Chapter 38:~*~DREAMY~*~......thats wat it felt while reading it initially...( d shayari lines r included too...๐...)...
Pehle toh Raghu k sapne mein Antu ka aana...aur ab Antu k sapno mein Raghu...๐ณ...
though she cudn't see his face...but d whole scenario gave a thrill n goosebumps n happy-happy soothing-calm feeling to all...๐๐ผ...
d way he caught her n said JAAN...haayeee...( maar dala re...)...โค๏ธ...such an elevating experience...โบ๏ธ...
i know d PROMO scenes r etched in u...๐...n e 1 v get to live it wen u portray it...Thank uuu...so sooo much...its not possible to describe its worth...๐...
Antu saw something else than d nightmares she used to have...4 d 1st time since d death of her family...probably suggesting that a new dawn/ life is awaiting her...๐...
just like d scene aftr she caught d ball...making Raghu OUT...๐...๐...๐ณ......
...d sun setting---color change scenario...๐๐ผ...from blood red to bright yellow sunshine...like indicating from death to new awaiting life...๐
but she shoved away the thoughts n is focusing on her aim...๐ณ...tho d dream brought some pleasant vibes with it...which is reflecting on her face...๐...
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Raghu is going out with Mai...๐..n staying away from his Miss Kaul is troubling him...๐ณ...๐...he wanted to c her b4 leaving...n he got it...๐......
he was observing n trying to get d meaning of her expressions...๐ค...from smiling to frowning...๐ฒ... n keeping a straight face...๐ค..
he was happy seeing her pleasant as she stepped out...๐...n confused ๐ by her changing expressions wen she saw Mai n den him...โ...
...he kept looking at her from d rear view mirror...as long as she was visible to him......๐...
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so Sattu is back on his feet...๐คก...๐คข...๐ท......๐คช...
n d
Precap...seems like Eve-teasing issue...ur going to deal...just like some of d social issues u higlight thru ur story...๐...๐...๐ณ
Waiting 4 d upcoming encounters n d unraveling of d story...๐......
...wonder how u'll depict dem ...๐ค...i have imagined some parts tooo...but i shall give my version after urs......i think it wud b better dat way,,,๐...
Continue n Keep writing...๐ค...๐...( yeah if u want it i can PM u...but i dont think u'll b needing it...๐...๐...)...
All d best...๐๐ผ... Yedi Behna n tc...โค๏ธ...as always loved it...d update...d banner...d lines...dialogues...scenes...everything...c ya ...๐...๐...Superstar...โญ๏ธ...ur one of a kind dear...Unique ...sweet n xxxtraaa special...Riuuu...
lots of love...โค๏ธ...๐ค....
Edited by RaNtara4vr - 10 years ago