FF:Pyara pyar (new)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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*Pyara pyar*

Hello everyone… I am Ayesha a new fan of Doli saja ke…I love reading fan fictions and also writing them. So far I've been a silent member and during that time I've seen and waited for a ff but there wasn't any so I decided to write my own. Hope you'll enjoy it.. Plus this story starts from the day when Anupuma got married to Daksh.

Daksh singhgania: A handsome guy who is a ladies man. Inside his heart he is a sweet heart and has recently gotten married to a widow named Anupuma for a reason.

Anupuma: A beautiful sweet girl… She is very light hearted person and had gotten married to a guy named Daksh who she doesn't love but respects a lot. This is her second marriage as her first husband died.

These two are the main characters of the story and some new characters will also be added…..

HERE IT GOES….

Daksh turned the handle of the door and entered a beautifully decorated bedroom with roses on the wall, bouquets of red and pink roses, candles, ect…. Daskh closed the door behind. A bride who was sitting with her knees against her chest who wrapped the arms around them with the ghugat over her face, felt the shivers inside as she sensed her life partners footsteps approach towards the bed. Daksh sat down on the bed beside Anupuma and put his hand on her shoulder. Anupuma shrugged so Daksh took it off…

Dak- Ummm Anu woh...

Anu sighed..

Dak- Anu kya mein tumhara gungat hata suktha hoon.

Anu felt as if she just skipped a heart beat but she nodded. Daksh smiled and blushed as he removed her gungat. Daksh noticed how scared Anu looked.

Dak- Anu don't worry mein kuch nahi kurne wala bus tumhe kuch batana chatha hoon.

Anu- ( confused) Kya?

Dak- Actually pata nahi mein yeah kasie kahoon per…

Suddenly there was knock on the door… They both turned to look towards the door.

Dak- Yeah kon hai jo humhe iss waqt disturb kur raha hai.

Anu looked relived but when Daksh said that she gave him a weird look. He stood back up and walked over to the door, he opened the door and there stood Meera. Daksh was surprised to see her there.

Dak- Bhabi app…???

Meera- Sorry beta mein tum dono ko iss waqt disturb nahi kurna chati thi per pata nahi mein yeah kasie kahoon.

Dak- Booliyeah na..

Meera- Woh muchje abhi yaad aya ke humare ghar mein ravaj hai ke dulha dulhaan shaadi ki pheli raat mein ek kamre mein nahi rahe sukthe.

Daksh raised his eye brow while Anu who was listening again felt relived.

Dak- So what's the big deal?? I don't care..

Anupuma was shocked to hear this…

Precap: Daksh sneaks back where Anupuma is staying….

So that's it for now. I will only continue this ff if I get more then 5 comments. So please do comment and I really hope you liked it…

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow 👏!!! Would love to read more 😛.
Edited by bhakti_kansara - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey great chapter.
Please do continue it... 😳

Anjali
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really nyc!!...m glad sme1 took the initiative of strting a ff.....i love readin them bt m not so good at creation of one :) 👏
plzz do continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz continue.....i luv them and want more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhakti_kansara

Wow 👏!!! Would love to read more 😛.

thanx a ton.. Will surely continue soon😃

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