Chapter 38:~*~DREAMY~*~......thats wat it felt while reading it initially...( d shayari lines r included too...😊...)...
Pehle toh Raghu k sapne mein Antu ka aana...aur ab Antu k sapno mein Raghu...😳...
though she cudn't see his face...but d whole scenario gave a thrill n goosebumps n happy-happy soothing-calm feeling to all...👍🏼...
d way he caught her n said JAAN...haayeee...( maar dala re...)...❤️...such an elevating experience...☺️...
i know d PROMO scenes r etched in u...😊...n e 1 v get to live it wen u portray it...Thank uuu...so sooo much...its not possible to describe its worth...👏...
Antu saw something else than d nightmares she used to have...4 d 1st time since d death of her family...probably suggesting that a new dawn/ life is awaiting her...😊...
just like d scene aftr she caught d ball...making Raghu OUT...😊...😉...😳......
...d sun setting---color change scenario...👍🏼...from blood red to bright yellow sunshine...like indicating from death to new awaiting life...😊
but she shoved away the thoughts n is focusing on her aim...😳...tho d dream brought some pleasant vibes with it...which is reflecting on her face...😊...
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Raghu is going out with Mai...😔..n staying away from his Miss Kaul is troubling him...😳...😉...he wanted to c her b4 leaving...n he got it...😊......
he was observing n trying to get d meaning of her expressions...🤓...from smiling to frowning...😲... n keeping a straight face...🤔..
he was happy seeing her pleasant as she stepped out...😊...n confused 😕 by her changing expressions wen she saw Mai n den him...❓...
...he kept looking at her from d rear view mirror...as long as she was visible to him......😊...
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so Sattu is back on his feet...🤡...🤢...🐷......🤪...
n d
Precap...seems like Eve-teasing issue...ur going to deal...just like some of d social issues u higlight thru ur story...😊...😃...😳
Waiting 4 d upcoming encounters n d unraveling of d story...😎......
...wonder how u'll depict dem ...🤔...i have imagined some parts tooo...but i shall give my version after urs......i think it wud b better dat way,,,😃...
Continue n Keep writing...🤗...😊...( yeah if u want it i can PM u...but i dont think u'll b needing it...😛...😆...)...
All d best...👍🏼... Yedi Behna n tc...❤️...as always loved it...d update...d banner...d lines...dialogues...scenes...everything...c ya ...😃...😊...Superstar...⭐️...ur one of a kind dear...Unique ...sweet n xxxtraaa special...Riuuu...
lots of love...❤️...🤗....
Edited by RaNtara4vr - 10 years ago