Isn't this gal the same gal whom Nandhini mom showed 2 me n told me she'll make me her's forever by making me marry this gal... Oh no... how does Radhika have this photo how is she related 2 her... I have 2 find out...

Radhika comes out of the bathroom n sees arjun sitting on the bed.. She goes near him and says Thank u Sir...
Arjun replies "it's ok Radhika... But tell me 1 thing, who is this girl..."
Radhika replies "Sir, this is me n the other 1 is my father's younger sister... My aunt... She loves me a lot.. But I lost her when I was very young... n starts weeping..."
Arjun hugs Radhika n says that is y u r like my Nandhini mom... n that is y I'm attracted 2 u... Radhika sorry for hurting u... but now I feel u deserve 2 know the truth...
Radhika doesn't resiprocate 2 d hug but is dumb struck.. She then withdraws herself from d hug n asks so u r chotu... d boy my aunt ws going 2 adopt... Arjun nods...
Radhika hugs him in says my aunt told u were sweet n ul take really nice care of me... but u... u were arrogant... Which is the real u??
Arjun tells Radhika d whole truth abt Samrat n says he's here 2 get justice 2 his mother...
Radhika says "but d 1 who's getting more hurt in this process is u arjun... N sam.. what did she do... she's innocent... hurting her will not make aunty happy... I think it's better v leave this revenge thing off... n forgive every1... Sometimes forgiveness is much better than revenge as it keeps us contended..."

N ya I hav more rights on my Aunty ok.. n she would never want revenge...
Arjun looks at her with a angry face n tells "ok no REVENGE... BUT I HAVE MORE RIGHTS.. COZ SHE'S MY MOM.."
N both start having a pillow fight n fall on d bed tired... Radhika tells I think v should tell Sam the truth abt her dad n also abt our relationship... V can't go forward till Sam moves on.. coz u r d reason behind her misery...
Arjun hugs Radhika n tells my cute little jhalli... I'm gonna marry u no matter what... I'll make Sam understand n vl b 2gether gal... N kisses her on the forehead...
Both of dem get contented n leave back 2 Mumbai... with d realization of d love for each other n the reason they were meant 2 be... they also realised they were incomplete without each other...
They were now ready 2 face everything in life 2gether...
This realisation brought the positive side of arjun n nandhini's chotu back... The chotu whom Radhika loved... n d jhalli whom Arjun loved...

THE END...

P.S : SO HOWZ IT GUYS... UR OPINION MATTERS A LOT.. PLZ DO LIKE N COMMENT IF U ALL WANT ME 2 WRITE SOME MORE STORIES...

Edited by sapnapari - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey there, im just gonna res. i'll come back and read it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bila_a

hey there, im just gonna res. i'll come back and read it


Sure... no problem...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good !! Although I feel Arjun should get on his knees and apologize.! But nice OS :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: apoorvaarnav

Good !! Although I feel Arjun should get on his knees and apologize.! But nice OS :)


😆 when I write my next story... I'll see 2 it tat arjun gets on his knees n apologises...
Thanks.. 😳
Posted: 10 years ago
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It was an awesome OS. Me too wanted Arjun to beg for her forgiveness but its okay after all we got our ardhika at last.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The story is gud...nyc concept. ..bt it ws too fast track...I know its an os bt it wud hv been expressed bttr in an ff...
just a suggestion. ..
bt still...great work. .!!!! 🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmegha

It was an awesome OS. Me too wanted Arjun to beg for her forgiveness but its okay after all we got our ardhika at last.


Sure.. thanks...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ky2fan01

The story is gud...nyc concept. ..bt it ws too fast track...I know its an os bt it wud hv been expressed bttr in an ff...
just a suggestion. ..
bt still...great work. .!!!! 🥱


Ya... I thought of making it a ss bt den I had no tym. .. so thought 2 make a fast paced os... nxt tym will try 2 make it bttr. .. thanks 4 ur feedback.. 😳

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