Chapter 38:~*~DREAMY~*~......thats wat it felt while reading it initially...( d shayari lines r included too...π...)...
Pehle toh Raghu k sapne mein Antu ka aana...aur ab Antu k sapno mein Raghu...π³...
though she cudn't see his face...but d whole scenario gave a thrill n goosebumps n happy-happy soothing-calm feeling to all...ππΌ...
d way he caught her n said JAAN...haayeee...( maar dala re...)...β€οΈ...such an elevating experience...βΊοΈ...
i know d PROMO scenes r etched in u...π...n e 1 v get to live it wen u portray it...Thank uuu...so sooo much...its not possible to describe its worth...π...
Antu saw something else than d nightmares she used to have...4 d 1st time since d death of her family...probably suggesting that a new dawn/ life is awaiting her...π...
just like d scene aftr she caught d ball...making Raghu OUT...π...π...π³......
...d sun setting---color change scenario...ππΌ...from blood red to bright yellow sunshine...like indicating from death to new awaiting life...π
but she shoved away the thoughts n is focusing on her aim...π³...tho d dream brought some pleasant vibes with it...which is reflecting on her face...π...
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Raghu is going out with Mai...π..n staying away from his Miss Kaul is troubling him...π³...π...he wanted to c her b4 leaving...n he got it...π......
he was observing n trying to get d meaning of her expressions...π€...from smiling to frowning...π²... n keeping a straight face...π€..
he was happy seeing her pleasant as she stepped out...π...n confused π by her changing expressions wen she saw Mai n den him...β...
...he kept looking at her from d rear view mirror...as long as she was visible to him......π...
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so Sattu is back on his feet...π€‘...π€’...π·......π€ͺ...
n d
Precap...seems like Eve-teasing issue...ur going to deal...just like some of d social issues u higlight thru ur story...π...π...π³
Waiting 4 d upcoming encounters n d unraveling of d story...π......
...wonder how u'll depict dem ...π€...i have imagined some parts tooo...but i shall give my version after urs......i think it wud b better dat way,,,π...
Continue n Keep writing...π€...π...( yeah if u want it i can PM u...but i dont think u'll b needing it...π...π...)...
All d best...ππΌ... Yedi Behna n tc...β€οΈ...as always loved it...d update...d banner...d lines...dialogues...scenes...everything...c ya ...π...π...Superstar...βοΈ...ur one of a kind dear...Unique ...sweet n xxxtraaa special...Riuuu...
lots of love...β€οΈ...π€....
Edited by RaNtara4vr - 10 years ago