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Posted: 10 years ago
Riyuuu jaan, mar dala Hume apne toa ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Antara pov full of breath-taking romance
Really tumne promo Ki yaar dila di, wow ๐Ÿ‘
Antu ko face bhi jald dekh jayega ๐Ÿ˜‰
Raghu our Raghu, sad hai bichara ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Apni jaan ko nahi dekh payega pure din ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Antu smirked looking at dayan ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Antu ke pass kohi plan hai matlab ๐Ÿ˜‰
We will see in ur next update ๐Ÿ˜†
Update soon yaar ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Waiting eagerly ๐Ÿ˜‰
Keep smiling ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love u โค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..
Riu..
Rwlly nice..
Antra s dream was so beautiful..are yedi WO yeda hai..
So beautiful..
Love u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 38:
~*~DREAMY~*~......thats wat it felt while reading it initially...( d shayari lines r included too...๐Ÿ˜Š...)...

Pehle toh Raghu k sapne mein Antu ka aana...aur ab Antu k sapno mein Raghu...๐Ÿ˜ณ...

though she cudn't see his face...but d whole scenario gave a thrill n goosebumps n happy-happy soothing-calm feeling to all...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

d way he caught her n said JAAN...haayeee...( maar dala re...)...โค๏ธ...such an elevating experience...โ˜บ๏ธ...

i know d PROMO scenes r etched in u...๐Ÿ˜Š...n e 1 v get to live it wen u portray it...Thank uuu...so sooo much...its not possible to describe its worth...๐Ÿ‘...

Antu saw something else than d nightmares she used to have...4 d 1st time since d death of her family...probably suggesting that a new dawn/ life is awaiting her...๐Ÿ˜Š...

just like d scene aftr she caught d ball...making Raghu OUT...๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜ณ......

...d sun setting---color change scenario...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...from blood red to bright yellow sunshine...like indicating from death to new awaiting life...๐Ÿ˜Š

but she shoved away the thoughts n is focusing on her aim...๐Ÿ˜ณ...tho d dream brought some pleasant vibes with it...which is reflecting on her face...๐Ÿ˜Š...

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Raghu is going out with Mai...๐Ÿ˜”..n staying away from his Miss Kaul is troubling him...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜‰...he wanted to c her b4 leaving...n he got it...๐Ÿ˜Š......

he was observing n trying to get d meaning of her expressions...๐Ÿค“...from smiling to frowning...๐Ÿ˜ฒ... n keeping a straight face...๐Ÿค”..

he was happy seeing her pleasant as she stepped out...๐Ÿ˜Š...n confused ๐Ÿ˜• by her changing expressions wen she saw Mai n den him...โ“...
...he kept looking at her from d rear view mirror...as long as she was visible to him......๐Ÿ˜Š...

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so Sattu is back on his feet...๐Ÿคก...๐Ÿคข...๐Ÿท......๐Ÿคช...


n d Precap...seems like Eve-teasing issue...ur going to deal...just like some of d social issues u higlight thru ur story...๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Waiting 4 d upcoming encounters n d unraveling of d story...๐Ÿ˜Ž......

...wonder how u'll depict dem ...๐Ÿค”...i have imagined some parts tooo...but i shall give my version after urs......i think it wud b better dat way,,,๐Ÿ˜ƒ...

Continue n Keep writing...๐Ÿค—...๐Ÿ˜Š...( yeah if u want it i can PM u...but i dont think u'll b needing it...๐Ÿ˜›...๐Ÿ˜†...)...

All d best...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ... Yedi Behna n tc...โค๏ธ...as always loved it...d update...d banner...d lines...dialogues...scenes...everything...c ya ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿ˜Š...Superstar...โญ๏ธ...ur one of a kind dear...Unique ...sweet n xxxtraaa special...Riuuu...

lots of love...โค๏ธ...๐Ÿค—....



Edited by RaNtara4vr - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heya Riya...
read all your chapters...
the story is at cliff at present...
i read all the chapters from the previous thread...
excited to read more..
do pm me...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasika9

raghu sapno main to raj karne lage...ab dil ko bhi jaldi hi jeet jaoge...riu the dream sequence was beautiful...

antu sapno kaun tha...tumhe pata nahi...hum to jaan gayere par...
for 1st time antu ne angry look nahi diya...kya baat hain...yeh tulip to sach mein angels hain...
jiyo mere laal riu Darling... love uuu


Thank you di...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks again di๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

again a mind boggling update๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ...and .i don know why u almost every time write beneath ur update that the update is not that good ...ohh dear leave it to the readers ...we all are here to read ur story in the most passionate way we can...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

u know i loooved the dream of ANtara ...ohhh infact reading the dream itself made me smile and made me happy ...the dream was so sooo good...
so Antu doesnt know whao the guy was upon her ...hahah
we all know who was that ...
Yup... i alreday knew that everyone among you will understand who was with antu in her dream๐Ÿ˜†... It was not at all surprising for me as i know u guys really well. Actually the dream symbolizes antara's current state of mind. the thought of revenge and suffer has darkened her mind so that she couldn't see the true face of love. Her happiness is just some steps away from her but she can't see him as she closed her heart and cut every emotional bond...
Riyu khanahi padega๐Ÿ˜ณ u hv drawn the feeling of having the right man upon a girl so beautifully ...so subtly and so magnificently ...loved it completely
Acha jii...๐Ÿ˜†... pata nahin maine kya likha hain... real life mein pyar kaisa hota hain yee too mujhe pata nahin... aaj tak koi mila too nahin mujhe๐Ÿ˜†... But haan... i just felt like when you are with the person who is meant for you and who is right for you then every girl shuld feel just like antara felt here... remeber during sajda you told me something which i always remeber...๐Ÿ˜†... "A boy express his love by touching the girl often cause they are more comfortable in that way"... your these sentence really impressed me that time..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†... and yes going through that aspect... when you are with the right man with your life... his every gesture should make you feel compassionate, comfortable... it should feel right in each and every way... his touch would raise your heartbeat as well as comforting your soul... when he wrapped around his arms around you should feel like its your home... and thats what i conveyed here... nothing else...
choro ji... pata nhin kya bak rahi hoon..๐Ÿ˜†

it was a change when Raghu saw Antara 's changes facial expression while leaving

he wven understood that she had a wrong feeling for mai

hmmm Raghu ko sab pata chal ja raha hai ...thats good he understands her so minutely

waiting for the next part again as usual
here Pampy is thirsty ...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†



thanks for lovely reply.๐Ÿ˜ณ.. Love you๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Oh my my! What a fabulous update! โญ๏ธ
Banner par toh mera Jaan atka fir Antara ka out of this world wala dream ๐Ÿ˜ณ
May toh balle balle Karney lagi update parke [:D/]
Ria madam tu toh chaa gayee yaar ๐Ÿ‘
You know what? I'll write some more later,kiyuki after reading this update may toh speechless hogayee re baba!
Tareef ke liye words kam par rahe hai ๐Ÿ˜›
Fantastic!
Fabulous!
Wonderful!
Beautiful!
Mind blowing!
Superb!
Breathtaking!
Amazing!
Etc etc etc!!!!! Ayyo merey toh saans fhoolney lagay! ๐Ÿ˜†
May chai pani pikar aati Hun fir style me comment maarungi ๐Ÿ˜†
Chaltey chaltey take a bow,and hats off for a khoobsurat update ๐Ÿ‘
To be continued... ๐Ÿ˜‰


arey baap re sanju baba... aap koo itna acha laga?!!๐Ÿคช.. main too hayran hoo gayi...๐Ÿ˜†
BTW thanks and lots of loves..๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Lo ji may fir aagaye pakane๐Ÿ˜†
I remembered something when Raghu stopped his jeep and sattu's cycle also stopped.
I imagined Raghu saying this:-
"chal reh bey Dhakkan! baju hoja hawan andeh..satak le batak le .. nahi toh kopche me kharcha pani milegah! Chal katle s***a khajoor!
Apun warn karle ra hai, bheja nayi khane ka apun pehle si hi bot hirele kyaa ๐Ÿ˜†
Iss se pahlay apun ka khopri garam ho, kisak le

Ye mujhey Rajeev ne seekhaya ๐Ÿ˜†
Kaysa tha?


Yee dialouge sun kee apun too hil gaya ree baba...๐Ÿคฃ

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