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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: RANTARA.akya

Wow..
Really nice..
Shivu ji.. 😉


Thank u so mch my Yara.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: jollygrl

@Sanju Di__ thank u so mch di..
Ur comments mean a lot 😊
Love uhh too di!!😳


Mwaaah! To your DP 😆 Bahut hii cute hai ji
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Chapter 2

Raghu POV: I made her school bag ready and asked her to have her breakfast. I moved towards my cupboard & took out a shirt for me. But then I heard her shouting Nahii..!!.. Not this. I raised a brow & asked- So!! which one?? She came to me & made me to stand in the corner & started to observe my shirts carefully. I was just smiling on her cute pose. She was continuously tapping her chin with her index finger. Then I heard her - Mil gaya.. She stretched out a Blue... No actually its.. What The.. This Shirt!!!! Yeah!! She took out a Royal Blue Shirt. I was shocked. But her next set of words left me numb for a second. She turned & gave it to me while saying - Wear this. Ye apko suit karta hain and its my favourite colour na!! When she didn't get a reply from me, she asked - Arey papa!! what happened?? pehno na.. I took that from her with shaking hands & wore that and turned to show that to her, but she has already rushed downstairs. Just then a voice echoed in my mind - "Royal blue shirt suit karta hain tumhe aur fir ye mera favourite bhi toh hain". I whispered - Just like you.

Then I heard her calling. I replied - Coming Riu. As I reached the breakfast table, she smiled and ran to me. She sat on my lap & kissed my cheeks 'My cutie papa.. Riu loves you very much. Still keeping her in my lap I replied - My bachcha papa loves you too.. Now can we have breakfast as we are getting late?? Yeah.. We had breakfast & then I drove to her school. Both of us were standing outside the car. I bent on my knees & asked her - After school you have to come where?? She replied smiling - To Adi chachu's hotel. Yups & I'll be in the canteen for you. ok?? She nodded in yes. Then I turned after bidding her bye. I had taken just few steps when I heard her shouting- Papa... I turned immediately & asked- What happened?? Forget anything?? She ran to me & I took her in my arms. She buried her face in my chest & this worried me even more. I again asked her with a concern 'Kya huwa mere bachche ko.. need something?? But she nodded in no. But still she didn't say a word.

I touched her temple to check if she was having fever or something but no, her body temperature was almost ok. I was hell confused. "Kya huwa beta? Don't you tell it to your dear papa.. haann?? She raised her head & whispered in my ear - HAPPY BIRTHDAY PAPA.. My eyes shot open. I twitched my neck to see her face. She then burst out laughing & said while laughing - papa you got scared na.. hehe.. Riu scared papa.. hehe.. & I was like Gosh!! this girl, she almost stopped my heartbeat. Aur main apna hi birthday bhool gaya. Of course I forgot yaar.. These days work load is too much to remember anything. She was still laughing. I also joined her. I was happy because my princess was happy. Then I joined my forehead with hers & said - Toh Riu ko yaad tha papa ka birthday haann?? She nodded her head innocently - hmm.. I asked - So!! papa ka gift kahan hain?? She replied mischievously - In the evening, when we'll go to Mc Donalds. There I'll give you your gift. I rubbed her nose with mine & tickled her a bit. She giggled. I put her down & she went to her school.

Precap: He fell down on the bench with a thud. I lost my princess forever?? What'll I do without her?? Tears came out of his eyes.

Edited by jollygrl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Shivu Darling superb update...par precap padhke main darr gayee...riu thik toh hain na...i love riu...raghu ke cheeks pull karnewalon...main toh cheek pull karne main time waste nahi karungi...i will give him a sweet kissy...muahhh
Edited by Rasika9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Very nice shivi darling 👏
I love it when there's kids in the story 😃
I fell in love with papa daughter bonding here ⭐️
Precap ne mujhey darah diya... 😕
Can't wait to read more,please continue when you have time 😃
And shivi darling,it was very well written 👏
Hats off ji! Keep writing and keep smiling 😃
Love and huggies,
Sanju 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
wow raghu and ria's bonding is just out of the world...
ria is so cute, i wanna pull her chicks...😃...she reminds him of her......

the birthday wishing scene was so good... riu scared her pappa... she got some special gift for him MC-Donalad... wonder whats it...😛

waiting to know...

on the whole its a very cute a heart warming chapter... loved every beat of it while reading...❤️

such a warmth this father-daughter bonding has...😃

u r improoving day by day... keep writing...⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Love u for this cutie, cutie update🤗

Meri Riu darling yani Lady Amitabh felt like pulling Riu's cheeks par I feel like pulling Raghu's cheeks😳😳😳 Kitna pyaara hain vo. DDEJ main toh white shirt pehenkar killer look deraha tha aur yaha Royal Blue shirt. Haaye jaanleva hain Raghu ki har ada😉😉😉

Riu tune Raghu ko daradiya?😆😆😆 Koi birthday wish aisa karta hain?😆😆😆 Mc Donald main party👏👏👏 Main toh chali party attend karne. 🥳 Jinhe mere saath aana ho vo aasakta hain😆😆😆

HAPPY BIRTHDAY RAGHU🤗

Kitna pyaara sa rishta hain Raghu aur Riu ka. 😃😃😃 Muwaah to both of them🤗

Aww kya huwa Riu ko? 😲😲😲 Raghu toh pehle se hi toot chukha hain. Uske liye uski Riu hi sabkuch hain. Usse kuch hogaya toh Raghu toh bikhar jaayega😭😭😭 I hope Riu teek ho😭😭😭

Edited by Nethravathi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
@nethra...
Nethu draling tu raghu kee chicks pull kar aur main ria kaa chiks pull kar ti hoon...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

@nethra...
Nethu draling tu raghu kee chicks pull kar aur main ria kaa chiks pull kar ti hoon...😆

Main toh kabki taiyaar baiti hoon Raghu ke cheeks pull karne keliye tu hi late hain😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Rasika9

Shivu Darling superb update...par precap padhke main darr gayee...riu thik toh hain na...i love riu...raghu ke cheeks pull karnewalon...main toh cheek pull karne main time waste nahi karungi...i will give him a sweet kissy...muahhh

Hey bhagwan😲😲😲 I think I have to call Jiju😆😆😆

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