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Tanusri Sarkar

@shravanfan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Yeah, finished finally, it was so long, I never thought this plot will be so long to execute. But I am glad I did it. Pat myself in back. I hope you will like it.

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Tanusri Sarkar

@shravanfan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

I now realise i did lots of mistake. Sorry i was typing too fast

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shinelove

@shinelove

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Hey it was awesome. ..loved neil ..great writing ..great story...👏

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Hey nice.. Love it.. hmm

Even I read some post referring neil as girly or whatever it was . But I don't think it is true. Although every one have their point of view. Even I used to hate crying , chipku typo men but neil is no way like that. He is caring and soft. He knows the value of relations.. And is a guy who knows how to make people happy. He is a sunshine and who ever has him is a lucky person. I love neil aka Sharavan reddy ... He is one fabulous actor...

Nice One shot..

Dee

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@sherlockthor

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

After a LONGGG time i am reading something which is actually not a cliched story..!

I have lots of issues when people call others manly girly..etc.. And statements like "Mard Ban" ..Ladki ki tarah mat bano.." chudiya pehena".. I mean what the hell ..! People think calling someone a woman is an insult! NO ITS NOT..! If i were a guy and if someone called me a woman i would be happy .. Its an honour..!!

I just love your Story... and i just love neil's character..He smile is infectious..he is a beautiful person inside out.. his sense of style is different.. excellent..!!

And i really started respecting and admiring shravan after splitsvilla because, in that not once did he make any sexist remark like others..he always was fair and best part was he supported jaqueline( who was little plump) when others were all mocking her...!

I just loved your story ..wonderful.. my brother is like neil in your story..and we all admire his sensitivity and courage and thoughtfulness...

Insulting a guy like neil , just shows people's sick mentality!!

excellent story

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Tanusri Sarkar

@shravanfan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

@apoovaarnav. I am realy glad you like this story. I was really scared to post it. Really didnt know how peoples are going to take it. Then i thought its reality. I know a very sweet person from my school. Even teachers never leave taunting him. Sexiest really does matter. Do you remember the way other guys of splitsvilla behaved with shravan. As because he is introvert and soft spoken they used to call him names like the queen, janani, worat. I never understood what they were trying to prove by those comment. That men are superior than females. They just never realised that not only they were insulting shravan but also insulting woman species in national television. And yeah neil and shravan are always best.

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582445

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Hei dear 1st of all very well written OS .. it's different and it's touchy

you brought a very significant point here

As per my personal opinion, I prefer guys who has the guts of showing their tears .. there is nothing wrong in it .. pain without expression can be harmful for a person and people around him/ her - gender really doesn't make any change

I have been once bashed by a friend as I said I respect a soldier just the way I respect a teacher .. no more no less .. however, my opinion is still the same .. & I am not ashamed or scared to say I will any day pick a man with color and brush in hand over a man with gun .. not that I don't like them, but I prefer people who creates and not destroys

Neil's father in your story is simply a sadist to me .. I just can't believe people can be like this .. and all this because of that bullshit .. mard ko dard nahi hota .. for me only corpse and inert matters don't feel pain .. a strong human will never be ashamed to accept that he/she is in pain

Edited by SayaneeH.Lecter - 10 years ago

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ElMystique

@ElMystique

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Tanu *gives a virtual tight hug**

Firstly loved the concept .I admire/Love/fall for the guys who are HUMAN which often people refer to as girly ..I hate generic and sexist comments .So talking of smiling , being social ,helping your mom, sorting out household tasks and having an interest in Arts are quite natural for any human being .So there is nothing called girly or being manly the words should rather be being responsible and nice .Love you Tanu for writing this . Shouting, passing lame comments ,Unnecessary show off are some traits shown by attention seekers and that definitely is "not" Manly or so called Cool besides I always believe being Humble and compassionate are greatest virtues .

As I have mentioned before I hate generic/sexist comments .How can one call someone gay/girly ? Being a gay is not something to be looked down at or for that case a girl aswell.I donot understand why the society takes it as an offence besides I donot encourage such comments .This is exactly the reason behind Gender inequality .It would be great if one could find a word to describe about what exactly their issue is about the other person than calling a gay or girl .