Now its my turn!!!!!

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Now I have time to write how Chait will come back in DSK.😃

"If you don't marry Dashak, then it means you never forgave me," Vikram said sadly. "For me, only for me…marry Dashak," once again, Vikram pleaded, clasping his hands together in front of Anu in a supplicate manner. "No, Papa," Anu grasped her father's hands and said, " If this marriage will make you happy, then I'll marry Dashak". Both father and daughter hug as tears fill there eyes.

Showing a very enhancing wedding. The decorations are splendid, and the scene is breathtaking. After all the Rasmey, Anu is taken to her room, which has been garlanded with beautiful flowers. Dashak looks very handsome in his shirwani, as he enters the room, full of joy. He sits on the bed, near Anu, and said:

"How lucky am I? I got the girl that I fell in love with, " while saying this, he tries to touch her chin, but Anu jumps out of the way. Dashak sighs dejectedly, "So, your heart still hasn't accepted me. Someone forced you into marrying me". Anu starts crying at his last statement, making Dashak traumatized. "Please don't cry. I don't want to force you on a decision you don't want to make. I'll wait until you can accept me as your husband. Until then, we're still going to stay as husband and wife in other people's view, but in this room, we'll just be good friends," after saying this he takes a pillow, and goes over to sleep on the sofa (just like Chaitanya did all those times).

The next morning, Dashak takes Anu downstairs to introduce her to his family members. The whole day, he shows his love for Anu in diverse ways. The whole family gushes at Anu, believing her to be so lucky to have a such a loving husband. Anu feels mortified whenever she sees Dashak showering his love for her.

After a few days, while Dashak is sleeping on the sofa, Anu silently asks for forgiveness. "I know how much you love me, and I'm not carrying out my Patni Dharam. My heart isn't giving me the permission to go near you. What should I do?," she thinks things over in her head, and comes up with an idea. She decides to go to Maa (god) at the mandir and ask for help. After this decision, she falls into a captivate sleep.

The following day, they show the mandir of Maa. There is a large tree off to the side, and under it is a man in black kamiz shalwar, with a black shawl draped over him. He has a small beard, and hair long enough to reach his shoulders. He's staring at something in the sky, his eyes wide open and glassy. At a close up, we see that it is none other than Chaitanya. There are a lot of noises jammed up inside his head, and even though he can't hear them clearly, he can still distinguish the different sounds. They were voices of Sharta ji, Inderjeet, Padmani, Maya, and the Pandit. Then they zoom in on his eye, and you see pictures in a photographic image of negatives. There are pictures of his relatives, and then a picture of a beautiful bride. Even though we know that it is Anu, Chaitanya doesn't. As her picture forms in his mind, Chaitanya takes out ghungaroos. He wears them on his legs and his wrists, and starts to dance, (here we see Amit's amazing dancing skills). In the background we have the song YAAD DAADEE ISHAQ ATISH LAEHAI---

He dances and dances until his feet and wrists start to bleed, and people around him frantically drag Chaitanya under the tree, where he lays unconscious. As this is going on Anu arrives at the mandir. During her puja to Maa, Anu implores for strength to complete her Patni Dharam. After the puja, she gives pershat to everyone. Amongst the hands, she notices one with a black sleeve. She puts the pershat on his palm, and moves on without a second glance, then stops, as her feelings demand her to look at that person's face. She turns around, but is too late, as the man had already left. She sees the man's back as he saunters away, and turns around to question the pandit on this matter.

"That man came here a few days ago. We don't know from where, he won't tell us, in fact he won't even talk to anyone. He's probably a malang. My son and I have to stuff food and water into his mouth so that he won't starve, he doesn't care about himself at all," the pandit explained. " Sometimes he puts on his ghunaroos and starts to dance fanatically, we have no idea why. And today…" said the pandit, befuddled " you are the first person he ever took pershat from, or else he wouldn't even come here. That man doesn't like being near a lot of people. Which is why he always stays under a tree, all alone".

Anu thanked the pandit and left the mandir. However, she was very queasy after leaving. The man dressed in black walking away, kept flashing before her eyes. Even Dashak noticed her uncomfortable appearance when she got home. He asked if anything was wrong, but Anu doesn't reply. Her mind is troubled, and she doesn't sleep that night.

The next morning, after Dashak has left, Anu gets ready and goes to the mandir again. The whole way all she could think about were the pundit's words. "He stays under a tree". When she enters the mandit, her eyes automatically start searching under all the trees. Walking by every tree, she finally reaches one where a man dressed in black is slouched under. She slowly approaches him…

(to be continued)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow....so far it's really good and is very interesting..nice..good work......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Keep going Samia. Good work. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW very good scripts. I can't wait to read more.

Thanks
Anna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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YAY Chetanya gonna come back but when?? the week of 4 and 11 januaryy??
Shahee ra!!!...can someone telle me?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaheera21

YAY Chetanya gonna come back but when?? the week of 4 and 11 januaryy??
Shahee ra!!!...can someone telle me?

ohh chetanya is not going to come back...it's samia imagination....she come up with a story ...i hope u get it😛.

saima u r mindblowing👏👏👏...i love ur story i'll wait for the next part...waisay can u plzzzzzz post it soon.😃😉

brillliant work👏

Edited by cutegirln - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice...but that means Anu can't go to him since she's married 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really good and hope that they do bring him back
Edited by tumhari? - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aishakool, attitute(Neeru), anna, tumhari, thank you very much for appreciating the story. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutegirln

ohh chetanya is not going to come back...it's samia imagination....she come up with a story ...i hope u get it😛.

saima u r mindblowing👏👏👏...i love ur story i'll wait for the next part...waisay can u plzzzzzz post it soon.😃😉

brillliant work👏

Thanks for clearing shaheera's misunderstanding, and thanks for your compliments. 😃

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