Rantara SS Tere Sang Yaara... (Discontinued) A Big Sorry to Readers..

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Shivangi

@shivi808

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev
Golu,congrats for another story 👏
Nice start,short sweet n simple 😃
Is that guy Raghu?
Joh bhi hai caring hai,mujhey rantara ki woh jungle scene yaad aa gayee 😃
Missing rantara a lot 😭
Anyways,I won't be around from tomorrow but I'll comment when I come back 😃
Lovely story,keep waiting darling ⭐️
Love n hugs
~Sanju~

Pta Ni kon h ye ldka... U hve to wait na di... 😃
Same here.. Mujhey bhi aajkal RANTARA Ki bdi yaad aari h
I know that aap ghummi ghummi krney gye Ho... 😉
Enjoy the trip didu!! Full too masti krney ka.. 😃
Lubb you too didu... 😳
Hugss to u too... 🤗

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Surbhi

@surbhi53

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shivi808

Ldkey burey Ni hotey.. Acha ji!! Tujhey bdi knowledge h..
Tera wala helping h lgta h kaafi!! 😉
Mr. A... Main to naam bhi bhool gyi uska.. Btaiyo zra???
Dubara Mili tu?? Sorry for the POL KHOL..😆

Bdw thank you for your sweet comment babes!!! 😳
Lubb yaa!!! 😳

Abe vo helping to bht h n caring b... but kbhi kbhi nkhre dikhta h...😭😉

Pr mai b km ni hu... kaam krwa hi leti hu...😆😛

N April me mili thi...😕

Lubb u to jaanu...❤️ n lots of hugs🤗

Edited by surbhi53 - 9 years ago

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Andrea D'Souza (Andy)

@RaNtara4vr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wow yaar... 😊..a very good concept with equally good story-depiction by you..👏...Hats-off yaar...so the baby writer of the forum is back...😃...Congrats once again...

koi baat nahi...jab pichle story ke kuch ideas aaye toh update kardena......

n wat do u mean by romance kam hoga n Dosti jyaada hogi...🤔...i wud want it to be in equal amounts...but then its ur story toh jo aap ki marzi...😳...

waiting for the next update...tc...n tfs...❤️...🤗...

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Shivangi

@shivi808

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: BabyHimavari
its such a different and refreshing concept to read...😳
This genre is totally new to this forum... and i would love to read this..❤️
I never believe the fact that larka larki kabhi dost nahin ho sakte... infact they can be the bestest freind ever... and so i am looking forward to read it... all the best..👍🏼

Thank you so much di for this amazing comment.. 😊
Yeah ofcourse even I believe that a girl and boy can be the bestest friends ever...👍🏼
Love u... Mwwaahh!! 😳

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Shivangi

@shivi808

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Komali14

Hey shivu..😃
Congrats for new story..⭐️
I liked title.. It's from your fav song right?😉
Friendship ki story hai.. I like it..😃
Woh pic main joh cute n sweet boy hai woh ground floor flat wala new boy hii haina?😉
Park main roz looking n smiling hoti hai jogging ke saath saath nice..😆
Glass piece scene ne toh jungle scene yaad dila diya yaar..😭 Rantara ki yaadein taaza hogayi..
Pura update was mast ji..⭐️
Cont soon sweetie..😃
Thanks for pm golu..😊
Love ya🤗

Yeah!! This is my favourite song di... 😃
Vo cute boy kon h for that u hve to read the story di... 😉
That jungle track was my favourite di.. Yaad aati h RANTARA ki 😭
thanks for such a lovely comment di...😃

Will continue asap.. 😃
Luv u too diduu!!! 😳
Mwwwaaahhh!!! 😳

Edited by shivi808 - 9 years ago

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Shivangi

@shivi808

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr
Wow yaar... 😊..a very good concept with equally good story-depiction by you..👏...Hats-off yaar...so the baby writer of the forum is back...😃...Congrats once again...
koi baat nahi...jab pichle story ke kuch ideas aaye toh update kardena......

n wat do u mean by romance kam hoga n Dosti jyaada hogi...🤔...i wud want it to be in equal amounts...but then its ur story toh jo aap ki marzi...😳...

waiting for the next update...tc...n tfs...❤️...🤗...

Thank u so much for this beautiful comment... 😃
Actually romance kam wala line se I meant Ki Vo kya h na main romance likhney Mein weak hoon...
But I can write theek thaak for Friendship.. 😆
Okay I'll try to put them in equal amounts... 😃
Aap bhi aisey hi pyarey comments detey rahiyega...
Luv you. Di... (u r di to me... I guess!! 😕) ❤️ 😳

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Shivangi

@shivi808

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

CHAPTER - 2

She took rest for few days. She usually had a habit of sitting on the Jhoola of her balcony and to look around. From her balcony she always noticed him busy in his laptop. He asked her daily about her legby shouting from ground floor. One day he was busy with his laptop with full sincerity when she thought of a mischief. Her maid left few ice cubes in her table. She picked one of them & very carefully with full concentration she threw two of them in such a way so that they will land directly in his shirt. And it happened. He instantly shouted..
Godd!!!! Abey ye kya hai??? Itnaa cool cool... 😕
But as he felt wet he understood that they were ice cubes. He thought with confused face...
Par yeee aaya kahan sey??
That's when he heard someone laughing hard. He raised his head to see who the person was. But when he saw Antara laughing he forget everything and just smiled. He got mesmerized while seeing her laughing. She was hell cute and naughty girl.
You did this???
She nodded and again laughed.😆
You know what.. You are very Naughty. But anyways Thank you. Mujhey literally bohot garmi lag ri thi...

Acha!! Toh I will throw few more... 😉

Nooo!!!!!! I also have these in my refrigerator.. Okay!!

Gussa toh Ni ho na???

Naahh!! Today I am very happy. Toh I won't be angry.. 😃

Both of them smiled and he went inside. She was still looking somewhere when he again appeared with a flash.. And said...
But I am definitely going to take a revenge.. Remember that.. 😉

We will see
And they went inside. 😃

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Antara used to come her home by scooty but when I was gone for service then she has to manage by Metro and from there by Auto-Rickshaw. But seems like today luck wasn't in her favour. There wasn't a single Auto visible to her. It was already 8:30. She sat on a bench of bus stand and kept waiting for next half an hour. Then only she suddenly realized that it was a strike of autowallas in Delhi.

COLOR=MAGENTA]Ohhh nooo!!! Yaar mujhey pehley kyun Ni yaad aya abt this. Ab yahan sey to paidal( by feet) bhi bohot dur ho jayega. Kam se kam do ghantey. Aur raat KO 9:30 k baad toh is sheher Mein vsy bhi safe Ni h on a lonely road. Arghhh!!! Bhagwaan ji this is not done yaar. Please help Kr do na...[/COLOR]

She started to walk on lonely road. Not a single person was there. She was bit scared too. Then a car crossed her with full speed. She was busy in her phone when she realised that car stopped halfway and came back to stop besides her only. She thought

Phail Gaya Raiytaa... Hey bhagwan ji please help me 😭
Nothing was visible to her coz the car window was covered with something. She thought to avoid that and started to walk in fast pace. The car also gained the same speed and when she stopped it also stopped. It happened several times. She was scared yet pretended to be strong. She turned with full confidence and went near to the car. She knocked the window.
Oye hello!! O bhaisaab kya dikkat hai tumhari??
But no reply came..
Kyun follow Kr Rey ho?? Kuch kaam Ni hai kya?? Velley( free) ho kya??
No reply.
Stop following me or else I will call the cops.
Saying this she went to her way but again same thing happened. Now this was enough for her. She bursted with full anger.
Teri tohh!!!Ruk ja tu... 😡
And she dialled 100 number to call cops. And suddenly she heard a known voice.
Hey stop!! Wait a minute miss
She turned to find none other than the same guy. She got confused seeing him. But angry at the same time. She thought him to be a decent guy but he...
Tumm!!! You're following me... Par..
Hey no kintu parantu.. Just cut the call first. Varna main to free Mein jail chala jaaunga...
Oh!! Haan... Ohkay she cut the call.
Thanks finally 😊
Leave this thanks. Just tell me why were u doing that.. 😡
Doing what?? Following you??
EXACTLY
Arey I was just teasing you. Nothing serious. Don't get me wrong haan... Vo tumney kal ice cube Dali thi na to bss badla le Ra tha...thoda Sa darana tha bss 😉
Dubara mat krna... It scared me.. Thoda Sa...
Both of them passed a genuine smile to each other.
Acha chalo I am going home. Lift de deta hoon. Vsey itna late yahan ksey???
Arey I didn't get Auto & I totally forgot that it was strike Today.. To bss isiliye
Oh! Ohkay.. Chalo
She sat in his car. He started the car but it didn't work.
Ab isko kya ho gya yaar
He came out of the car and saw that the tyre was punctured on the side where Antara was sitting. She also came out and asked
Kya Hua?
Tumhara weight kitna hai?
Ye ksa sawal hai? 54 kgs.. Kyu
Fir bhi tyre puncture ho gya..strange 😲
Ohh!!!
But then she realised what he said. She raised her brow..
What do u mean ye mere weight sey.. 😡
Arey nahi nahi!! Tumhara weight is perfect. Zyada hota toh possibility hoti na. But now question is Ki ab kya karein?
Mera to dimaag kharab ho Ra h.. Yahan dur dur tk koi cheenti (ant) bhi nazar Ni aa rahi.
She said while loom'g towards the sky. Raghu laughed heavily as she said this. She got irritated and asked
Tum is condition Mein bhi hass rahey ho!! Have u lost ur mind??
Ni Vo actually.. Ab agar tum aasmaan Mein dekh k cheenti dhoondogi to kahan sey milegi. 😆
She got what he was saying and what she did a moment back. She passed an irritating smile to him.
Mujhey toh bohot tension ho ri h aur Dar bhi lg Ra hai..
Hey!! NO FEAR, WHEN I AM HERE... 😃
She recalled that her bestie used to say this dialogue. What a coincidence. She was again lost in thoughts. Meanwhile he saw a boy and had a conversation with him.
Acha suno!!
Seeing her lost he moved his hand in front of her and her trance broke.
H..haan
Kahan kho jati ho baar baar...vo ek ldka bheja h mainey. Mechanic ko Lata hoga Vo.. Tb tk wait kr letey hain
Parr...
Don't worry. U re safe and secure with me. Main ACHEY GHAR KA SEEDHA SAADHA SHAREEF LADKA HOON (he said dramatically)
Antara smiled and said
Vo baat Ni hai... Actually ghar par koi Ni hota h toh...
She didn't even complete her sentence when he took out his cell and dialled a number. As she heard him her eyes widened
Hello guard bhaiyya! Vo 1062 flat no. hai na.. Uska dhyaan rakhiyega thoda.. Madam aaj shayad late aayengi
He cut the call after few minutes.. And turned towards her.
Lo!! Done 😃
Antara was kept looking at him. How can someone be so caring and so helping. They don't even know each other's name. Fir bhi. bilkul anjaan hai Vo, fir bhi na jaaney kyun apna Sa lagta hai.. aakhir kaun hai Vo mera???
SabKuch!!
She was left shocked as she heard him...

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This was it... Mera bhi done.
Pta ni kya likha hai but jo bhi hai bss yahi hai... 🤢
Umeed hai aap sabhi jhel sakein...😉
Please avoid grammatical mistakes. Waiting for your valuable comments now.

Yours and only yours
SHIVI

Edited by shivi808 - 9 years ago

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SymphonyStar

@SymphonyStar

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Mast Update 👏.Oho Antara ki badmaashiyan 😉..Balcony jula scene masta.Fayda kar diya us ladke ka use garmi lag rahi thi toh use thanda thanda cool cool kara diya. 😆.Yeh Antara hamesha musibat mein pad jaati hai par koi gal nahi jee yeh dost hain naa sab sambhal leta hai.Antara ko dara diya thodi der k liye kya badla liya.Apni Antara bhi kam nahi par 100 dial karna janti hai.Yeh ladka Raghu hi haiin na Antara ka bestie.Yeh itna caring guy ⭐️.Antara purane khayalon mein kho jati hai 😭.Are Antara woh tere paas bhi hai woh tere saath bhi hai 😊 bas mehsoos karne ki zaroorat hai.

Edited by SymphonyStar - 9 years ago